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Post subject: Punchlines - 2 bars  Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2006 6:01 am |
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make sure to use punchlines
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2006 6:13 am |
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Yo, Kid You Don't Even Hang Near Me
Nobody Believes Precise Hype Like The Big Bang Theory!
When Precise Battles Me And Doesn't Actually Write
He's At A Slight Disadvantage, Like Climbing An Avalanche
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2006 6:45 am |
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avalanche? the snow falls like toms-career/
he raps audio and ill lend an awkword-ear...//
the big-bang, is scientifically proved like my name is//
and your shit-stains? yea almost as brown as youre avatars mayne-is//
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2006 6:50 am |
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yo whats up with that? it seems ur flows tense
but the rap was like your life makes no sense
call yourself precise? yet you can't read or write
ill put a hole in your fucking surface like a metorite
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Post subject: Posted: Tue Oct 31, 2006 10:26 pm |
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since the topic seems to be space ill cling-to-patterns//
lets face it, in a month ill be holdin more fuckin rings-then-saturn//
hmm, ive often wondered toms ethnicity, and if ians his name or just another-he-took//
but lets face it, his whole "image" is black AND white, like a brand new colouring-book//
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2006 4:55 am |
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Your Nothing Man Just Spitting Some Text At Me
Like Stage 4 Lung Cancer, Its Evident You Can't Beat Complexity
I'm Setting A Precedent, U Know This Kid Fears The Flow
Your Using Punchlines That Are Hot! "four years ago"
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2006 12:28 pm |
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I should have cancer cause im smokin complex//
your rhymes are weak,couldn't feel when they flex//
Are you crazy, no ones fearin-your-flow//
man your rhymes are weak,the view is clear-at-your-show//
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from 3 at pm to 4 in tha mornin this bitch will be workin//
pay her 50 dollars and shell be contortin' and explorin your jeans//
doin all sorts of nasty things, wipin the cum off her chin//
for 5 more dollars shell do it all again//
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Post subject: Posted: Wed Nov 01, 2006 11:04 pm |
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creativity, skills, just being ill, i give the reader all this
nobody gives a fuck about sky not even meteorologist
your style is shit, i got the vialest spit,you should just forfeit
oh yah...you'd choke on smoke like taking a toke off a bong while your sick
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 12:49 am |
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complexity you are in FACT bitch, you can get smacked-quick//
ive noticed youre "gums" keep flappin like youre spitting through "wacks-lips"// (wax lips..gum)
plex, why is it that in cyphers your rhymes suck? look just dont take part-in-em //
youre skill stops like ali's did after he got parkinson//(spelling? lol the disease)
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 10:20 am |
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precise must be wearin wax lips thats why he cant spit//
ill diss em both,plex and precise should quit//
No one cares about sky..what are you high?//
you both couldn't out rap richard simmons so why try//
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from 3 at pm to 4 in tha mornin this bitch will be workin//
pay her 50 dollars and shell be contortin' and explorin your jeans//
doin all sorts of nasty things, wipin the cum off her chin//
for 5 more dollars shell do it all again//
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 1:20 pm |
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U Suck AT Rapping, Skywalker beating me it wont happen
You'd Have A Better Chance Seeing Kevin Federline Go Platinum
Slashing This Bitch In Half, Everyone I Know Hates Him
You'll Never Win A Battle, To Bad I Couldn't Donate Wins
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Post subject: Posted: Thu Nov 02, 2006 11:20 pm |
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word, you write awkword and seem-to-lie//
sky---WalK---er <--- you should leave, read between-tha-lines//
please-resign or youll be-defined as a weaker-mind//
all your shit is pointless like returnin to the scene-of-crime//
yea wack, i got writers block like mad lol
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~Symbolikull~
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Post subject: Posted: Fri Nov 03, 2006 12:05 am |
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For You! Help is Dim, treat you like acid and Melt yuh Skin,
My Lines are fat yuh rhymes Gettin Thin like your overdosin on Dexatrim,
Ill Incave ya Skull, you aint got heat if you Aimed then Pulled,
You aint Made of Nul, you couldnt be the "shit" if you Payed the "Bull"
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Ima beast Ill decease you wit My Bare Hands, witta grips like a vise leave yuh pipes tight Like Bear Traps,
Im in the shawdows unseen In Sights Stared At, I'll rip you spiritless jus to show you what yuh Night Mares Lack,
You better Pray to the Heavens, when Im Sprayin that Weapon, Im the crypt keeper Changin yuh Message,
This Razors yuh Death Wish, Shavin Intestines, finding a new Place to Inject yuh Veins wit Infections,
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 5:23 pm |
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LISTEN DUMMY, THERE IS NOTHING REAL ABOUT GHOST
HIDE FROM ME, I'll BURN DOWN THE FUCKING OUT-POST
THERE IS NOTHING AUTHENTIC ABOUT A GHOST
EVEN UNITED POSTAL SERVICE WOULD DOUBT YA POST
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Nov 04, 2006 5:23 pm |
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SHUT THE FUCK UP, U STAY FAKIN, I'M ABOUT TA POST
THIS BITCH IS CLAY AIKEN HE NEEDS TO COME OUT TA FOLKS
ON A SERIOUS NOTE, YOUR NOT NEAR-ME, JUST FEAR-ME
I DONT SEE NOTHIN IN GHOST, LIKE I'M NOT SEEING CLEARLY
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