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no dr, hate votes
hazard cant vote
cats are

opener
punches
personals
wordplay
nameplay
multis
closer

due 24 hrs after check in

this is my check

GL Modern

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lets go..


Facin me, how will this guy-manage? Boi its possible ya mind's-damaged
I can beat u in every way, catch Arvincible murkin "def" with SIGN-LANGUAGE !!
You define-average, while I-savage, also well known to slaughter-fakes...
I brought-ur-fate, not talkin bout ya 'skill level' when I'm havin 'MODER-ATE' !!
Sonned, ill take ya father's-place, im the future, so "Modern" days-are-over...
Mah flames-are-nova, the "rap venom" got ya lookin like u just LAYED-WITH-COBRAS !!
Cuz in this race ull be placed-into-second, catsweep! this pussy's facin-a-leopard ..
You-Breakin-me?-never!
Check it, the flow quick to have 'MOD-dead' like the people UPDATING-THE-RECORDS!! (modded)


yeah...good luck

Arvincible’s Star-principle is playing “Hazards” that aren’t-physical
I see you the “mark’s”-visible an unskilled rapper yah parts-typical
Trying to be the dragons-teeth but ya bite is like ya passion,, weak..
I’m the real savage-beast ya minor an miniscule jus like ya hazard-beef
This fakes-sure-spiteful a “Rap Professional?” someone should take-your-title
Bet I make-you-frightful, Cause Arvincible doesnt rap he just place-recycleds
how can I “envy this-porter” my “iron mic” ll smash Arv. Into dis-order
in battle ya hit-sort-of, but couldn’t win the toss if we played wit fixed-quarters
..

...................
he's got "net" beef wit hazard
he's ELi Porter the wack rapper on Iron mic...lol



vote up

opener-Arv
punches-Tie
personals-Mod
wordplay-Tie
nameplay-Tie
multis-Tie
closer-Mod

V/Modern Defiance

opener-Arvincible
punches-Arvincible
personals-Modern Defiance
wordplay-Arvincible
nameplay-Arvincible
multis-TIE
closer- Close but...Arvincible due to originality

Vote: Arvincible

Facin me, how will this guy-manage? Boi its possible ya mind's-damaged
I can beat u in every way, catch Arvincible murkin "def" with SIGN-LANGUAGE !!
[lmao good punch my dude. Flow was decent too but im feeling the nameplay. 8.5/10]
You define-average, while I-savage, also well known to slaughter-fakes...
I brought-ur-fate, not talkin bout ya 'skill level' when I'm havin 'MODER-ATE' !!
[Nameplay if off here man. I totally see where it's coming from and this is what I don't like for it. First of all nameplays are usually off what we would call a nick name. So for modern defiance it would be Mod or Def, but you tried taking a little to far with Moder, and (maybe we have different pronounciations)i pronounce moderate, mawd er at, not mawd er ate...6/10]
Sonned, ill take ya father's-place, im the future, so "Modern" days-are-over...
Mah flames-are-nova, the "rap venom" got ya lookin like u just LAYED-WITH-COBRAS !!
[I was actually thinking of a modern day/future concept myself if I were to face him, lol, but you got it before me. Nice setup, punch wasn't hard hitting, but you had a nice setup to make up for it...8/10]
Cuz in this race ull be placed-into-second, catsweep! this pussy's facin-a-leopard ..
You-Breakin-me?-never!
Check it, the flow quick to have 'MOD-dead' like the people UPDATING-THE-RECORDS!! (modded)
[I'd rather just take this as a metaphore and not as a w/p nameplay because modded and Mod Dead sounds forced to me, by a little bit, but the punch actually works if you just keep it at Mod-Dead like the people updating the records sicne it works both ways. Anyways you chose the other route though and I didn't feel the punch as mush because of that. 6.5/10]



ToTaL:: Arvin had some witty lines, I liked his style, we would probably have a good battle...29/40



Arvincible’s Star-principle is playing “Hazards” that aren’t-physical
I see you the “mark’s”-visible an unskilled rapper yah parts-typical
[nothing special here. Weak personal and meh flow/multies...5.5/10]
Trying to be the dragons-teeth but ya bite is like ya passion,, weak..
I’m the real savage-beast ya minor an miniscule jus like ya hazard-beef
[Lol okay decent personal, you related a weak personal to him being weak which is pretty ironic and funny. 7.5/10]
This fakes-sure-spiteful a “Rap Professional?” someone should take-your-title
Bet I make-you-frightful, Cause Arvincible doesnt rap he just place-recycleds
[meh personal here, if you could even call it that, because you could prob say the same over everyone...6/10]
how can I “envy this-porter” my “iron mic” ll smash Arv. Into dis-order
in battle ya hit-sort-of, but couldn’t win the toss if we played wit fixed-quarters
[multies are a little off here and there, decent setup though, i liked it more then the punch...6.5/10]



ToTaL::: Modern you had some good concepts like usual but came up short with structure sometimes. Don't focus on having to have a certain amount of multies in ever line, focus on more important shit like making sure the punch hits clean...25.5/40







VOTE> Well again this battle just looks like someone more experienced taking the win...Arvin gets my vote...

2-1 arv is up... uppin

Arv's Spitz

Facin me, how will this guy-manage? Boi its possible ya mind's-damaged
I can beat u in every way, catch Arvincible murkin "def" with SIGN-LANGUAGE !!
Decent Opener There, Like the flow of the multies

You define-average, while I-savage, also well known to slaughter-fakes...
I brought-ur-fate, not talkin bout ya 'skill level' when I'm havin 'MODER-ATE' !!
OK Nice wordplay, feelin' that, hot multies again

Sonned, ill take ya father's-place, im the future, so "Modern" days-are-over...
Mah flames-are-nova, the "rap venom" got ya lookin like u just LAYED-WITH-COBRAS !!
Decent, I like the first name based punch better than the second, flow still killin'

Cuz in this race ull be placed-into-second, catsweep! this pussy's facin-a-leopard ..
You-Breakin-me?-never!
Check it, the flow quick to have 'MOD-dead' like the people UPDATING-THE-RECORDS!! (modded)
Eh.. this one was ok, was a stretch for a closer, but got the point across


Mod's Spitz


Arvincible’s Star-principle is playing “Hazards” that aren’t-physical
I see you the “mark’s”-visible an unskilled rapper yah parts-typical
Great, flow to open with, but the punch itself iz.. =/

Trying to be the dragons-teeth but ya bite is like ya passion,, weak..
I’m the real savage-beast ya minor an miniscule jus like ya hazard-beef
Flow ok, punch, ok, still nothing to spectacular


This fakes-sure-spiteful a “Rap Professional?” someone should take-your-title
Bet I make-you-frightful, Cause Arvincible doesnt rap he just place-recycleds
Ok but kind of weak

how can I “envy this-porter” my “iron mic” ll smash Arv. Into dis-order
in battle ya hit-sort-of, but couldn’t win the toss if we played wit fixed-quarters
..
Sort of a weak closer meh...


opener- Arv
punches- Arv
personals- Mod
wordplay- Arv
nameplay- Arv
multis- Arv
closer- Arv

My Vote- ARV

Another close battle wtf fellas making voting real difficult lately for me..

Arv:

Facin me, how will this guy-manage? Boi its possible ya mind's-damaged
I can beat u in every way, catch Arvincible murkin "def" with SIGN-LANGUAGE !!
*nice multies and flow, decent opener*

You define-average, while I-savage, also well known to slaughter-fakes...
I brought-ur-fate, not talkin bout ya 'skill level' when I'm havin 'MODER-ATE' !!
*punch wa sbetter than the opener, multies and flow are on point*

Sonned, ill take ya father's-place, im the future, so "Modern" days-are-over...
Mah flames-are-nova, the "rap venom" got ya lookin like u just LAYED-WITH-COBRAS !!
*flow was straight but thats it didn't care for this*

Cuz in this race ull be placed-into-second, catsweep! this pussy's facin-a-leopard ..
You-Breakin-me?-never!
Check it, the flow quick to have 'MOD-dead' like the people UPDATING-THE-RECORDS!! (modded)
*seen lines like this toward Mod before, better than ur last line ok closer*


MOD:

Arvincible’s Star-principle is playing “Hazards” that aren’t-physical
I see you the “mark’s”-visible an unskilled rapper yah parts-typical
*Flow, multies are nice punch was ehhh*

Trying to be the dragons-teeth but ya bite is like ya passion,, weak..
I’m the real savage-beast ya minor an miniscule jus like ya hazard-beef
*punch was sort of weak, ur flow and multies make it seem better than is*

This fakes-sure-spiteful a “Rap Professional?” someone should take-your-title
Bet I make-you-frightful, Cause Arvincible doesnt rap he just place-recycleds
*seen lines like this, but so far best punch by you*

how can I “envy this-porter” my “iron mic” ll smash Arv. Into dis-order
in battle ya hit-sort-of, but couldn’t win the toss if we played wit fixed-quarters
*ehh ok closer*


Man I'm off tonight after first read I thought Mod actually took this I really liked his verse first time around and was impressed he's def improving...Than I read again and realized the punches were just ok, I was sort of fooled by how njice it flowed and the multies til I broke it down line by line, no hard hitters..Best verse by you though Mod keep it up my man ull get there.

Vote= Arv

4-1 TKO Arvincible -Closed n UpDated-