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ThaOneYouHate
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 7:33 am |
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if You Guys Want Me To Break This Down Farther Or Give An Explanation Jus Get At Me On Msn When Ever One Of Ya On And i'll Do That For Ya...
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~Symbolikull~
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 8:31 am |
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thanx for votin to everyone who has so far
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 Ima beast Ill decease you wit My Bare Hands, witta grips like a vise leave yuh pipes tight Like Bear Traps, Im in the shawdows unseen In Sights Stared At, I'll rip you spiritless jus to show you what yuh Night Mares Lack, You better Pray to the Heavens, when Im Sprayin that Weapon, Im the crypt keeper Changin yuh Message, This Razors yuh Death Wish, Shavin Intestines, finding a new Place to Inject yuh Veins wit Infections,
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Evolution
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 9:01 am |
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lol@thats it...twista was only used as creativity.. considering chicago's part of tornado valley
mentioned do or die.. a group from chicago
mentioned the south sideof chicago which is where all the gangs r located..referring to the intro...mentioned 312.. area code.. detroit's 313(if u recall from 8mile) and chicago's 312
there's more to it then "that's it" and reason y i involved violence more is cuz its got the highest murder "count"(not rate) then any other city
n e ways 3-1 uppin
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Kurse
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 4:14 pm |
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Aiight...here we go.
GHOST
Flow: 15 Multis/Rhyme Scheme: 8 Originality: 4 Wordplay/Sims/Metas: 6 Stays On Topic: 12 Execution Of Topic: 3
Total= 48
*True...the first half of the verse was loaded with "I"..."I"..."I" and a "We". This was about ur set fam, not about what you do that's similar in reference to ur city. Though there was decent wordplay, it remained not very impressive because it was more "sports team/sports star" related and beginning to transition into "famous musician" related. Just can't say I was feelin it alot..i think you could've repp'd ur city/state better than that cuz I've seen u drop hotter material before. Not bad...but it just didn't rattle me, ya know!?
and now...
EKOMS
Flow: 15
Multis/Rhyme Scheme: 7
Originality: 7
Wordplay/Sims/Metas: 8
Stays On Topic: 15
Execution Of Topic: 4
Total= 56
*Now the structure was realy easy to read, didn't break out as many multi's as Ghost did, but did stay on topic better as well as painted a lyrical discription of a "true" Chicagoians mentality for their neighborhood. It was a lil more original. Talked about the blocks, the gangs (which is a huge problem here), The Sears tower, and other things. Best line was the "Windy City, where Twista's at" Because of the double meanin. 1. We are called the Windy City cuz of the lake front, but Illinois is know for it's tornado's and twisters. And 2. yes we are the home of Twista the artist. Theres other shit he could've done better, but it's still not a bad score.
Ending Vote: EKOMS
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Evolution
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Mar 06, 2008 9:44 pm |
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3-2
no need to explain it toyh, its all good
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ThaOneYouHate
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 7:12 pm |
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Arvincible
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Post subject: Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 5:01 am |
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ghost won this already, i dont think i have to vote.
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Post subject: Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 10:18 am |
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then dont? lol, still uppin for this to end
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ThaOneYouHate
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Post subject: Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 6:50 pm |
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Think You Might Get More Success With Gettin Votes if Ya Moved it Lol... Like Move it To Tha Battle Grounds.. Then After it's Done Bein Voted On Move it Back... Otherwise it's Prolly Never Gonna Get Any More Votes Then it Already Has..
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