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G/L Bruh... let's give'em somethin!

Check... gotta handle sum b.i. but I got this later on today.

For personal Reference: http://www.youtube.com/user/LionLovaman#p/a/u/1/Y4-1k9d2aOw

Check it Lyonel,
I peeped your scheme, shit you “literally” spit on the screen
Ya fleet’s “Supreme”? Maybe served with “Tortilla chips n cream”

I’ll split ya spleen wider than the gap tween the crux of ya teeth
What beef, I’m holdin’ just enuff heat to leave your guts in the streets

You ain't tougher than these Both you and ya boy will suffer defeat
Newsense and Vaughn’ll scatter like Vince in Couple’s Retreat

I’m “NYCE”… and “SERIOUSLY” you know what the fuck I mean
I rock teams, your whole squad’ll get touched like I-POD screens – HAHA!

Check the word play ----

Welcome to the mind of the one who is type ominous
thoughts caught in a bottomless pit, the mic-novelist,

dichotomous, quick to drag Vaughn through a slaughter-less drift
Who spit a vomitous birth with his verse first, but then taught her to quit

shit, Riggz’ll evict you without the rent like a superintendant
While your “case” is a lost cause, I maneuver “defendants”

Punches up root your descendants and leave you and fam naked
Cripple your mental so quick, you’ll need Rosetta to translate it

Regards,

Papa Riggz

I'll'slapp you lifeless', choke away your breath and break your neck
my raps'll slice and "jacknife Riggz" like a tractor trailer wreck

I got hands like Bruce in Game of Death, this asskickin should be illegal
FOOL your "QUEER rhymes ain't Tha TRUTH" just cuz you resemble a gay Beanie Siegel!

you ain't real to me! you display dick sucking skills for free
strippin naked for occult members, tellin em "DO WHAT THOU WILT WITH ME"

you a homo to the infinite degree, pretending to display some deep aggression
I preach perfection, ya name is "Riggz" but you far from a "lethal weapon"

Vaughn's a violent psycho wit eyes on titles, aiming for the main event breezing by your side show
you're just a net Rap Assassin, my microphone's a sniper rifle

you brought ya pathetic skill to the dead zone to get killed by this redbone
nigga who'll stuff you under dirt then piss on your headstone

wit miraculous script, crushin buildings, I'll bash your face and bruise ya
wit gravel fists, Riggz ya "rollin stone" Papa's pissed he ejaculated a loser

thought you was bringin heat? I hardly see flames thrown just retarded and lame flows
you ain't smart as you think bro, run and hide under the wings of ya Holy Guardian Angel///

fin

Votes please

-- Sun Feb 07, 2010 5:56 am --

Ahem... votes por favor?

Damn Vaughn, we can't get no luv up in this piece. Mufuckin' sleepaz.

ok ok i see noones dropped any love on this yet. lemme jus be one of the first to say that this match had me rollin off both ends. riggz u came slick wit it dawg. vaughn u got down also. lemme give a quick bd


I peeped your scheme, shit you “literally” spit on the screen
Ya fleet’s “Supreme”? Maybe served with “Tortilla chips n cream”

haha. i didnt get it till i saw that video. ku ku. lets continue....

I’ll split ya spleen wider than the gap tween the crux of ya teeth
What beef, I’m holdin’ just enuff heat to leave your guts in the streets

gap was laughs, but then got played on the rest of the bar.

You ain't tougher than these Both you and ya boy will suffer defeat
Newsense and Vaughn’ll scatter like Vince in Couple’s Retreat

i liked it. vince shit was....eh. but i understood it.

I’m “NYCE”… and “SERIOUSLY” you know what the fuck I mean
I rock teams, your whole squad’ll get touched like I-POD screens – [i]HAHA!

hahahaha. god damn i aint heard that one yet amazingly. haha. shits crazy dawg.

Welcome to the mind of the one who is type ominous
thoughts caught in a bottomless pit, the mic-novelist,

dichotomous, quick to drag Vaughn through a slaughter-less drift
Who spit a vomitous birth with his verse first, but then taught her to quit

all this was dropped nicely dawg. flowed real well an everything.

shit, Riggz’ll evict you without the rent like a superintendant
While your “case” is a lost cause, I maneuver “defendants”

??? i knew what u meant but common riggz.

Punches up root your descendants and leave you and fam naked
Cripple your mental so quick, you’ll need Rosetta to translate it

could of ended it alot better but good overall dawg. altogether, ya shit was hot. id hit ya wit a 7.5/10 jus cus u could of came a lil harder.

now the homie vaughn....

I'll'slapp you lifeless', choke away your breath and break your neck
my raps'll slice and "jacknife Riggz" like a tractor trailer wreck

i like the play on the name. could of opened a lil stronger imo.

I got hands like Bruce in Game of Death, this asskickin should be illegal
FOOL your "QUEER rhymes ain't Tha TRUTH" just cuz you resemble a gay Beanie Siegel!

haha. he kinda does huh.


you ain't real to me! you display dick sucking skills for free
strippin naked for occult members, tellin em "DO WHAT THOU WILT WITH ME"

hmmm.....ok

you a homo to the infinite degree, pretending to display some deep aggression
I preach perfection, ya name is "Riggz" but you far from a "lethal weapon"

veddy veddy nice juan. specially cus i jus saw lethal weapon again not too long ago. haha

Vaughn's a violent psycho wit eyes on titles, aiming for the main event breezing by your side show
you're just a net Rap Assassin, my microphone's a sniper rifle

ku ku. almost felt a little forced. ?? i dunno. ku either way tho.

you brought ya pathetic skill to the dead zone to get killed by this redbone
nigga who'll stuff you under dirt then piss on your headstone

shit was straight. nutn over the top but ya came wit it either way.

wit miraculous script, crushin buildings, I'll bash your face and bruise ya
wit gravel fists, Riggz ya "rollin stone" Papa's pissed he ejaculated a loser

mmmm....ok ok. kinda saw what u were tryna do wit that. came ok but could of came a lil better.

thought you was bringin heat? I hardly see flames thrown just retarded and lame flows
you ain't smart as you think bro, run and hide under the wings of ya Holy Guardian Angel///

same as what i said for riggz. you could of wrapped it up a lil tighter that that. but regardless, it was on point. overall, i gotta give ya a 7.3/10. <----yup thats right. it was real close cus like i said at the beginning, ya both had me laughin a couple times. but Rriggz' line "ya whole squad'll get touched like ipod screens" hahaha. damn i dunno why but after readin both a few times, that line was the only one that stood out to me. so i gotta give it to riggz on this one. vaughn ya shit was tough but it was jus that little extra effort i guess. i dunno. hope the break down was clear enough and fair enough.

vote: RIGGZ


Loon E Out..........

good lookin on the broke down vote... precciatee it.

Personals - Vaughn,
Punchlines - Riggz
Flow - Riggz
Nameplay - Vaugh,
Wordplay - Riggz,
Multis - TIE..
Enjoyment - Riggz..

good battle dudes, both come with solid verese's i was suprised when i saw vaugn's drop defintly elevating man, riggz just stayed consistant the whole way through vaughn wasnt that far from getting my vote though,

Personals/Vaughn,
Punchlines/Riggz
Flow/Riggz
Nameplay/Vaugh,
Enjoyment/Riggz..

v/ riggz

riggz just got it for me, his seem more enjoyable. leave feed on my drop in the scriptures if yall can.

^^
Not Countin That.. He Just Copy And Pasted What Sequence Typed... And Minused Tha - And Added A Slash Lol.. if This Stays Open Too Long i'll Count it Though Or Drop A Vote Myself...

Flow:riggz this was close but vaughn got a lil choppy like once
Multis:tie
Complexity:tie both had some complexity but not to much
Creativity:riggz the ipod thing was fuckin nice
Punch lines:riggz this was a close
Personals/np:vaughn

this was a closer battle then i thought it would be but final score riggz-5 and vaughn-3

vote-riggz good shit tho

3-0 KO..

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