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Post subject: Okay my turn..
PostPosted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 8:08 pm 
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some mixx tape shizz me and Petrafyne did saturday night/sunday morning

hahaha it's short..he did the final mixx..

hook both of us.

we cant be stopped,might as well not try
we cookin up schemes,makin'em searin hott,Fried
servin these fiends with speech 'crispy' like popeye's
when haters talk sly, we let the shots fly

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Tru got the top shine, i bring the hott lines
the way i rock mic's, no way they can stop i
i spark the torchlite, try not to get scorched by
the flames,cuz they on the rise like a fighter plane

say thiangs in way's to have ya memory stained.
stay major blazed that's why my memories fade
maintain my way's,lay to waste the fake
change a hater's face who said i would never be great

jah boy's a real move maker Tre be the Truest
spew it in ya noodle brutal enough to make you lose it
futile to resist against a force this unstoppable
mission impossible i run through every obstacle
sorry too lazy to write petrafynes verse out right now.


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first verse Tre Tru
2nd verse Petrafyne

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faggot! my puns will hit ya chest like n H BOMB
the shock will cause ya heart attacks like gilbert GRAPES MOM

i'm sumthin like a 'barber ' with the way i CHOPP HIS WIG
ill 'skate' with stealin this win away like i'm 'ROB N BIG'(the T.V. show Rob's a pro skater)

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 1:19 am 
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Tre
the flow was off the hook ya verse had great feel to it the verse itself was well written had great multies n shyt i felt it nice verse

Petra
ya verse was good was well rode the beat well like Tre wasnt really feelin ya verse as much as Tre's but it was good shyt nice multies in there as well although sum of the shyt didnt quite rhymes but it was aiight

Overall
this was good two nice verses with the hook which was actually fire IMO
keep'em comin

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 4:06 am 
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we cookin up schemes,makin'em searin hott,Fried
servin these fiends with speech 'crispy' like popeye's


dats dat shit right there...lol...yall both got off...hook def was fire...yall verses were raw n on point...keep doin u...we gotta get a collab er some shit together..u two...n AME er some shit.....get a bunch of us on it..haha

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 4:48 am 
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ay yo..dass a dope idea..VIRAL..we down..

and mutual thanks alot for the feed..dude
we started writing the shyt at like 2 am..
by the time we were done recording it was like..
6 am...hahaha

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faggot! my puns will hit ya chest like n H BOMB
the shock will cause ya heart attacks like gilbert GRAPES MOM

i'm sumthin like a 'barber ' with the way i CHOPP HIS WIG
ill 'skate' with stealin this win away like i'm 'ROB N BIG'(the T.V. show Rob's a pro skater)

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It's Jah boy "Tre Tru" holla


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PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 5:40 am 
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worrrd..well shit hit me up on MSN er watever u use..u should be able to get it off my profile..if not ask kurse or ill get ur email from him...whichever

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 11:39 am 
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Beat Was Hott.. Good Prescense .. Liked How U Switched Ya Flow On This Joint..
You Deff Came Hard.. Good Delivery N What Not...

Petra You Came Off Pretty Cool 2 .. U Guys Make Good Tracks Togetha...

I Liked First Rule Better I Think I'm Not Sure Though ..

Anyways Good Shit 2 The Both Of Yall Keep Droppin

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 12:07 pm 
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dis shit is dope beat was crack haha liked wat u did wit da intro lol haha hook was dope lyrics 4rm both of ya'll was on point come out cocky as fuck on dis track and dats wat ya'll did keep droppin my niggaz


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PostPosted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 4:32 am 
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right on ya'll thanks for the feed...

viral i'll pm ya my email..

Haz thanks for the honest feed the mixxtape is just about done..
this is one of those songs..i'll make it available for free download off
my soundclick..

Hkx haha yeah we come off hella cocky on the mixxtape...
we touch more unique concepts on our original album..
wich should be out by mid 09

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faggot! my puns will hit ya chest like n H BOMB
the shock will cause ya heart attacks like gilbert GRAPES MOM

i'm sumthin like a 'barber ' with the way i CHOPP HIS WIG
ill 'skate' with stealin this win away like i'm 'ROB N BIG'(the T.V. show Rob's a pro skater)

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It's Jah boy "Tre Tru" holla


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PostPosted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 4:59 am 
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Popeyes is my shit nigga...haha I eat that shit everyweek...thank God they right around the corner!

As for your track. Mmmmm...uhhhh...yea, I'd say it's as good as Popeyes. It doesn't fill me as good as their butter bisquits do...but it comes close! haha Definately has replay value. It's good to hear you droppin off nice shit in the chamber. i don't think you've dropped one thing yet that sounded like boo-boo! so ur in the green sir! haha

Definately...we all need to do some more work together bruh!

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 5:00 am 
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Damn...seeing how it's lunch time, I'ma leave for an hour anf get sum Popeyes now that I heard this shit! Good call!

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PostPosted: Sat Feb 21, 2009 4:28 am 
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This Came Out Dope Glad We Went With The Popeyes Shit...
I'ma Clean Up The Intro A Lil... Make The Levels Match The Hook N Shit.
Just Ta Let Ya Know That Intro Was Not Planed, It's Just Random Shit We Do Before Our Verse.


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PostPosted: Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:50 am 
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keep dat shit kid don't touch it shit fits well wit da track leave it how it is homie lol


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PostPosted: Sat Feb 21, 2009 5:15 pm 
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im feelin the hook, shits real nice..
first dude sounded real comfortable on the beat, im really feelin the mic presence and how you connected with the idea of the track..
second dude sounded a little more elementery in his whole verse overall... doesnt sound real smoothe to me, tried to force some swagger on it, seemed like..

pretty good tho, keep ya heads high


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PostPosted: Sat Feb 28, 2009 11:29 am 
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ayy yo much respect for the feed Revil..

and Kurse that verse you sent to P was hott mayne...no jk..

HKX you too..ya'll work quik..nice change from what were
used to.. haha..imma record mine 2 morrow nite..


uppin for more feed..

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faggot! my puns will hit ya chest like n H BOMB
the shock will cause ya heart attacks like gilbert GRAPES MOM

i'm sumthin like a 'barber ' with the way i CHOPP HIS WIG
ill 'skate' with stealin this win away like i'm 'ROB N BIG'(the T.V. show Rob's a pro skater)

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It's Jah boy "Tre Tru" holla


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PostPosted: Tue Mar 03, 2009 4:32 am 
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this was hot tre,

loved the hook (even though i never heard of popeyes)

beats were great.

listened to this like 5 times,

keep up the good work man


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