it was straight, keep it up.

well a freestyle......wow like i could tell when we're in a Wrtten Rhymes forums, which incase shows alot of songs don't get me wrong there are freestyles on here but most people lable the topic "Freestyle"....and i don't care if you call me a noob. or a Pro.....cause this shit is just a w...

really he didn't woop anyones ass he just sent some "Hate Mail" too some of the best on this website, you can't say he beat them because he wrote a song, now wait for 16 micz, All Killah, Ekmos, and complex write a song back, then you can say he won or lost...in your mind, all i know is th...

it was good....(I've seen better from Tom)

I'm tell you don't look into this song for the rhymes and wordplay look into this song as a story cause it's like i think anyone can put out a hot verse but can you make a hot song, that other people can picture and feel the song that was the idea i was going for like how B-Bear said "i sat bac...

yea i made it like that into a rhyme stroy i lost some of the rhymes on bars i know this but i wanna you to feel like you were in the story seeing everything I'm doing.

why did i waste my time reading that?

yo you got me...I'll try my best at this shit.

I'm mama boys yea i said it//
Live off my parents fuck up their Credit//
I have no Money I'm broke as you can get//
I drive a Geo, i use nawspaper to wipe my ass after a shit.

Idk Yet...but we'll get you one..lol

yo man that shit was tight....i liked it alot keep that shit coming.

Thanks man i was just on the ball today.lol

thank you like he said we made it in 30mins. now that I'm looking over it...I see some fuck up i need to fix but it's no biggie..i still like the Idea of the song and everything that went with it.