okay just got back from the studio its 4 am i'm postin this in the Chamber cause i think it turned out pretty dope... lemme know what u guys think!!!!!!

Nice shit law..


Im feelin that shyt.

tyvm!!! can i get some more feed please?!?!?

-- Wed Sep 09, 2009 4:12 am --

damn... i'd like some more feedback por favor!!!!!

Great Concepts, Great delivery and lyrics, The vocals could have been a little higher, over all this is a good track man.. Makes you think.. 8/10.

definetly gettin better man,as deciple said the vocals cudda been a little louder but its kool. beat is tight. flow an delivery is much better,not that it was horrible before but ur improving. keep droppin man ur doin good.

Agreed. Mixing on this joint is good as far as clarity and everything...but the vocals need to come up a notch becuz the beat flushes you out a bit. And that's bad considering that the beat is real soft and doesn't get very aggressive.
Now as for the track itself...you flow is on point with the beat. Emotions are aboard, lyrically it's very stable. I like it. Get the vocals up and you've got yourself another nice banga!
...you've also gotten better at choosin beats to use lol Your taste has improved. Hat's off whoever is engineering your sessions and mixing. Your shits real liquid now!

wow thanx for all the feedback!!! yeah i agree i didn't think the vocals would be soft like they were... but he said he was gonna mix it some more... its probably because i was spittin softer into the mic... but i was worried i was gonna clip like i usually do... lol... but i'ma work on that shit... but thank you for the feedback!!! and big ups to my producer Lifted One in Warrenton!!!! and Kurse i'm gonna hit u up in a PM here inna minute...

this is a dope track man...lyrics r fire...n da beat is also...like kurse said...the beat needs to be either lowered...or the vocals brought up...cuz theres certain parts where it muffles ur vocals.....otherwise dis shits nice....besides u soundin like u got a frozen box of dicks in ur throat!!!..LOL!!!...just bustin ur balls..haha...dat would be horrible haha...but yeah keep it up...and hurry up n send me some shit to collab on man

an excellent lyrics and beat...mix is great...tho vocal is quiet..but anyway its good track...sad but good

This beat is smooth i like it..

verse 1 flo is pretty on point..presence is smooth deliv matches the vibe..

hook is pretty sik..nice concept

2nd verse lyrically seems more personal..flo's aight too ..but like they said ya gettin drowned out a bit..

all in all a pretty dope drop man..i'm likin what you've been doin lately alot more..keep doin ya thing...1

can i put this on the Illest Mixtape

yeah thats cool... i'ma try n record some more shit on Saturday or Friday either one of those days lol which ever works for my producer... so if i get it done i'll post it up on IL n u can use that one too...

aiight thanks mayne

dope beat bro...your flow is on point...

-Jay89

I like this beat it's illy.... I think the vocals coulda been pushed up a lil cuz I had to really focus to hear the verses....

Your flow sounded a lil better on your first verse then the second... but your feeling was there and i could def feel the personal shit that made the song better

who made the beat?

anyway good shit... and return the favor homie!