i dont need to be holdin a gat, no poles or bat
just my fists n whoever im throwin em at
you an absolute zero, and im colder than that
try holdin me back these cowards get rolled on
til they foldin in half

haha tight as hell bro good shit

want somethin to believe in? ya bitch knows me as her better other man
and ill leave you wit some bruises on ya face, those shades could never cover fam

<t>exposin' my foes as hoes yea they slowly recedin'<br/> caskets for those bastards, ya family mopein n greivin<br/> my dick deep in ya throat, faggit, choke on my semen<br/> hah.. yea i am just a tight rhyme spitter<br/> and my oppenents are people that you might find bitter<br/> im the night time...

yo four lokos are some buuuulllshit, straight up fuck em, they make u act a fool, i drank them shits twice the first time i fell through a table and the second time i fucked a chubby chick. fuck four loko

killed from a heavy blow,im the illest wit steady flow
rhymes deadly as machetes you can feel it jus let me know
i never slow, im just speedin n leavin oppenents shook
seriously underrated n its easy to see im overlooked

This is dope, i like the topic and you executed it nicely, its nice to read something different for a change its Ridiculous these Hypocrites that spit on the cross/ their system involved was not effiecient at all/ the mission is flawed it was not even written by god/ this was my favorite part but i ...

this is ill, mad deep and well put together, you can't see what's in front of you, then why keep lookin' back? you shouldn't ask, cuz the past will never be as good as grasped thats tight^ no I don't want to be sheltered, I want to go it alone life is just another broken code, put it together mold i...

i havent been on here in ages, nun serious five bars for fun whos down

8 bars due a week after check ins

First half of a story peice, 2nd half will done by the end of the week, She's walkin into work and shes ten minutes late lookin like her usual no make up on her face Shes beautiful but to some it seems that shes a waste she gave up on her dreams and their easily replaced wont wake up and believe the...

agree with the feed above bro this pretty tight nice way to show people you got some skills with punches n multies ill be lookin for more from you

this is ill, forreal, you have talent i dont think people recognize enough when you stop just rhyming a few syllables at a time and start putting real thought into metaphors and shit, good stuff man keep it comin

just my opinion but sounds like you just need more practice writing, freestyle out loud to a beat, im serious it will help you write/learn how to structure syllables, it doesnt matter how much you screw up or whatever just do it it helps, and as far as multies go i read why you think they screw your...

lmao you know your my favorite poster on here right bro? you know what ill go drop somethin else just for you big homie haha