Back again, more raps, war attacks/ before tracks, I was a lame now I got whores on they backs/ the takeover, games about ta change extreme makeover/ like the ice age but my regimes way colder/ couldn't melt us if you brang the heat from the sun/ and my shit bang like im packin the heat for a gun/ q...

[GUA-GUA] My life has come to a cross point/ no longer am I standing straight cause i've crossed joints/ i'm smoking life out of death stressing a point/ cause of hearing good news i've been deaf now anoint/ that living is taken for granted till your time living/ is halted to join the non-living/ li...

THATS MY BOYS VERSE DONT REALLY KNOW HOW TO WRITE HIS VERSE OUT GOOD SO SORRY IF YOU CANT GET THE RHYTHM [GUA-GUA] Motivation drives me to stay patient, during this war of the new sensation/ we are tempted fools to get aggravated, over rap's dispute and altercation/ yet the demise of this game that ...

Life, whats the meaning, survival of the fittest/ a cold hearted demon, arrival of a menace/ man, we were sent here ta past test thrown are way/ the choose of wrong before right, depends if you born that way/ broken homes, shit the most scared child makes top notch dollars/ ive seen scholars workin ...

dont like stucture how it was written at all fix it up

Its everymen for himself/ like nobody recognizes your ability your covered in stealth/ gonna make it by myself, I don't need no help man/ see messin wit me, that aint good for your health man/ till I get big its back to studio, back to the lab/ back to my room wit a pen and a pad/ so I can write som...

LEAVE FEED ON BOTH MESSAGE Started all back in 1987/ mothers gift second son sent from heaven/ scrawny kid but never backed down when peeps was stepping/ born wit a shield held a mic for his weapon/ put his set on the map Chi-city stay reppin/ at the age of eleven, he wrote his first poem/ not raise...

Ill Hip-Hop, real Hip-Hop/ I cant let em steal Hip-Hop/ ill Hip-Hop, real Hip-Hop/ I cant let em steal Hip-Hop/ [VERSE] Naw I didn't bite the lines I just revised the structure/ my rhymes puncture, thunder and lightening blind struck ya/ my styles the kind thatll touch ya/ leave you beggin for more ...

nice collab put it on audio

"RAISED FROM THE BOTTOM IS THE BEGINNING OF ONE OF MY OTHER RAPS THAT WHY I SAY AWITCHED THE LINES" Raised from the bottom, pay attention I switched the lines/ play your position I switched my mind/ I wanna pump pistols and pack nines/ portray the image of legends Big and Pac when I bust m...

it had a nice style and the flow was consistent
i think you couldve maybe better with vocab
but ill give it 8.8/10

i see what yall sayin thats why i stop at 2 verses
thanks for the feedback

[CHORUS] This is our city, who the victims now, (we run this)/ and cant no government system hold us down/ were you from, (Chicago), were you from, (Chicago)/ were you from, (Chicago), were you from, (Chicago)/ this is our city, bang our test and youll die/ cause it aint worth reppin if it aint repp...

[VERSE 1] Let me take you to a place, wit pain and heartaches/ before rappers acted hard and fake, start the tape/ back when I was a young individual, dumb criminal/ open ya mind peep the visual/ back when it was about speaking ya mind/ preaching a line, not teaching a crime/ we used to hit the stre...