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this bitch can't beat me i'm fresh he only hard when around men thats why he out "campin" well he said he was "pitchin a tent" ^kinda played but ehh this faggot straight up first battle against me give me the win this is over bitch cud'nt be ReCinAll/Wreckin ball if he was on the...

Don't really think this was "fair" cus menace only dropped half of what instrumental did----??----fucks up with that. Anyway, I give it to instrumental, his flow was way smoother, his multies were good, funny thing is, some of instru's punches were played, but since he had a longer verse, ...

Thanks for the feedback....whats hhr ?

Check -- Sun Jun 21, 2009 8:12 pm -- Like His LOW SELF-ESTEEM I'll Leave His PRIDE lookin Bleek A 3rd RightHook To His Cheek-He Jus Got KO'D Twice This Week! You Suck-Admit It!-Why Else You Lookin At Oh And Two (0-2) N I Ain't Gotta Be An 'insTRUmental' To BEAT Right Thru You! * Ain't Got No Fight I...

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This is from another site i'm on .... my name there is killa4nia (so theres no confusion). lyrics: FUCK YOUR NATION-WE INVADIN LIKE SOME TERRORISTS DA GANG'S TEAR'N FLESH-LIKE WE RAZOR'S TO WRISTS YA'LL JUS SUICIDAL-N WE ON A MURDEROUS BINGE MAKE THESE BITCHES CRINGE-INJECT'D THE SICK LIKE A SYRINGE...

good mic presence. good flow, good lyrics, good emotion, singin kinda threw me off but it works.

Yeah Thats The Atittude You Gotta Have, Man. But Critcism Is, The flow is choppy bcause your lines are short (add more syllables). accent needs work (i got an accent so i feel you there). delievery is okay, but you might be tryin too hard.

Keep The Enemy Close-Turn Em Comatose Like Paraplegics Strategic In War Sequence-Squeez'n Blood Til They Mimic Anemics Inner Demons Are Scream'n-Release'n My Hate Thru Vengeance Love Is An Obsolescence In Me-Will Never Pray For Repentance Still God's Presence Is Embedded In Dreams-See'n The Holy Gh...

Yeah this is cool, my only thing was i didnt like how the 3rd line didnt rhyme with the 4th, kinda threw me off, nah mean ?

anyways, like what was already said, strong flow, good vocab, content is nice.

dug it. kinda too short to really get into it, nah mean. maybe at on to it, cus for what it is it's cool, can tell u free'd it cus theres no solid subject matter. but it's a good lil piece.

My Genetic Traitz Are Liable To Defy Science I Ain't Built For Dyin,But I Was Made From Violence I War Like A Titan, My BloodLine Is Fulla Giants On The Mic I Was Born A Tyrant-My D.N.A. Is Defiant Check My Iris-My Eye Is A Portal To Another Realm I'm Quick To Propell A Soul Straight To The Depths O...

I'm done for participatin