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-- Tue Dec 22, 2009 2:58 pm --

I heard of no crew votes, I don't know that applies for crew battles. LOL

Time for round two, you so hard? then grab ya glocks, this when when the rap career for this faggot stops
you're barely sick, the rest of ya lame, the only time "Qu" is best for the game, is in scrabble blocks!
you'll need a sniper ta beat me, it's a long shot, ask all around the site and they'll tell you ya garbage
This dude "Q" right here is so irrelevant to what's goin' in , almost like his role in the Quantam of Solace*
got a question? check the Fire At Quix that I'm Spittin, my loss count after this, they'll still be a sixth that I'm missin'
only time people look forward to you droppin' bars, is right before someone fulfills your wishes in prison!
It's over for you fam, I'm bout to crush ya so call "rippin rhymes", you want defeat? there's many different kinds
even ya rapper that ya got in ya avatar doesn't know what the hell to make out of ya written lines
I'll slow down, go half to your advantage you'll need it, your verse'll be so weak cat'll be bearin' to read it
I garuntee you, after this battle, you'll be "over and done", just the the rest of a sex life for a paraplegic!




*First James Bond Movie without Q

Hmm, more of the "Q" lines...lol




well well, i beat this cump once allready i guess we calling this a fuckin Reunion of Herbs
I'll Attack his Cred, cuz dah only time we see 'Mass with Bread' is Communion at Church
so your 2 and 5?? i'll leave this author Embaressed, cuz you Lacking dah Proper Merits
want me tah beat this Bitch? i allready 'Done that Shit' so watch as i 'Son this Kid' like some Foster Parents
I Seen some of your Bars dog, those are played to the cored; like you Imatating dah Boards
cuz i think its fair to say 'Illest has Had Enough of M.E' just check the most hated Awards
I'm a Muster up some pain and Share the Hurt; he can't Bare tah Work cuz i Scared this Jerk!
Shell Shots will Tare his Shirt and bring 'Mass to his Knees' like Prayers in church
so you Say that your More Ill wid dah Scrable, Wordplay please, Nigguh Chill you seem Rattled
it appears my verse had a 'Mass Effect' i mean look, you just got Killed in this Battle!

Litterally!

Damn nice battle... I'm going to comeback and edit this later... this is a hardone. I need to break each line down and dissect it to get a point spread cause I can't call it right now.

Nice one guys!

ok ^

Votes need guys!

Mass:
Time for round two, you so hard? then grab ya glocks, this when when the rap career for this faggot stops
you're barely sick, the rest of ya lame, the only time "Qu" is best for the game, is in scrabble blocks!
(7/10 scrabble blocks line was clever nice punch)
you'll need a sniper ta beat me, it's a long shot, ask all around the site and they'll tell you ya garbage
This dude "Q" right here is so irrelevant to what's goin' in , almost like his role in the Quantam of Solace*
(7/10 personally I would’ve shortened this to say “Q is less irrelevant than his role in Quantam of Solace” – I said the same thing you said, but in less than 10 words – another clever punch tho)
got a question? check the Fire At Quix that I'm Spittin, my loss count after this, they'll still be a sixth that I'm missin'
only time people look forward to you droppin' bars, is right before someone fulfills your wishes in prison!
(5/10, another unnecessary long bar.. and I’m quite confused at the fact that you make instrumentals, and yet write lyrics that I don’t think would fit in most of your rhythms)
It's over for you fam, I'm bout to crush ya so call "rippin rhymes", you want defeat? there's many different kinds
even ya rapper that ya got in ya avatar doesn't know what the hell to make out of ya written lines
(6/10, The last line in it’s simplicity was funny. I like simplicity in battles)
I'll slow down, go half to your advantage you'll need it, your verse'll be so weak cat'll be bearin' to read it
I garuntee you, after this battle, you'll be "over and done", just the the rest of a sex life for a paraplegic!
(6/10 I just like the rhyming of read it/paraplegic – nice.. however Mass.. if you would just use half of your lines you’d flow much more to the “readers” liking IMO ( I could be wrong). Cause from what I see, you actually have 10 bars/20 lines in this verse should you have split most of your bars)

Quix
well well, i beat this cump once allready i guess we calling this a fuckin Reunion of Herbs
I'll Attack his Cred, cuz dah only time we see 'Mass with Bread' is Communion at Church
(8/10, nice personal set up and nice delivery of the punch)
so your 2 and 5?? i'll leave this author Embaressed, cuz you Lacking dah Proper Merits
want me tah beat this Bitch? i allready 'Done that Shit' so watch as i 'Son this Kid' like some Foster Parents
(7/10, first line nice multies, 2nd line stretched I would’ve shortened like “Want me to beat this bitch, I done that shit, now I’ll “Son’em” like Foster parents” 16 to 22 your words. Seems like it would’ve had the same effect and been more on flow)

I Seen some of your Bars dog, those are played to the cored; like you Imatating dah Boards
cuz i think its fair to say 'Illest has Had Enough of M.E' just check the most hated Awards
(8/10 nice word play Quix.. the last line was hilarious… trading M.E. with indications of yourself LOL)
I'm a Muster up some pain and Share the Hurt; he can't Bare tah Work cuz i Scared this Jerk!
Shell Shots will Tare his Shirt and bring 'Mass to his Knees' like Prayers in church
(7/10 nice multies but “Share the hurt/Bare to work was created to set up Prayers in church, but both phrases were kind of irrelevant IMO – still worked out as a good multi tho)

so you Say that your More Ill wid dah Scrable, Wordplay please, Nigguh Chill you seem Rattled
it appears my verse had a 'Mass Effect' i mean look, you just got Killed in this Battle!
(6/10 I don’t know if you fed off his verse or not, I could be wrong but I deducted a point off for this. I will say that this was a very funny closer. Kind of an “8 mile” finisher.)

Mass 31/50 & Quix 36/50, hmmm not as close as I initially thought…

Quix gets the vote. Nice battles fellas. Work on the flow Mass and you’ll be hella ‘ffective!

uppin for votes in this

quix leads 1-0

i gotta break this down i got yall !

MASS EFFECT


Time for round two, you so hard? then grab ya glocks, this when when the rap career for this faggot stops
you're barely sick, the rest of ya lame, the only time "Qu" is best for the game, is in scrabble blocks!
--lol nice opener ^^ bad multies but good line

you'll need a sniper ta beat me, it's a long shot, ask all around the site and they'll tell you ya garbage
This dude "Q" right here is so irrelevant to what's goin' in , almost like his role in the Quantam of Solace*
--the Q line has been used alot, but i liked the "long shot" in the set up line

got a question? check the Fire At Quix that I'm Spittin, my loss count after this, they'll still be a sixth that I'm missin'
only time people look forward to you droppin' bars, is right before someone fulfills your wishes in prison!
--best flowing bar so far, but i wasnt really feeling the punchline

It's over for you fam, I'm bout to crush ya so call "rippin rhymes", you want defeat? there's many different kinds
even ya rapper that ya got in ya avatar doesn't know what the hell to make out of ya written lines
--not workin for me

I'll slow down, go half to your advantage you'll need it, your verse'll be so weak cat'll be bearin' to read it
I garuntee you, after this battle, you'll be "over and done", just like the rest of a sex life for a paraplegic!
--lol decent closer, but seems a little simple




QUIX

well well, i beat this cump once allready i guess we calling this a fuckin Reunion of Herbs
I'll Attack his Cred, cuz dah only time we see 'Mass with Bread' is Communion at Church
--the "mass" nameplay has been used alot, lmao but this is creative

so your 2 and 5?? i'll leave this author Embaressed, cuz you Lacking dah Proper Merits
want me tah beat this Bitch? i allready 'Done that Shit' so watch as i 'Son this Kid' like some Foster Parents
--not feeling the foster parent line, but good flow

I Seen some of your Bars dog, those are played to the cored; like you Imatating dah Boards
cuz i think its fair to say 'Illest has Had Enough of M.E' just check the most hated Awards
--haha i love this line, very creative, my favorite of the battle

I'm a Muster up some pain and Share the Hurt; he can't Bare tah Work cuz i Scared this Jerk!
Shell Shots will Tare his Shirt and bring 'Mass to his Knees' like Prayers in church
--solid bar

so you Say that your More Ill wid dah Scrable, Wordplay please, Nigguh Chill you seem Rattled
it appears my verse had a 'Mass Effect' i mean look, you just got Killed in this Battle!
--not really feelin it


this was a good read, mass effect is alot more capable than he was a while ago, made good progress with his style,
but i gotta say quix came harder and more consistent with his punches, mass had a couple that impressed me
but he also had some nice set ups that let me down a bit,

vote - quix

i do gotta say this was great for a round 2, usually after the first round its all milked, but there were some nice lines on both sides

3-0 Ko.. -Closed & Updated-