if You Guys Want Me To Break This Down Farther Or Give An Explanation Jus Get At Me On Msn When Ever One Of Ya On And i'll Do That For Ya...

thanx for votin to everyone who has so far

lol@thats it...twista was only used as creativity.. considering chicago's part of tornado valley
mentioned do or die.. a group from chicago
mentioned the south sideof chicago which is where all the gangs r located..referring to the intro...mentioned 312.. area code.. detroit's 313(if u recall from 8mile) and chicago's 312

there's more to it then "that's it" and reason y i involved violence more is cuz its got the highest murder "count"(not rate) then any other city

n e ways 3-1 uppin

Aiight...here we go.

GHOST

Flow: 15
Multis/Rhyme Scheme: 8
Originality: 4
Wordplay/Sims/Metas: 6
Stays On Topic: 12
Execution Of Topic: 3

Total= 48

*True...the first half of the verse was loaded with "I"..."I"..."I" and a "We". This was about ur set fam, not about what you do that's similar in reference to ur city. Though there was decent wordplay, it remained not very impressive because it was more "sports team/sports star" related and beginning to transition into "famous musician" related. Just can't say I was feelin it alot..i think you could've repp'd ur city/state better than that cuz I've seen u drop hotter material before. Not bad...but it just didn't rattle me, ya know!?

and now...

EKOMS

Flow: 15
Multis/Rhyme Scheme: 7
Originality: 7
Wordplay/Sims/Metas: 8
Stays On Topic: 15
Execution Of Topic: 4

Total= 56

*Now the structure was realy easy to read, didn't break out as many multi's as Ghost did, but did stay on topic better as well as painted a lyrical discription of a "true" Chicagoians mentality for their neighborhood. It was a lil more original. Talked about the blocks, the gangs (which is a huge problem here), The Sears tower, and other things. Best line was the "Windy City, where Twista's at" Because of the double meanin. 1. We are called the Windy City cuz of the lake front, but Illinois is know for it's tornado's and twisters. And 2. yes we are the home of Twista the artist. Theres other shit he could've done better, but it's still not a bad score.

Ending Vote: EKOMS

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no need to explain it toyh, its all good

Aiight Fam.. Was Jus Puttin Tha Word Out Sayin if ya Needed it

ghost won this already, i dont think i have to vote.

then dont? lol, still uppin for this to end

Think You Might Get More Success With Gettin Votes if Ya Moved it Lol... Like Move it To Tha Battle Grounds.. Then After it's Done Bein Voted On Move it Back... Otherwise it's Prolly Never Gonna Get Any More Votes Then it Already Has..