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Post subject: Fuck it, why not...
PostPosted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 12:25 am 
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Just thought I'd throw a couple up for yall to check out. Give me feedback... positive, negative, doesn't matter.


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Post subject: Re: Fuck it, why not...
PostPosted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 1:10 am 
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the first two u get mad props for second two were aight still last 1 was pretty dope i wasnt feeling 74 quite so much
all in all tho fam ur talented man keep em coming

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Post subject: Re: Fuck it, why not...
PostPosted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 1:43 am 
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71 - sounds like its sampled from a movie score the lil switchups are cool no real spot for a hook though, drums are ok the tom sounds bad when it hits on the one kick before the snare

45 - melodys really odd, bass is played an octave or two too low its barely distinguishable drums are a lil too stiff bounce is too robotic, its cool but a lil too empty overall imo

77 - sample chop is dope drum switchups are cool this would sound 20x iller with a bassline instead of just bassy kicks, probably the best outta the 4 imo

74 - melodys real weird and atmospheric but i like it bass is played too low again, drums aren't that great i like how they build up but they kinda sound like an organ preset drumloop or something i dunno, this beat has the most potential to be ill just needs to build up to a crazy chorus breakdown then maybe a solo or two

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 5:30 am 
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45.Wierd synth you used, I sorta liked it. For some reason it didn't sound like one whole beat, like the drums sounded too separate from the from, really nice drum line though

71.Once again you used a very different synth, I liked it though. This may be a new style that could be very unique and good. Drums are good, sound a little distorted at times though. I liked it all together though.

74.Cool intro, liked the bells, intro lasted a little bit too long, liked the atmosphere

77.Nice chop job on the sample, like Jesus said, a bass line would nicer. I really liked this one, as far as changing anything maybe a little piano or something could have made it better to give it more variety. Nice switching up one the drums

Overall, good shit, just keep experimenting and you'll learn a lot and be able to improve your craft more. Keep working at it.

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Post subject: Re: Fuck it, why not...
PostPosted: Thu Dec 24, 2009 5:28 pm 
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45: sounds a gd mix on drum clarity.

71: synth is gr8, nice drums again...

74: this has an original feel like sort of an alternative track.....

theyre soft & mellow and def a good style developing man.... nice1

id advise that u just keep working on them and they'll turn out sweet.


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