10-12 lines
house rules blah blah
drop whenever

Sorry bout the hold up, been Real Busy hommie!

G'Luck n just match mah Bar quantity!


hurz a Quick Murder, yah Dig?




Sorry Dog, But
Your Writings Weak, Herb! Designs are Fine but stop Biting Cheaterz!
This 'Bloakz Trash, so watch me 'Smoke HAze' without Lighting Reefer!
I Make Money Dog, And Get Carrotz; if you deny i'm a Beast then Inspect Merits!
I mean My Texts Cherrished! So my votes 'Double J's' like Jeff Jarret
I've Ruined fagz, and still Dominated Scriptz, With Bombs n Faded Dicks!
You Should Just Quit! Cuz quite frankelly you 'Ain't good For shit' like Constapated Kids
I'm a Eat this Chump, call it a Picnic, Straight Murk this Geek! its Curtains, Please;
this Thug gets Boo'd' cuz dah 'Only kids looking up to you' are Migits and Circus Freaks
Your Awefull Dog, Absolutlley Nothing Bitch! I'm Bustin Clipz at Haze and His Cousins Whip!
Leaving Blood in it; Yous a Fake; cuz the 'Only Heat he touching' Requires Oven Mits

-- Sun Nov 15, 2009 4:25 am --

Waiting on dudes Verse~!!!

im sick of weed lines from weak minds, this bitch is diein' sour
i hope you do hit them trees.... at sixety miles an hour
i know im good, but "pac" comparisons, i wish you wouldnt
id never say im better but ill murder 'Q' like 'bishop' couldnt
but since he battlein me im guessin q is skepticle
with no culinary skills i will make this fruit a vegatable
i leave em gaspin breathless when i lean and blast the weapon
and when i say that ur ine trouble i dont mean a tract infection
you shud just quit rappin, your dreams to make it are iffy
your only chance to "be a millionaire"....
.....is to have a baby by fifty


if you dont understand the 2pac/bishop line then im sorry but you have no business on a hiphop forum, peace

vote up

Flow-JHaze
Wordplay/Nameplay-Quix
Multies-Quix

Not the best I've seen from either of you guys.

Vote-Quix

Wow, close battle...
Quix you had a few nice ones and some played ones
The constipated line has been used more times than Pamela Anderson's pussy, but I liked this "I Make Money Dog, And Get Carrotz; if you deny i'm a Beast then Inspect Merits!
I mean My Texts Cherrished! So my votes 'Double J's' like Jeff Jarret" -- haha

J - I got the Juice/Pac/Q line, just didn't like the way you put it together... however, after that you came pretty tight - fruit/veggie line made me chuckle
"i leave em gaspin breathless when i lean and blast the weapon
and when i say that ur ine trouble i dont mean a tract infection" -- pretty good
And I hate to admit it, but that Baby by 50 line was hilarious..

vote J-Haze

Quik:



Your Writings Weak, Herb! Designs are Fine but stop Biting Cheaterz!
This 'Bloakz Trash, so watch me 'Smoke HAze' without Lighting Reefer!
-Nice Opener......8/10
I Make Money Dog, And Get Carrotz; if you deny i'm a Beast then Inspect Merits!
I mean My Texts Cherrished! So my votes 'Double J's' like Jeff Jarret
-Not Really Feelin it.....5/10
I've Ruined fagz, and still Dominated Scriptz, With Bombs n Faded Dicks!
You Should Just Quit! Cuz quite frankelly you 'Ain't good For shit' like Constapated Kids
-Kinda Forced But Ok......7/10
I'm a Eat this Chump, call it a Picnic, Straight Murk this Geek! its Curtains, Please;
this Thug gets Boo'd' cuz dah 'Only kids looking up to you' are Migits and Circus Freaks
-Nice....10/10
Your Awefull Dog, Absolutlley Nothing Bitch! I'm Bustin Clipz at Haze and His Cousins Whip!
Leaving Blood in it; Yous a Fake; cuz the 'Only Heat he touching' Requires Oven Mits
-Decent Closer.....8/10


38/50



J Haze:



im sick of weed lines from weak minds, this bitch is diein' sour
i hope you do hit them trees.... at sixety miles an hour
-Decent Opener....7/10
i know im good, but "pac" comparisons, i wish you wouldnt
id never say im better but ill murder 'Q' like 'bishop' couldnt
-Sick....10/10
but since he battlein me im guessin q is skepticle
with no culinary skills i will make this fruit a vegatable
-Decent Line....7/10
i leave em gaspin breathless when i lean and blast the weapon
and when i say that ur ine trouble i dont mean a tract infection
-Nice wordplay.....9/10
you shud just quit rappin, your dreams to make it are iffy
your only chance to "be a millionaire"....
.....is to have a baby by fifty
-LMAO! Funny Closer......8/10



41/50






Wow This Was a Close one fellaz both came with decent shit but i just felt Haze's lines where alot more entertainin and direct, personal, overall good verse, Quix did his thing but just fell off alil.








V/J Haze

2-1

uppin yall