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- Sun Oct 04, 2009 3:50 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: qucikie, feed, dueces
- Replies: 2
- Views: 966
qucikie, feed, dueces
if i was fat id do a belly roll, eat jelly whole cuz im already slow but im not so i guess all thats left is sex wit extraterrestrials im freakin starvin kids, so i harvest limbs in apartments with the walls clothed with loose cartalidge, looks so marvolous in a basement in-cased with two asians abo...
- Sun Oct 04, 2009 3:50 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: FW
- Replies: 1
- Views: 977
Re: FW
Super short my dude, and this style of wrtitting had me confused so i could catch your rythm scheme majority of the time. Cypher more often
3/10 cuz of really short length
3/10 cuz of really short length
- Thu Jul 30, 2009 11:24 pm
- Forum: Cyphers
- Topic: freestyle cypher
- Replies: 117
- Views: 49982
Re: freestyle cypher
u dropped a cool verse, few bars are little stretched ^^^^ its hard to spit, walken with honest drips, my fluid, its.... gone n missed, the swet of an acid trip drips, a feen uses it my insecurities block thoughts while my music blits im accusing this envirment, this generations shit indulging in me...
- Tue Jul 21, 2009 4:22 am
- Forum: Cyphers
- Topic: freestyle cypher
- Replies: 117
- Views: 49982
Re: freestyle cypher
like ur wordplay ^^^ now i dont wanna burn my bridges, cuz i wanna return to this prison I yern for the women, in these minutes im stricken, sickened of liven soften my ridges, often like my arm injected off in the kitchen am i wrong for this privilege, as im calm armed with a witness if i weld that...
- Wed Jul 01, 2009 1:32 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: A vision
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1270
Re: A vision
i havent read your last drop but this flow'd well, you could have used more multis , your bars were a tad bit stretched so It fell off at some points but I always find out the gist. Over all this was an above average piece but still lacking general key elements, but elevation will take care of that ...
- Wed Jul 01, 2009 1:30 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: obama obama
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1113
obama obama
I ask a chance as I glance, tranced in reverie they say dance, as they rant to sever me we're haulted at prospering so obviously the benefit of the doubt is favored in their policies a new world order? is a spewed swirl'd boulder on our shoulders, our names documented in folders we're drunk off fame...
- Thu Jun 25, 2009 11:35 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: staying active (feed me)
- Replies: 2
- Views: 989
staying active (feed me)
u never put in work or smoked a blunt, where u from hater? your only similarity to weed is that your a "chronic Mastrbater" Im waitin for saints n got no patients delayin reincarnation forgotten and forsaken for four days-n fuckin whores-waist-in blast u wit a kamehameha like saiyans, leav...
- Thu Jun 25, 2009 11:06 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Its all reveries
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1585
Re: Its all reveries
thanx for the feed
- Sat Jun 20, 2009 12:40 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Its all reveries
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1585
Its all reveries
as my jaw drops I drew a scream, my palms got full of steam fear fought off da joy music brings, my babys mom now has a eulogy dis feels like wen applaud stops, I kno da audience is using me my thoughts brought amusing things, i wanna mute these dreams never got a marriage, or a carriage, just left ...
- Sun Jun 07, 2009 2:02 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Real talk after my dream
- Replies: 1
- Views: 869
Real talk after my dream
Listening to its words I get mixed signals so i check the thesaurus rythm'd it a chorus, everyone pulled their sticks n mine was da shortest It was a mistake thinkin it'll relate or replace an empty cemetary Maybe it'd get me out of this grave, vou'd Id stay but it smiled to say'.. "im goin bac...
- Fri Jun 05, 2009 7:38 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Mama Know Love/Ghetto Tale
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1399
Re: Mama Know Love/Ghetto Tale
well the reck guy basically broke it down so I dont kno wat to tell you mane
elevate, stay active, keep flowin in the cypher
elevate, stay active, keep flowin in the cypher
- Fri Jun 05, 2009 7:36 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: 7 Bars
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1900
Re: 7 Bars ( Still Active )
I totaly didnt understand any bars or wordplay in this piece "Like unicycles wit no balancin." No dis-respect to you but everything was just so random like "Girls be like I WONDER if I could be his WOMAN without a LASSO " I dont know how to got this concept of just scribbling any...
- Sun May 31, 2009 3:46 pm
- Forum: Hip Hop Discussion
- Topic: Trick Trick - The curse of the yung berg chain Sooo funny
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1051
Trick Trick - The curse of the yung berg chain Sooo funny
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DfRUQWo1SoA&feature=fvst
I know this is soo old, but its fuckin funny as fuck I just came across this bullshit. After hearing this Im entertained for the week, DAYYUUM!!!
I know this is soo old, but its fuckin funny as fuck I just came across this bullshit. After hearing this Im entertained for the week, DAYYUUM!!!
- Sun May 31, 2009 3:00 pm
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: Existance PT 1
- Replies: 0
- Views: 923
Existance PT 1
From what i could graspe, this is what it is Humans, a duplicating mammal enduring great lengths & time great strength, in-twined with metal and thoughts of false judgment can be effective, reality isnt always intended when created, anthropoids and closest to them, mammalian existed only with ve...
- Sun May 31, 2009 1:59 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Subject of fascism (READ)
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1348
Re: Subject of fascism (READ)
good lookin on feed, I;ll hit chu back on ur next drops
uppin
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