I agree. it was my first attempt. Any advice on how I can make it better?
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- Thu Jul 08, 2010 12:30 pm
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: what i see.
- Replies: 2
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- Thu Jul 08, 2010 4:09 am
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: Whos Love
- Replies: 6
- Views: 1616
Re: Whos Love
mmm... i really enjoyed this. while i was reading i could imagine a quiet beat in the background maybe some piano. damn son blew my mind.
awesssssome.
awesssssome.
- Wed Jul 07, 2010 4:34 pm
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: what i see.
- Replies: 2
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what i see.
I wrote this one when I worked overnight in a gas station. Its all things that I have personally seen. At 6 am the city starts to come alive. A city bus rolls down the street. Men off to work construction and students getting ready for school. But me I work in a gas station. I see what people don't ...
- Tue Jul 06, 2010 10:22 pm
- Forum: The Poet's Stage
- Topic: The Peace of Night
- Replies: 2
- Views: 1173
Re: The Peace of Night
I've felt the same way after a shroom trip. I enjoyed this a lot.
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- Tue Jul 06, 2010 3:58 pm
- Forum: New Users
- Topic: whats up my infants
- Replies: 4
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whats up my infants
so my homie illborate told me to join up and peep the poetry and other badass writing. ill put a writen up later. peace sons and sonlets -- Mon Jul 05, 2010 11:31 pm -- so I think I'll do my zombie. With the look in there eye it makes me want to fly away, but I stay not stray from the prey that I sl...