6Bars

House Cats

Due Date: 7/17/09

*Dead Silence The Veteran And My Fellow Moderator Came Out Of A Long Retirement Participated In The 1st Week of BL And Suffered a Pretty Wicked KO To The Hands Of ReCkinAll Since He's Been Laying Low From Battling. Bones One Of The Newest Additions To BL Is Also New To Illest And Is Just Getting His Bearings As a Battler. Will The Veteran Wake Up And Be Over To Overthrow The NewComer? You Be The Judge You Saw What Happened Between Teflon n Tre Tru Haha Stay Tuned*

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ill smash this fool like a bag of bricks//
injury this clown like a new fag with dicks//

This dood isnt on my level,im something out of this world//
tone down ur treble,bump up the bass to satisfy ya girl//

crush 60 OF YA BONES and leave u lifeless//
destroy all 50 of ya clones as i type this//

Ha this kid must be crazy trying to tame this beast//
i use MC's like u for a snack and u think just one is a feast//

That means ur poor, u cant afford a damn thing in your life//
BANG BANG like the 5-0 at ya door,or when i'm strangling ur wife//

Half ass verse,and i still haven't left my stable//
because to beat me u gotta be mental unstable//

Give him another week i wanna see him respond

my bad im not around the computer a lot but i got u my dude look for me on tuesday aight gotta stry for thi college final

-- Tue Jul 21, 2009 4:14 pm --

Another wack rapper to send to the "grave yard"/-"BONES!"

can i get a moment of silence to remember this "brave heart".../-'ha!"

all bark with no bite, swimmin for your life, aginst a shark/

hes the type to "askjeeves" for a punch line then have it "bookmarked"/-'sad..."

ya heart beatin more pussy then "ron jeremy" with out the nuts and the fame/

no wounder why you in the closet "dead silence'in" through out this game/-'woow'

how can you have a "silentcer shootin blanks" and claim u a beast/

what, u a "x-men" now? huh, yeah more like a "jiggly puff" turned elite.../-damn!

you tried try to succeed and compeat with no grudges/

nothin personal cuzzin but u can stop doin "toe touches"/ha

wrote ya 6 bars with punches no harder then crunches/

get'cha weight up homie tell mom to pack "mustle milk"in ya lunches/"BONES"

Fin-
Dead silence...,door closes."Applause"lol

-^6BoNeS0^-


Grave yard- made my name part of the scene
Brave heart- the movie
Askjeeves- the web site
Bookmark- bookmarked favs'
Ron Jeremy- porn star
Dead Silence- his name used three times,respects,R-kelly,silencer
Silencer with blanks- idk seemed funny and made sence
X-men- the beast
Poke'mon- jiggly puff's powers
Toe touches- the movie pride... with the swimmers kinda brought it back to the top with it to keep it together.

You Decide

Dead Silence:

ill smash this fool like a bag of bricks//
injury this clown like a new fag with dicks//
-Weak Opener....2/5

This dood isnt on my level,im something out of this world//
tone down ur treble,bump up the bass to satisfy ya girl//
-Not Hittin at all...1/5

crush 60 OF YA BONES and leave u lifeless//
destroy all 50 of ya clones as i type this//
Ok attempt but still kinda weak...3/5

Ha this kid must be crazy trying to tame this beast//
i use MC's like u for a snack and u think just one is a feast//
-Weak Line...2/5

That means ur poor, u cant afford a damn thing in your life//
BANG BANG like the 5-0 at ya door,or when i'm strangling ur wife//
-Another Weak Bar my man wtf...3/5

Half ass verse,and i still haven't left my stable//
because to beat me u gotta be mental unstable//
-Very Weak Closer Man...2/5



Overall:13/30

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-6BoNeS0-:

Another wack rapper to send to the "grave yard"/
can i get a moment of "silence" to remember this "brave heart"/
-Weak Opener but better then DS's...3/5

all bark with no bite, swimmin for your life, against a shark/
hes the type to "askjeeves" for a punch line then have it "bookmarked"/"sad"
-Ok...3/5

ya heart beatin more pussy then "ron jeremy" with out the nuts and the fame/
no wounder why you in the closet "dead silence'in" through out this game/'wow'
-Line not to crazy but nameplay picked it up...3/5

how can you have a "silentcer shootin blanks" and claim u a beast/
what, u a "x-men" now? huh, yeah more like a "jiggly puff" turned elite.../damn!
-Ok Line but pokemon punches are played...3/5

you tried try to succeed and compeat with no grudges/
nothin personal cuzzin but u can stop doin "toe touches"/ha
-Ok could have been better...3/5

wrote ya 6 bars with punches no harder then crunches/
get'cha weight up homie tell mom to pack "mustle milk"in ya lunches/
-Weak Closer...2/5


Overall:17/30





Ok this battle was very weak and had no really hard hittin lines but in the long run Bones delivered alittle more punches and just seemed like he tried harder then Dead Silence did...




V/6BoNeS0

DS
ill smash this fool like a bag of bricks//
injury this clown like a new fag with dicks//
ok this didn't make since and lost flow check your wording man like injuring instead of injury and plus weak punch 2/5
This dood isnt on my level,im something out of this world//
tone down ur treble,bump up the bass to satisfy ya girl//
this didn't even punch but it flowed a little 1/5
crush 60 OF YA BONES and leave u lifeless//
destroy all 50 of ya clones as i type this//
ok you went at his name in this bar but wasn't a strong punch and it flowed 3/5
Ha this kid must be crazy trying to tame this beast//
i use MC's like u for a snack and u think just one is a feast//
ok another filler at least it flowed tho 1/5
That means ur poor, u cant afford a damn thing in your life//
BANG BANG like the 5-0 at ya door,or when i'm strangling ur wife//
ok when you strangle someone does that cause a bang bang now?? nice flow tho 2/5
Half ass verse,and i still haven't left my stable//
because to beat me u gotta be mental unstable//
ok another one that you shoulda spell checked and you would have had a better flow in this bar but again no punch 1/5

total 10/30 ok to be real this verse was weak as hell ive read your past verses and youve came harder than this man you slept on bones you used to many fillers man and i think its gonna kill you in this...

bones
Another wack rapper to send to the "grave yard"/-"BONES!"
can i get a moment of silence to remember this "brave heart".../-'ha!"
ok kinda lost flow a lil but this is but its how you say it but you coulda had a stronger punch here 2/5
all bark with no bite, swimmin for your life, aginst a shark/
hes the type to "askjeeves" for a punch line then have it "bookmarked"/-'sad..."
lol this one made me laugh lol 3/5
ya heart beatin more pussy then "ron jeremy" with out the nuts and the fame/
no wounder why you in the closet "dead silence'in" through out this game/-'woow'
ok nice attempt at nameplay 2/5
how can you have a "silentcer shootin blanks" and claim u a beast/
what, u a "x-men" now? huh, yeah more like a "jiggly puff" turned elite.../-damn!
ok didn't flow last word but was a played punch 2/5
you tried try to succeed and compeat with no grudges/
nothin personal cuzzin but u can stop doin "toe touches"/ha
weak punch 2/5
wrote ya 6 bars with punches no harder then crunches/
get'cha weight up homie tell mom to pack "mustle milk"in ya lunches/"BONES"
weak closer 2/5

total 13/30 this was a better verse from you... you are makeing improvements man keep workin hard and you'll be a tough oppenent soon bro keep it up

Bones you took this win good job man

VOTE-BONES

didnt try too hard but good looks people pretty soon im gonna be doin audio battles be cause texting isnt really my thing...

bang'em in da head 2-0..."-6BoNeS0"

uppin

Alright I expect to see some votes on my battle with Lungz anyways...

Ds:
ill smash this fool like a bag of bricks//
injury this clown like a new fag with dicks//
*no*

This dood isnt on my level,im something out of this world//
tone down ur treble,bump up the bass to satisfy ya girl//
*better than the first, but still nah*

crush 60 OF YA BONES and leave u lifeless//
destroy all 50 of ya clones as i type this//
*better than the last two but still pretty weak*

Ha this kid must be crazy trying to tame this beast//
i use MC's like u for a snack and u think just one is a feast//
*back to no*

That means ur poor, u cant afford a damn thing in your life//
BANG BANG like the 5-0 at ya door,or when i'm strangling ur wife//
*don't understand it, no*

Half ass verse,and i still haven't left my stable//
because to beat me u gotta be mental unstable//
*finally some creativity, but the wording was off, if you put it together better, def woulda been ok*

Altogether Ds sorry man, but that was below par def not a good verse at all, but it's cool just elevate keep practicing no hard feelings, just being honest bro.

Bones:

Another wack rapper to send to the "grave yard"/-"BONES!"
can i get a moment of silence to remember this "brave heart".../-'ha!"
*Ehh not really man*

all bark with no bite, swimmin for your life, aginst a shark/
hes the type to "askjeeves" for a punch line then have it "bookmarked"/-'sad..."
*finally a solid punchline!!!*

ya heart beatin more pussy then "ron jeremy" with out the nuts and the fame/
no wounder why you in the closet "dead silence'in" through out this game/-'woow'
*Get what you're getting at, just didn't work too well*

how can you have a "silentcer shootin blanks" and claim u a beast/
what, u a "x-men" now? huh, yeah more like a "jiggly puff" turned elite.../-damn!
*lol nah*

you tried try to succeed and compeat with no grudges/
nothin personal cuzzin but u can stop doin "toe touches"/ha
*ehh nah man*

wrote ya 6 bars with punches no harder then crunches/
get'cha weight up homie tell mom to pack "mustle milk"in ya lunches/"BONES
*I like it never seen a muscle milk line I drink that shit all the time that's how I stay jacked son lifting 295 at weight of 175, haha but for real creativity was there just didn't hit too hard, but was feeling it.


Overall hands down Bones took it just threw better punches that's basically the breakdown.

Vote= Bonez


Now vote on my battle fellas keep elevating

yeah i slept on the dude no doubt. took me like 10 nins. i really didt care if i won or not but best believe there will be a rematch.

3-0 bones

i cant update right now so someone else has to

-Closed n Updated-