Rocawear, Nike, Gucci


Forum locked This topic is locked, you cannot edit posts or make further replies.  [ 28 posts ]  Go to page 1, 2  Next
Post subject: Dynamiq Vs Cee4
PostPosted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 12:59 am 
Elite Freestyler
User avatar
Offline

Posts: 307
Wins: 3
Losses: 1
Cash: 1591
4 Bars.

Check N'

_________________
Image

Image


All Audio Battle Record

8-0-8

Brandon Heat (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)

All Time Text Record

[84-13-77]


Top
 Profile  
 

 

Post subject: Re: Dynamiq Vs Cee4
PostPosted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 2:09 am 
Rhyme Dominator
User avatar
Offline

Posts: 2797
Wins: 54
Losses: 15
Cash: 1066
deadline?


its up to you. it can be 30 minutes time or 30 days time. it dont matter to me. but i aint dropping or commenting again unless you put a deadline.

i dont mean to be a dick but you got a habit of no showing.

_________________
Image[/align]


Top
 Profile  
 

Post subject: Re: Dynamiq Vs Cee4
PostPosted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 11:05 am 
Elite Freestyler
User avatar
Offline

Posts: 307
Wins: 3
Losses: 1
Cash: 1591
yeah thats because i do shit besides stay online all day really. i feel what your saying.

the 29th.

thats the due date.

_________________
Image

Image


All Audio Battle Record

8-0-8

Brandon Heat (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)

All Time Text Record

[84-13-77]


Top
 Profile  
 

Post subject: Re: Dynamiq Vs Cee4
PostPosted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 11:29 am 
Rhyme Dominator
User avatar
Offline

Posts: 2797
Wins: 54
Losses: 15
Cash: 1066
check and good luck


Last edited by Cee4 on Mon Aug 31, 2009 10:58 am, edited 1 time in total.

Top
 Profile  
 

Post subject: Re: Dynamiq Vs Cee4
PostPosted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 11:36 pm 
Elite Freestyler
User avatar
Offline

Posts: 307
Wins: 3
Losses: 1
Cash: 1591
Quick Update Man = 6 Bars Just Match What I Have :roll:



Yo..!

It's Obvious Dude Can't Afford Grim When I Boost Ether
So 'C-Oughta Stay In His Place' - Before I 'Report Him To The Zoo Keeper!'

:lol:


Top 10 On The Site? 'Not Jew!' - i've Yet To See This 'Pagan' Make It
Judging By the Threads He Post - Cee's Known To Talk Till Ya 'Blue In The Face Like A Skagen Bracelet!'

:!:


So It's Odd To Think Cee Could Kill The Stage When On The Mic
Which 'Ghost To Show..You Have No Chance'..Nor 'Displays Of A Poltergeist'

And.. 8)

Nvm What His Skill Portrays,I Figured Sluggish - Cuz If Cee Were To Build In Place To Linger Punches
Then We'd See A Show Of Hands!.. - And Children Plays With Finger Puppets!

:oops:

Cuz U Bringing Tough Talk Without Akward Muscle Is A Loss Earned Double!
Especially When Ya Past Verses Have So Much Senseless Name Plays - I Thought I Was Battling A Crossword Puzzle!

But See.. ;)

Cruel Words'll Leave This Tyrant Baffled! Cuz Ever Since My Mood Heard This Shy Kid Battle
I Was Hoping He'd Cedar Light - Next To The Cooler Of Diet Snapple!


Like i Said Good Luck.

-- 30 Aug 2009 21:41 --

uppin for cee4...again.

_________________
Image

Image


All Audio Battle Record

8-0-8

Brandon Heat (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)

All Time Text Record

[84-13-77]


Top
 Profile  
 

Post subject: Re: Dynamiq Vs Cee4
PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 8:16 am 
Rhyme Dominator
User avatar
Offline

Posts: 2797
Wins: 54
Losses: 15
Cash: 1066
sorry man my bad. its been a crazy weekend haha. this is the first time ive been home since friday. i`ll edit this post with my 6 bars shortly.

VIDEO OF DYNAMIQ AKA JOEL VENOM



Its time to off another fag,
Its a colostomy u had if u got it in the bag!, this Venom`s antidote causin repression
Yeah u off the top with no question, ur hairlines like the economy how its lost in recession!!
So fall back my friend
I ‘finish the prey’ someone call amen, shit lookin bare up stair like its already fall again
Enough mouth for a hall of men, fat lips aint dated Anniston but sure used to collagen!! (call a Jen)
U cant breathe when u pout
Ducked Scott James ur too cheesy to bout, go catch aids since u want the ‘Eazy way out!’
Leavin no doubt, damn Illest found a homo, like David Carradine how ya ‘bound to no show!!‘
Get out the closet
Camel toe face, pussy breath, I’ll cut out Venom like a sushi chef!,..ur input spoils perfection
This princess gets loyal affection?, watch my punches ‘take out Lady Dy/Di‘ with a royal connection!!
Coz im…
Assigned to abuser her, u think `Jur ass sick?`…I say `Dyn a sore loser`, out my way im outstanding
U get no play no demanding, plus ya punches in the Hudson how u get away with forced landings!!
Finish him!
49 verses failed against me, they take a strike fall and miss
I know ‘so shall/social Dynamiqs’ and I aint a psyc-hol-o-gist!!





Should be easy enough to get but..
Bar 2 - collagen injections give you Jay Z lips
Bar 3 - David Carradine = the dead guy from Kill Bill
Bar 4 - Lady Dy/Di = Princess Diana


Top
 Profile  
 

Post subject: Re: Dynamiq Vs Cee4
PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 12:14 pm 
Elite Freestyler
User avatar
Offline

Posts: 307
Wins: 3
Losses: 1
Cash: 1591
vote up.

_________________
Image

Image


All Audio Battle Record

8-0-8

Brandon Heat (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)

All Time Text Record

[84-13-77]


Top
 Profile  
 

Post subject: Re: Dynamiq Vs Cee4
PostPosted: Mon Aug 31, 2009 4:30 pm 
Supreme Lyricist
User avatar
Offline

Posts: 6299
Wins: 56
Losses: 56
Cash: 7909
It's Obvious Dude Can't Afford Grim When I Boost Ether
So 'C-Oughta Stay In His Place' - Before I 'Report Him To The Zoo Keeper!'

.Vs.

Its time to off another fag,
Its a colostomy u had if u got it in the bag!, this Venom`s antidote causin repression
Yeah u off the top with no question, ur hairlines like the economy how its lost in recession!!

Top 10 On The Site? 'Not Jew!' - i've Yet To See This 'Pagan' Make It
Judging By the Threads He Post - (Cee's Known To Talk Till Ya 'Blue In The Face Like A Skagen Bracelet!')<< Lmfao.. Good Shit

I ‘finish the prey’ someone call amen,<< Real Played... shit lookin bare up stair like its already fall again
Enough mouth for a hall of men, fat lips aint dated Anniston but sure used to collagen!! (call a Jen) << Lmfao Raaw

So It's Odd To Think Cee Could Kill The Stage When On The Mic
Which 'Ghost To Show..You Have No Chance'..Nor 'Displays Of A Poltergeist' (Clever)

U cant breathe when u pout
Ducked Scott James ur too cheesy to bout, go catch aids since u want the ‘Eazy way out!’ .. Good Shit , Personal & just Was Feeling The line




Cuz U Bringing Tough Talk Without Akward Muscle Is A Loss Earned Double!
Especially When Ya Past Verses Have So Much Senseless Name Plays - I Thought I Was Battling A Crossword Puzzle!

LMAO... Funny.


Camel toe face, pussy breath, I’ll cut out Venom like a sushi chef!,.
<- Lol Alriight Pretty Str8.
This princess gets loyal affection?, watch my punches ‘take out Lady Dy/Di‘ with a royal connection!!
Lol Word.. This Was Pretty Decent Could Of Came Alot Stronger Though.


Cruel Words'll Leave This Tyrant Baffled! Cuz Ever Since My Mood Heard This Shy Kid Battle
I Was Hoping He'd Cedar Light - Next To The Cooler Of Diet Snapple!

Raaaaw...

Assigned to abuser her, u think `Jur ass sick?`…I say `Dyn a sore loser`, out my way im outstanding
U get no play no demanding,

Just Aint Working For Me...


Nvm What His Skill Portrays,I Figured Sluggish - Cuz If Cee Were To Build In Place To Linger Punches
Then We'd See A Show Of Hands!.. - And Children Plays With Finger Puppets! << Funny N Tough...




Punchlines: Dynamiq..
Wordplay: Tie
Nameplay: Cee4
Personals: Cee
Creativity: Dynamiq
Entertainment:Dynamiq
Multis: Dynamiq ( just Strung Nicer).

Overall Vote - Dynamiq...


This Was a Good Battle, Dynamiq Kind Of Danced Around You Cee..You Didnt Come Like U Use 2.. Good Shit Though...

_________________
"N I Swear It's Like a Trap But i Ain't Giving Up on The Hood It's All Good When i Go Back"


Top
 Profile  
 

Post subject: Re: Dynamiq Vs Cee4
PostPosted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 9:34 am 
Elite Freestyler
User avatar
Offline

Posts: 307
Wins: 3
Losses: 1
Cash: 1591
thanks for the vote 1-0

still uppin

_________________
Image

Image


All Audio Battle Record

8-0-8

Brandon Heat (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)

All Time Text Record

[84-13-77]


Top
 Profile  
 

Post subject: Re: Dynamiq Vs Cee4
PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 1:40 am 
Flow Creation
User avatar
Offline

Posts: 1358
Wins: 21
Losses: 16
Cash: 3613
Dynamiq:

It's Obvious Dude Can't Afford Grim When I Boost Ether
So 'C-Oughta Stay In His Place' - Before I 'Report Him To The Zoo Keeper!'
-Blah..Weak Opener 4/10




Top 10 On The Site? 'Not Jew!' - i've Yet To See This 'Pagan' Make It
Judging By the Threads He Post - Cee's Known To Talk Till Ya 'Blue In The Face Like A Skagen Bracelet!'
-Ok..7/10




So It's Odd To Think Cee Could Kill The Stage When On The Mic
Which 'Ghost To Show..You Have No Chance'..Nor 'Displays Of A Poltergeist'
-Ok, Could have been alot better...6/10

And..

Nvm What His Skill Portrays,I Figured Sluggish - Cuz If Cee Were To Build In Place To Linger Punches
Then We'd See A Show Of Hands!.. - And Children Plays With Finger Puppets!
Na, ok set up but didn't land....3/10



Cuz U Bringing Tough Talk Without Akward Muscle Is A Loss Earned Double!
Especially When Ya Past Verses Have So Much Senseless Name Plays - I Thought I Was Battling A Crossword Puzzle!
LOL, Nice.....9/10

But See..

Cruel Words'll Leave This Tyrant Baffled! Cuz Ever Since My Mood Heard This Shy Kid Battle
I Was Hoping He'd Cedar Light - Next To The Cooler Of Diet Snapple!
-LOL, Nice Closer......8/10

Overall:37/60
------------------------------------------
Cee4:


Its time to off another fag,
Its a colostomy u had if u got it in the bag!, this Venom`s antidote causin repression
Yeah u off the top with no question, ur hairlines like the economy how its lost in recession!!
-LMAO! Nice Opener.....8/10
So fall back my friend
I ‘finish the prey’ someone call amen, shit lookin bare up stair like its already fall again
Enough mouth for a hall of men, fat lips aint dated Anniston but sure used to collagen!!
Ok....7/10
U cant breathe when u pout
Ducked Scott James ur too cheesy to bout, go catch aids since u want the ‘Eazy way out!’
Leavin no doubt, damn Illest found a homo, like David Carradine how ya ‘bound to no show!!‘
-Good Shyt, Feelin the "Eazy way out"....8/10
Get out the closet
Camel toe face, pussy breath, I’ll cut out Venom like a sushi chef!,..ur input spoils perfection
This princess gets loyal affection?, watch my punches ‘take out Lady Dy/Di‘ with a royal connection!!
-Nice.....8/10
Coz im…
Assigned to abuser her, u think `Jur ass sick?`…I say `Dyn a sore loser`, out my way im outstanding
U get no play no demanding, plus ya punches in the Hudson how u get away with forced landings!!
Decent.....7/10
Finish him!
49 verses failed against me, they take a strike fall and miss
I know ‘so shall/social Dynamiqs’ and I aint a psyc-hol-o-gist!!
Ok, nothing special.....6/10

Overall:44/60







V/Cee4

_________________
Image

E-Makulate Metaphorz

" Ya'll Can't Stop Tha Movement!! "

Image


Top
 Profile  
 

Post subject: Re: Dynamiq Vs Cee4
PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 9:46 am 
Elite Freestyler
User avatar
Offline

Posts: 307
Wins: 3
Losses: 1
Cash: 1591
1-1

uppin for more votes.

_________________
Image

Image


All Audio Battle Record

8-0-8

Brandon Heat (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)

All Time Text Record

[84-13-77]


Top
 Profile  
 

Post subject: Re: Dynamiq Vs Cee4
PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 2:03 pm 
Rap King
User avatar
Offline

Posts: 773
Wins: 7
Losses: 6
Cash: 4384
dynamiq

It's Obvious Dude Can't Afford Grim When I Boost Ether
So 'C-Oughta Stay In His Place' - Before I 'Report Him To The Zoo Keeper!'
ok i like da nameplay i havent seen it before on him punch was nice 2 7/10



Top 10 On The Site? 'Not Jew!' - i've Yet To See This 'Pagan' Make It
Judging By the Threads He Post - Cee's Known To Talk Till Ya 'Blue In The Face Like A Skagen Bracelet!'
nice punch but kinda weak 6/10


So It's Odd To Think Cee Could Kill The Stage When On The Mic
Which 'Ghost To Show..You Have No Chance'..Nor 'Displays Of A Poltergeist'
kinda forced but decent punch 6/10
And..

Nvm What His Skill Portrays,I Figured Sluggish - Cuz If Cee Were To Build In Place To Linger Punches
Then We'd See A Show Of Hands!.. - And Children Plays With Finger Puppets!
Wat??? didnt like this at all weak 5/10


Cuz U Bringing Tough Talk Without Akward Muscle Is A Loss Earned Double!
Especially When Ya Past Verses Have So Much Senseless Name Plays - I Thought I Was Battling A Crossword Puzzle!
lol nice punch and shot at a personal 8/10
But See..

Cruel Words'll Leave This Tyrant Baffled! Cuz Ever Since My Mood Heard This Shy Kid Battle
I Was Hoping He'd Cedar Light - Next To The Cooler Of Diet Snapple!
lol liked this punch 2 nice closer 7/10

total 39/60

cee4

Its time to off another fag,
Its a colostomy u had if u got it in the bag!, this Venom`s antidote causin repression
Yeah u off the top with no question, ur hairlines like the economy how its lost in recession!!
lol u playn off dat video which is a lil unfair but its funny as shit 8/10
So fall back my friend
I ‘finish the prey’ someone call amen, shit lookin bare up stair like its already fall again
Enough mouth for a hall of men, fat lips aint dated Anniston but sure used to collagen!! (call a Jen)
lol liked dis punch but wasnt great 7/10
U cant breathe when u pout
Ducked Scott James ur too cheesy to bout, go catch aids since u want the ‘Eazy way out!’
Leavin no doubt, damn Illest found a homo, like David Carradine how ya ‘bound to no show!!‘
didnt like da change in ur set up kinda took away from ur flow but still a good punch 7/10
Get out the closet
Camel toe face, pussy breath, I’ll cut out Venom like a sushi chef!,..ur input spoils perfection
This princess gets loyal affection?, watch my punches ‘take out Lady Dy/Di‘ with a royal connection!!
nice flow but kinda weaker then the others 7/10
Coz im…
Assigned to abuser her, u think `Jur ass sick?`…I say `Dyn a sore loser`, out my way im outstanding
U get no play no demanding, plus ya punches in the Hudson how u get away with forced landings!!
like da name play even tho its a lil forced but punch was good 8/10
Finish him!
49 verses failed against me, they take a strike fall and miss
I know ‘so shall/social Dynamiqs’ and I aint a psyc-hol-o-gist!!
kinda hyped ur self up here didnt really punch just a lil name play so 6/10

total 43/60

vote cee4

great battle u guys

_________________
Image

Image

Image


Top
 Profile  
 

Post subject: Re: Dynamiq Vs Cee4
PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:21 pm 
Elite Freestyler
User avatar
Offline

Posts: 307
Wins: 3
Losses: 1
Cash: 1591
^i have a question for your vote. if you didnt get it why would you say weak to my line? its very easy to get unless your dumb.

anyway thanx for the vote = 2-1 cee4

_________________
Image

Image


All Audio Battle Record

8-0-8

Brandon Heat (KO)
Falix (KO)
KraZyLyrical (KO)
Yasii(KO)
Led Poison(KO)
Jay 3rd (KO)
Demo (KO)
Pdubz (KO)
M.Flight (KO)

All Time Text Record

[84-13-77]


Top
 Profile  
 

Post subject: Re: Dynamiq Vs Cee4
PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 11:44 pm 
Rookie
User avatar
Offline

Posts: 20
Wins: 0
Losses: 0
Cash: 33
Dynamiq


It's Obvious Dude Can't Afford Grim When I Boost Ether
So 'C-Oughta Stay In His Place' - Before I 'Report Him To The Zoo Keeper!'

Didnt sting, wasn't good imo 3/10


Top 10 On The Site? 'Not Jew!' - i've Yet To See This 'Pagan' Make It
Judging By the Threads He Post - Cee's Known To Talk Till Ya 'Blue In The Face Like A Skagen Bracelet!'

Wordplay was a LITTLE forced in the first line, but i see how you done it. Second bar was one of ur better ones, i'd rate it 6/10.


So It's Odd To Think Cee Could Kill The Stage When On The Mic
Which 'Ghost To Show..You Have No Chance'..Nor 'Displays Of A Poltergeist'

We'll i didnt like this bar either. The wordplay was good though
i'ma give this a 5/10


Nvm What His Skill Portrays,I Figured Sluggish - Cuz If Cee Were To Build In Place To Linger Punches
Then We'd See A Show Of Hands!.. - And Children Plays With Finger Puppets!

We'll wasn't really that good of a bar. But i get what you we're saying.
I'd rate this a 5/10


Cuz U Bringing Tough Talk Without Akward Muscle Is A Loss Earned Double!
Especially When Ya Past Verses Have So Much Senseless Name Plays - I Thought I Was Battling A Crossword Puzzle!

Lol one of ya better bars. The personal was nice, and so was the punch 7/10.

Cruel Words'll Leave This Tyrant Baffled! Cuz Ever Since My Mood Heard This Shy Kid Battle
I Was Hoping He'd Cedar Light - Next To The Cooler Of Diet Snapple!

nice wordplay, punch wasn't that bad either 7/10!

33/60



Cee4


Its time to off another fag,
Its a colostomy u had if u got it in the bag!, this Venom`s antidote causin repression
Yeah u off the top with no question, ur hairlines like the economy how its lost in recession!!

LOL!!!! this was sick and really funny, nice personal 9/10

So fall back my friend
I ‘finish the prey’ someone call amen, shit lookin bare up stair like its already fall again
Enough mouth for a hall of men, fat lips aint dated Anniston but sure used to collagen!! (call a Jen)

This was ok, nice wordplay though 6/10

U cant breathe when u pout
Ducked Scott James ur too cheesy to bout, go catch aids since u want the ‘Eazy way out!’
Leavin no doubt, damn Illest found a homo, like David Carradine how ya ‘bound to no show!!‘

Ehh, i personally didnt like this one i'll rate it 6/10

Get out the closet
Camel toe face, pussy breath, I’ll cut out Venom like a sushi chef!,..ur input spoils perfection
This princess gets loyal affection?, watch my punches ‘take out Lady Dy/Di‘ with a royal connection!!

Clever 7/10

Coz im…
Assigned to abuser her, u think `Jur ass sick?`…I say `Dyn a sore loser`, out my way im outstanding
U get no play no demanding, plus ya punches in the Hudson how u get away with forced landings!!

tight bar, a lil forced but still good. 7/10

Finish him!
49 verses failed against me, they take a strike fall and miss
I know ‘so shall/social Dynamiqs’ and I aint a psyc-hol-o-gist!!

Didn't sting but i got this bar 6/10

41/60

vote cee4

Good battle, sorry but cee4 just wins.


Top
 Profile  
 

Post subject: Re: Dynamiq Vs Cee4
PostPosted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 8:03 am 
My Brother's Dead
User avatar
Offline

Posts: 1909
Wins: 30
Losses: 11
Cash: 304
Dynamiq wrote:
Quick Update Man = 6 Bars Just Match What I Have :roll:



Yo..!

It's Obvious Dude Can't Afford Grim When I Boost Ether
So 'C-Oughta Stay In His Place' - Before I 'Report Him To The Zoo Keeper!'

:lol:

..This Was Creative, i Never Seen This Concept Used On Cee Before, Extra Points On That, Everythin Was Nice `bout This Bar ..


Top 10 On The Site? 'Not Jew!' - i've Yet To See This 'Pagan' Make It
Judging By the Threads He Post - Cee's Known To Talk Till Ya 'Blue In The Face Like A Skagen Bracelet!'

:!:

^..Lol, This Was Sick, Nice Job On Both Lines ..


So It's Odd To Think Cee Could Kill The Stage When On The Mic
Which 'Ghost To Show..You Have No Chance'..Nor 'Displays Of A Poltergeist'

^.. I Thought Tha Wordplay in this Didn't Match Quite Exact, it Some What Took away From Tha Bar But, it Was Still a Koo Bar tho

And.. 8)

Nvm What His Skill Portrays,I Figured Sluggish - Cuz If Cee Were To Build In Place To Linger Punches
Then We'd See A Show Of Hands!.. - And Children Plays With Finger Puppets!

^.. Man, This Was a Stinger in Mah Eyes, it Was a Good Hit ..

:oops:

Cuz U Bringing Tough Talk Without Akward Muscle Is A Loss Earned Double!
Especially When Ya Past Verses Have So Much Senseless Name Plays - I Thought I Was Battling A Crossword Puzzle!

^ ..Lol That Was Pretty Fuckin ill

But See.. ;)

Cruel Words'll Leave This Tyrant Baffled! Cuz Ever Since My Mood Heard This Shy Kid Battle
I Was Hoping He'd Cedar Light - Next To The Cooler Of Diet Snapple!


^ ..Koo Closer, Thought U Closed it a Lil Harder Than This tho

Like i Said Good Luck.

-- 30 Aug 2009 21:41 --

uppin for cee4...again.



Cee4 wrote:
sorry man my bad. its been a crazy weekend haha. this is the first time ive been home since friday. i`ll edit this post with my 6 bars shortly.

VIDEO OF DYNAMIQ AKA JOEL VENOM



Its time to off another fag,
Its a colostomy u had if u got it in the bag!, this Venom`s antidote causin repression
Yeah u off the top with no question, ur hairlines like the economy how its lost in recession!!

^ Comin Out Swingin ..Nice Punch
So fall back my friend
I ‘finish the prey’ someone call amen, shit lookin bare up stair like its already fall again
Enough mouth for a hall of men, fat lips aint dated Anniston but sure used to collagen!! (call a Jen)

^ ..Wasn't Feelin This Bar, i Thought it Had a Couple Of Played ass Concepts ..But! Tha Flow Was Flawless, i Loved That Part ..
U cant breathe when u pout
Ducked Scott James ur too cheesy to bout, go catch aids since u want the ‘Eazy way out!’
Leavin no doubt, damn Illest found a homo, like David Carradine how ya ‘bound to no show!!‘

^ ..Koo, Not Really a Hit, Cus He Really Hasn't No Showed ..So, This Bar Was iffy
Get out the closet
Camel toe face, pussy breath, I’ll cut out Venom like a sushi chef!,..ur input spoils perfection
This princess gets loyal affection?, watch my punches ‘take out Lady Dy/Di‘ with a royal connection!!

^.. I Liked tha First Line Better than tha Second Line, Tha Second Was Kinda ass Cus Tha Whole Set Up Wasn't Nice, Take Out Lady Dy? ..Wtf ..
Coz im…
Assigned to abuser her, u think `Jur ass sick?`…I say `Dyn a sore loser`, out my way im outstanding
U get no play no demanding, plus ya punches in the Hudson how u get away with forced landings!!

^ ..That First Line Wasn't Good, it Was Koo ..It Was a Played Concept Gone Wrong ..But Made Up For it in Tha Second Line, it Was Good ..
Finish him!
49 verses failed against me, they take a strike fall and miss
I know ‘so shall/social Dynamiqs’ and I aint a psyc-hol-o-gist!!

^ ..Nice Closer All around ..


Opener - Dyna Cus His Bar Was a lot More Creative ..
Punches - Dyna, Better Hits and Concepts
Wordplay - Tie, Dyna Creative & More Effective, But One Of Tha Set-Ups Were Some What Forced ..
Nameplay - Dyna ..Better Hits, & Creative Flips
Mutlies- Cee4, His Came Off Cleaner
Closer - Cee4 ..Killed With That Final Bar, it Was Sick .





Should be easy enough to get but..
Bar 2 - collagen injections give you Jay Z lips
Bar 3 - David Carradine = the dead guy from Kill Bill
Bar 4 - Lady Dy/Di = Princess Diana

_________________
Image
.. it`s S.a.W Bitches ..
.. Niggas ain't Fuckin Wit Tha Team ..

JayGUNNa
RELL FiaSCO

aRViNCiBLE
SCiP
MiiLZ

Image


Top
 Profile  
 

Display posts from previous:  Sort by  
Forum locked This topic is locked, you cannot edit posts or make further replies.  [ 28 posts ]  Go to page 1, 2  Next


All times are UTC + 10 hours


Who is online

Registered users: Felons Verse, Google [Bot], Hollywood Jesus, K KiLLaH, Lawgix, Mass Effex, Yahoo [Bot], YungDosia, ~Symbolikull~


You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot post attachments in this forum

Search for:
Jump to:  
Powered by phpBB | PhpBB-Seo © 2000, 2002, 2005, 2007 phpBB Group

phpBB SEO