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CHECK IT OUT!!!!!!!!! Tell me what ya think of this.

IM GOING IIIIIN ON THIS!!!! recording monday or tuesday, and loon im gunna record that 'other' track too

Thanks for the awesome feedback, really appreciate it man.

Yeaah this is more like it, story tracks always catch my attention. The stick up kids lines are real dope I like em alot. The victim lines are good too, the 2nd one you can def relate to em if u ever been robbed. This is a pretty original drop I never heard anything on this kind of topic in a while....

the multis in the first 4 bars are killer, good way to start it off. good vocab in this. Some decent punchlines this could be used in a battle for sure. From reading your writing i can tell you have an underground type of style but like i said in the previous one i commented on you should try and do...

this is a solid drop, but i do agree with everyone else that its that kind of 'been there done that' type of verse. don't get me wrong though theres solid multi's and flow is on point when i read it

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SLkSQzE6EjY[/video]


CHECK IT OUT!!!!!! DL THE MIXTAPE TOO!!!!

http://www.datpiff.com/Audible-Thought- ... 63873.html

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3xFtjvi-HW4[/video]

Check it out

http://www.datpiff.com/Audible-Thought- ... 63873.html


Check it out brothers! Guaranteed banger, send me links and ill feed em!

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rx2qHDGjY3c[/video]

Single from my up coming mixtape "A Bag of Mixed Emotions"

Tell me what ya think!

This has a natural live sound to this, this could be a real nice song if you recorded and mixed the guitar, and then spit over it. I like these little drops you do though, i wish i knew how to play the guitar(Im learning) or someone that can play it. I would do the same thing lol.

the quality is nice, i would say up the beat a little bit more. You have a flow but you need to tighten it up a little bit more. Its a little choppy, just keep working at it. I would say try to spit with more emotion too in your delivery. Lyrics are alright what i expect from a song like this. Defin...

[video]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=b1wZD-iT8bM[/video]
Quick verse i jotted down to preview for my next mixtape that im trying to finish by end of August.

this is dope for a quick morning jot down lol.

Wouldnt expect less, dope shit homie