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3 days instead of a week agreed?

fa sho yo dj spin dat shit

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Round two cutty bones vs. dead silence its gotta be riot/
how I threw punches at his stomach and they landed on his eye lids/

Wax on wax off call the man karate kid, Back again?/
Ok…have you been practicin? These ass whoopin paid off now u micheal Jackson it /

Ill re-rap’em bag’em tag’em and ship’em out to the Jackson kids/
keep it at a dead silence when u enter these grounds ya dig?/

Or u can catch a hot mag with a devastating sound
To the side of ur skull, and in my hands ya head will rest /

No contest they’ll protest asking me to refrain and give back ur soul/
So ya body can have some dignity, rip nicca rest in piss/

DJ spin that shit?son this aint no 8 mile//
try to have more swagga than me? than why do you have a late style?//

man ur punches take so long to hit,ill give em a couple weeks//
than i'll jump up to spit while people still try to figure out ur speach//

you call your Verse's rap when its a long strain of words that form a sentence//
not with the program,acting like Bruce Willis but u still cant figure all of my senses//(6th sense?!?!)

Your rhymes lack the lyrical ability to beat God's Curse//
flowing like i got spiritual agility living you with the "Odd Verse"//

Get outta here, you aint on my level,not up to par//
bring fear like the devil and have you whole life scarred//

Round two cutty bones vs. dead silence its gotta be riot/
how I threw punches at his stomach and they landed on his eye lids/
id change gotta to gonna overall good line
Wax on wax off call the man karate kid, Back again?/
Ok…have you been practicin? These ass whoopin paid off now u micheal Jackson it /
karate kid line is good whats michael jackson'n it, fucking chitlens?
Ill re-rap’em bag’em tag’em and ship’em out to the Jackson kids/
keep it at a dead silence when u enter these grounds ya dig?/
eh ok line its got promise just the jackson reference is eh and maby find more creative way to use dig but not bad
Or u can catch a hot mag with a devastating sound
To the side of ur skull, and in my hands ya head will rest /
i dont get how this rhymes
No contest they’ll protest asking me to refrain and give back ur soul/
So ya body can have some dignity, rip nicca rest in piss/
eh the rest contest protest gave it a good start but the soul - rest in piss is weak
better than the last one i read alot of good ideas keep droppin


DJ spin that shit?son this aint no 8 mile//
try to have more swagga than me? than why do you have a late style?//
ok line im not really an eminim fan so the 8 mile part is just not enough punch to me its not bad but not great
man ur punches take so long to hit,ill give em a couple weeks//
than i'll jump up to spit while people still try to figure out ur speach//
again its ok but lacks any flash
you call your Verse's rap when its a long strain of words that form a sentence//
not with the program,acting like Bruce Willis but u still cant figure all of my senses//(6th sense?!?!)
lines not bad
Your rhymes lack the lyrical ability to beat God's Curse//
flowing like i got spiritual agility living you with the "Odd Verse"//
should swap it around to like "your rhymes lack lyrical ability only mc to spit the odd verse flowing like i got spiritual agility lighting you up with all kinds of curses or something i dunno if was an good idea could be brushed up still further though
Get outta here, you aint on my level,not up to par//
bring fear like the devil and have you whole life scarred//
maby like bring fear like the devil and leave ya shakin like ya scaaaaarreedd.. another good line shows promise

bother guys did well hope some of my crits help ya or at least push ya to do more with your writing, good battle.
my vote: deadsilence
i just feel like he had some really good ideas in his

bones
Round two cutty bones vs. dead silence its gotta be riot/
how I threw punches at his stomach and they landed on his eye lids/
ok this is not even a punch at all man wat da hell u doin 1/5
Wax on wax off call the man karate kid, Back again?/
Ok…have you been practicin? These ass whoopin paid off now u micheal Jackson it /
didnt make me laugh but it was a good punch 3/5
Ill re-rap’em bag’em tag’em and ship’em out to the Jackson kids/
keep it at a dead silence when u enter these grounds ya dig?/
ok nice try at da name play but punch was weak 2/5
Or u can catch a hot mag with a devastating sound
To the side of ur skull, and in my hands ya head will rest /
wat.... NO 1/5
No contest they’ll protest asking me to refrain and give back ur soul/
So ya body can have some dignity, rip nicca rest in piss
no again 1/5

total 8/25

deadsilence
DJ spin that shit?son this aint no 8 mile//
try to have more swagga than me? than why do you have a late style?//
didnt make since to me at all 1/5
man ur punches take so long to hit,ill give em a couple weeks//
than i'll jump up to spit while people still try to figure out ur speach//
nice punch on his versues 2/5
you call your Verse's rap when its a long strain of words that form a sentence//
not with the program,acting like Bruce Willis but u still cant figure all of my senses//(6th sense?!?!)
nice try but weak still 2/5
Your rhymes lack the lyrical ability to beat God's Curse//
flowing like i got spiritual agility living you with the "Odd Verse"//
ok u dissin his style and verses are old after 4 bars 1/5
Get outta here, you aint on my level,not up to par//
bring fear like the devil and have you whole life scarred//
gayyy and no weak filler 1/5

total 8/25 ok tie ill use cats

flow-ds
punches-bones
nameplay-bones
wordplay-ds
opener-ds
closer-bones
multis-niether
entertainment-bones

my vote bones but both where really weak

uhh no i didnt?

i didnt even bother reading your verse

but uhhhh nice try

Bones:

Round two cutty bones vs. dead silence its gotta be riot/
how I threw punches at his stomach and they landed on his eye lids/
-Ok Opener, Good Wordplay 7/10

Wax on wax off call the man karate kid, Back again?/
Ok…have you been practicin? These ass whoopin paid off now u micheal Jackson it /
-Decent. Even tho MJ lines Are Played! 6/10

Ill re-rap’em bag’em tag’em and ship’em out to the Jackson kids/
keep it at a dead silence when u enter these grounds ya dig?/
-Kinda weak.Seen ya nameplay attempt 5/10

Or u can catch a hot mag with a devastating sound
To the side of ur skull, and in my hands ya head will rest /
-NO! Stop doin that shit."sound & Rest" Don't Rhyme. 3/10

No contest they’ll protest asking me to refrain and give back ur soul/
So ya body can have some dignity, rip nicca rest in piss/
-You Did it again. Bad Closer 3/10

Overall:24/50
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Dead Silence:

DJ spin that shit?son this aint no 8 mile//
try to have more swagga than me? than why do you have a late style?//
-Na. Weak Opener 2/10
man ur punches take so long to hit,ill give em a couple weeks//
than i'll jump up to spit while people still try to figure out ur speach//
-Ok. Makes sense talkin bout bones structure, lol 7/10

you call your Verse's rap when its a long strain of words that form a sentence//
not with the program,acting like Bruce Willis but u still cant figure all of my senses//
-OK Line. 6/10

Your rhymes lack the lyrical ability to beat God's Curse//
flowing like i got spiritual agility living you with the "Odd Verse"//
-Um.......Na 3/10
Get outta here, you aint on my level,not up to par//
bring fear like the devil and have you whole life scarred//
-Better Closer Then his. Still kinda Weak tho 5/10


Overall:23/50
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GOD DAMN! Dead you coulda really had this if you would have had more hard punches.Bones listen your verse started out ok but then you got a bad structure spell towards the end, consider your self lucky dead slipped up cause he would have had you i mean you are gettin better tho i can see that just keep doin it and FIX YOUR STRUCTURE!



v/BoNeS

UPPIN.....Please let's get this thing closed.

Bones .. Just Had More of a Attacking Verse ,


Round two cutty bones vs. dead silence its gotta be riot/
how I threw punches at his stomach and they landed on his eye lids/


This just Sounded Hott .. .


Vote/Bones !! ..

Voting is 3-1 in Bones's favor. If this battle isn't finished by Saturday at noon EST time then whoever has the most votes wins.

It has passed noon so with that...


Bones Gets the win by having most votes..




Winner: 6BoNeS0






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