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Post subject: Made You Look Freestyle..
PostPosted: Mon Jul 13, 2009 2:58 am 
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Yea i kno its short but just liten to what is said...


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Post subject: Re: Made You Look Freestyle..
PostPosted: Mon Jul 13, 2009 5:42 am 
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you fell off timing slightly on some of the beat breaks but it wasn't that noticable dope shit overall

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Post subject: Re: Made You Look Freestyle..
PostPosted: Mon Jul 13, 2009 6:20 am 
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Whats your soundclick/myspace?

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Post subject: Re: Made You Look Freestyle..
PostPosted: Mon Jul 13, 2009 5:20 pm 
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daamnnn...shyt's ill fam..haha..i like the flow..
presence is good too ral talk fam.. nuff said...1

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Post subject: Re: Made You Look Freestyle..
PostPosted: Mon Jul 13, 2009 6:38 pm 
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I thought this shit was nice. You sound kinda like an angry AZ or something if I had to compare to anyone in the game. Liked the presence, quality coulda been higher but I'm not bitchin. Nice shit. Glad to hear that we don't have a lot of corny sounding cats on here lol. I may have to go fuck that up one of these days though.

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Post subject: Re: Made You Look Freestyle..
PostPosted: Mon Jul 13, 2009 9:53 pm 
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this was dope. great lyrics and presence. its WAY better in all aspects to anything ive seen from you text wise which is kinda surprising. whats your myspace/soundclick..etc? coz i want evidence its the same Menace haha

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Post subject: Re: Made You Look Freestyle..
PostPosted: Mon Jul 13, 2009 10:06 pm 
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this is dope .
what equipment do you use? this is really good quality


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Post subject: Re: Made You Look Freestyle..
PostPosted: Tue Jul 14, 2009 2:53 am 
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Yo...this shit was pretty proper bruh! I agree wit Jesus...there seems to be a few tiny spots where it appears that you fell off beat just a tad...but other than that I was presently suprised to hear you get off the way you did. That beat is serious mayne...so when you try to pop off on an industry beat that hard, you have to bring your A-game! I felt you kicked up sum dust wit this one! Definitely make the next one longer though.

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Post subject: Re: Made You Look Freestyle..
PostPosted: Tue Jul 14, 2009 2:57 am 
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Thanx For the feed fellaz..

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Post subject: Re: Made You Look Freestyle..
PostPosted: Tue Jul 14, 2009 3:17 am 
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this was tight dude.. I definitenly need to get you on one of my tracks spittin whats worth spittin.. 9/10 for real.

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Post subject: Re: Made You Look Freestyle..
PostPosted: Tue Jul 14, 2009 8:44 pm 
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Hot Track real nice


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Post subject: Re: Made You Look Freestyle..
PostPosted: Wed Jul 15, 2009 5:35 am 
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the beat was to loud and and lyrics were low, but what i could hear was dope as fuck man

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Post subject: Re: Made You Look Freestyle..
PostPosted: Thu Jul 16, 2009 11:22 am 
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4 sho make da next track longer like 2 hear more did hear wat Kurse and Jesus heard but its nice tho flow is almost on point make sure u go hard on da next one beat is dope of course it is still love dat shit keep droppin nigga


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Post subject: Re: Made You Look Freestyle..
PostPosted: Thu Jul 16, 2009 1:41 pm 
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this one was fire better than ur first drop keep them up

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Post subject: Re: Made You Look Freestyle..
PostPosted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 12:58 am 
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