an ongoing battle on another site to defend my title...
if we really were dogs ,1 thing that i do know. youd be the taco bell chihuahua i'd be Cujo
^^his name is kid K9 a dog^^
you only battlin me cuz a fukin loophole i'll split ya melon to pieces ya heads a fruitbowl ^^self explan dyna dropped out^^
you cant fade mine pray nine ?.i fillet guy's like i oxidized ya arsenal i decay 9's ^^oxidize=rust =decay for metal on ya 9mm^^
this fukin K-9 bout to get put down to sleep pussy when i spay nine lives is what ya bound to need ^^pussy (cat)=9lives ..lmao^^
you cant counter me, faggot becuz im bound to be champ til i'm done makin track for these bums ^^your 'bum' unworthy of a title shot^^
cuz your never equalin me you so whack little son ya better off ticklin ya throats back with a gun ^^self explan..^^
you'll probly no show so i aint even gotta speak like his first drop K9 will get killed by a beat. ^^his first drop his vocals were overpowered by the beat^^
bitch..why am i wastin my time you know ya facing demise like cancer patients that's waitin 2 die ^^self explan^^
HOOK you didnt even earn your fukin spot to battle me since i got the belt these faggots tryin to saddle me and now this random geek's in it to end me no chance this is 'reality' faggot not fukin 'bromance' you didnt even earn your fukin spot to battle me since i got the belt these faggots tryin to saddle me and now this random geek's in it to end me no chance this is 'reality' faggot not fukin 'bromance' ^^self explan^^
thinkin you you big naw, k9 juss a lil pup and i'll leave ya fuked,like ya dad beat up ya momma's khunt ^^haha
you puttin up a front tryin to act official man, but this time a K9's the sacrificial lamb. ^^he was thrown in the fire to me^^
just treats for the beast, cant even speak cuz ya weak meet defeat when you leap i pull k9 teeth through ya cheeks ^^K9 teeth=the fang in ya mouth^^
future's bleek for peeps who try and take me kid you crazy cuz the only time you 'killin kids' when you drinkin babies.. ^^LMFAO^^
i'm like a demi god,with how im scarin mods leave this mutt tired like chevy's that runover dogs ^^sordo was a mod,Dyna 2 ..tired=tire tracks..
when i kill ya with all the heinous inventions i'm sendin you'll finally elevate cuz all dogs go to heaven. ^^
and joel Venom was supposed to be here in ya place so i guess you can go tell him just how my dick taste ^^haha^^
cuz it's over ya head ya level's not up to my waste plus theres cum on ya breath like midgets that's fuked in da face ^^LMFAO you just got sonned^^ wend:
i have no idea who this cat is..so that's as personal as i can get..
faggot! my puns will hit ya chest like n H BOMB the shock will cause ya heart attacks like gilbert GRAPES MOM
i'm sumthin like a 'barber ' with the way i CHOPP HIS WIG ill 'skate' with stealin this win away like i'm 'ROB N BIG'(the T.V. show Rob's a pro skater)
It's Jah boy "Tre Tru" holla
Last edited by TreTru on Sat Apr 25, 2009 10:11 am, edited 1 time in total.
haaa..hot shit.. that teeth through your cheeks killed me man..flowed very nicely
considering you dont know him thats a pretty hard hitting verse..flipped all the k9 shit perfectly..delivery was good..flow on top too
you only battlin me cuz a fukin loophole
i'll split ya melon to pieces ya heads a fruitbowl
weak though..sounds a lil played and punch not really developed
you cant fade mine pray nine ?.i fillet guy's
like i oxidized ya arsenal i decay 9's
that was pure fire..murdah!
you'll probly no show so i aint even gotta speak
like his first drop K9 will get killed by a beat.
HEAT!
bitch..why am i wastin my time you know ya facing demise
like cancer patients that's waitin 2 die
no..too played for my liking
overall i really enjoyed the peice..some nice punches there and flow was nice too..could do with a little interbar rhyme in there though..would really elevate your style to next levels
yeah thanks it was a pretty quik write and my opponent got changed on
me last minute..sooo i went with what i could.guy's still a ghost
and only had one drop at the site so didnt know a damn thing about
him but his rap name and the sound of his first drop..
faggot! my puns will hit ya chest like n H BOMB the shock will cause ya heart attacks like gilbert GRAPES MOM
i'm sumthin like a 'barber ' with the way i CHOPP HIS WIG ill 'skate' with stealin this win away like i'm 'ROB N BIG'(the T.V. show Rob's a pro skater)
hahahaha taco bell chihuahua u killed dat nigga son haha shit boy Tre killin' em makin em feel all retarted haha yo dawg much props on dat shit matter fact I'm still waitin on u 2 battle 4 dat belt wtf is up wit dat shit dawg we need 2 get dat shit done and over wit
hahahaha taco bell chihuahua u killed dat nigga son haha shit boy Tre killin' em makin em feel all retarted haha yo dawg much props on dat shit matter fact I'm still waitin on u 2 battle 4 dat belt wtf is up wit dat shit dawg we need 2 get dat shit done and over wit
props my nigga keep killin' them niggaz haha
jyeah thanks alot homey.. juss doin what i gotta...hahaha..
and i got the belt by default..bleh..but at least i got it...so it's done ..1
faggot! my puns will hit ya chest like n H BOMB the shock will cause ya heart attacks like gilbert GRAPES MOM
i'm sumthin like a 'barber ' with the way i CHOPP HIS WIG ill 'skate' with stealin this win away like i'm 'ROB N BIG'(the T.V. show Rob's a pro skater)
faggot! my puns will hit ya chest like n H BOMB the shock will cause ya heart attacks like gilbert GRAPES MOM
i'm sumthin like a 'barber ' with the way i CHOPP HIS WIG ill 'skate' with stealin this win away like i'm 'ROB N BIG'(the T.V. show Rob's a pro skater)
dag man i know this is way back when u posted this but HOLY FUCK MAN this was HOOOOOT every line was a killer dawg for real... shit was siiiiiick... big props to u on this joint... haha keep doin u big homie... peace
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V.I. Illest Radio DJ
Chuck Norris once shot an enemy plane down with his finger, by yelling, "Bang Bang!"
i would give this track 4 mics its pretty ill dude
_________________ Ima beast Ill decease you wit My Bare Hands, witta grips like a vise leave yuh pipes tight Like Bear Traps, Im in the shawdows unseen In Sights Stared At, I'll rip you spiritless jus to show you what yuh Night Mares Lack, You better Pray to the Heavens, when Im Sprayin that Weapon, Im the crypt keeper Changin yuh Message, This Razors yuh Death Wish, Shavin Intestines, finding a new Place to Inject yuh Veins wit Infections,
im lovein the beat. the hook is good to and ran together well and the punches and flow in this were sick man no wonder ur the audio title holder great drop man
yeah you punked K9 like a bitch of a dogg. seriously.. good punches personals, metaphores the works.. i bet that dogs growl is worse than his bite if he had to respond to that shit. good battle audio, dug the flow.. keep um coming
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"see you shouldnt be afraid of me.. you should be afraid of all the people in the streets
honestly man this was really weak..i see the number of post above you are part of the "iWannaRideTre" squad well let me break it down to show them that they are just riding.
One your flow was consistant but this was a battle it didnt need the lines full of filler like you expose in this very verse.
Two your punches arent even really punches..the energy was very monotone and didnt even sound like a battle track to begin with.
Three your lyrics themselves werent even up to par with a battles..this sounds like a cypher spit more than something that was written to hurt someone mentally which is what a battle is suppose to do.
so i think you failed with this one but on your next battle you should study what parts u didnt connect with because this is only to help you as an artist.
PCe. and leave real feed people.
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All Audio Battle Record
8-0-8
Brandon Heat (KO) Falix (KO) KraZyLyrical (KO) Yasii(KO) Led Poison(KO) Jay 3rd (KO) Demo (KO) Pdubz (KO) M.Flight (KO)
@Lawgix...right on thanks man..i thought this came out decent..
@symbolik...appreciate the props fam..definately a compliment coming from you..
@M.O.E. ...yeah i was feelin these punches but it looks like not everyone was..
@Dyna...wow..i'm almost surprised at your reaction to this one... infact more suprised that you even left feed on this cause you hardly leave feed here!! especially on MY tracks.haha..i'm hopin that's regular feed and not more feelins about ya name bein in it..we shouldn't have to go through that again. ... anyway..there's no reason why other people cant see differently than your opinion.."not real Punches" not even 1?..hmm..wow i think your idea of a real "artist" and mine are 2 different things..and FAIL mmm Nah i won the battle that is why i layed this track down so you'r obviously exagger-hating...BUT your entitled to your opinion so i wont sweat it ..thanks for the feed!!
faggot! my puns will hit ya chest like n H BOMB the shock will cause ya heart attacks like gilbert GRAPES MOM
i'm sumthin like a 'barber ' with the way i CHOPP HIS WIG ill 'skate' with stealin this win away like i'm 'ROB N BIG'(the T.V. show Rob's a pro skater)
dont be bugged my dude your lines didnt pack that much power you should have had more energy and wit behind them some of them were too predictable. hows that sound cause i have no problem with my name being in it like i did before its just that the overall diss was weak.
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All Audio Battle Record
8-0-8
Brandon Heat (KO) Falix (KO) KraZyLyrical (KO) Yasii(KO) Led Poison(KO) Jay 3rd (KO) Demo (KO) Pdubz (KO) M.Flight (KO)
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