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Post subject: Dominyen - His Bitch ****Hott*****  Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 10:21 am |
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Post subject: Re: Dominyen - His Bitch ****Hott***** Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 12:03 pm |
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Beat is Pretty Hot... Dunno if You Attempted To Ride it Tha Right Way Or Not... Flow Sounds Kinda Off.. Dont Know if it's Cuz Your Adlibs/Punch ins What Ever Ya Wanna Call 'Em... Tha Lyrics Are Pretty Nice Though.. Dope Story... Pretty Decent Track... Dont Like All Tha Adlibs/Punch ins Though..
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Post subject: Re: Dominyen - His Bitch ****Hott***** Posted: Sat Feb 06, 2010 2:02 am |
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Post subject: Re: Dominyen - His Bitch ****Hott***** Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 7:56 am |
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ok ok. imma b straight up and down. shit was ill. i liked the picture u painted. real clear. vocal quality wasnt sensational but u still got the point across real well. i concur wit toyh, i wasnt too big on the punch ins. i think maybe if you threw a lil bit more emotion, the shit would be straight as fuck. overall though, ku joint. at times u fell off i think, but rebounded ku. like i said, i think this track is hot. better than the other shit ive heard from yall. 8/10 jus cus i think u could of came a lil tougher. dope dope tho
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Post subject: Re: Dominyen - His Bitch ****Hott***** Posted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 1:08 pm |
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Post subject: Re: Dominyen - His Bitch ****Hott***** Posted: Thu Feb 11, 2010 7:12 am |
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Great story, beat is ight, Like Loon E Lou said, Need more emotion, but for the way you delivered it the ad-lips and all needed to be there.. Now if you sung it with emotion you would want to let some of the ad-lips go.. You got strong lyrics man.. You can tell a story real well.. Overall Not Bad..
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Post subject: Re: Dominyen - His Bitch ****Hott***** Posted: Thu Feb 11, 2010 11:36 am |
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