thanx for the feed- dont see the 50 cent connection at all-if your talkina about me sayin got pits thatll kill for free, well i do have pits three to be exact

not sure if im supposed to vote yet-is there another round coming?

nice verses was feeling a couple lines and felt the overall concept-I got the poet relationship early but then it felt like you kept trying to hammer it in, that was the only thing that bugged me a little, but good verse

nice post, it felt a little rhymy to me but i was feelin what you were saying

"cuz now nobody wants the ingredients to my recipe...
even when i was wack they were all blessing me..."

Liked that line alot

I could see where you were trying to go-good verse-im not big on making things rhyme a whole lot but it could have used a little more connections

preety good post, i like i how it wasnt all based on rhyming and was more based on substance, very respectable post

my bad, good look though

Good post, it did feel like it was taking forever to read which probably takes away from its affect but I was feelin it, good post

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