my kick back lyrically causes violent riff raff I'm rhyming while eating kit kats putting emcees underground six feet deep can you dig that? all these kids claiming their spits fat it's like excess blubber coming out of flaps ayo just shut the fuck up no one wanna join ya gay chit chat knowcon I'll ...

I heat seek with precision breathe deep,spit venom to defeat the opposition heavy mental,write masterpiece upon leafs trained rugged to kill in impossible conditions tongue and cheek,swallow my pride with no chaser implode the earth,ashes and sediments,glowing vapors abstract art pumping illness to ...

you certainly mix the modern rap lingo with awsome words placement and vocab.i like your imagery and over all abstract style that mixes poetry with modern rap.stay up bro.

I'm sure your audio is a perfect as this.word placement,mutlis and just raw lyrical content make this drop
one of the best written pieces on this site.stay up dunn.

I pound hammers on enemies and inflict calamity mass murdering emcee with suicidal insanity turn ya clavicle into baseball bat one by one beat your rappin groupie familly I'm bent on violence and commence in fatalities you couldent be sick even if your illest rhymes got a cold drill a thick metal ob...

freestyles dipped in molten lava then thrown like a javalin melanin' get blown in fragments of blown so what's happenin fuck the gun clappin I'm fittin to give enemies coloumbian bow ties quit your riff raffin you bitch ass,no good spits of rappin I punch a thousand pounds of spite to these faggots ...

when I get finished killing every wack person on earth// i'll be relieved of this lingering curse// using pictures of lil wayne for target practice// reelling in them herbs// with pristine lines// unorthodox rhymes slaughter your blatent syntax errors// shatter your spleen with twin nines// mind ove...

lyrically the presence emcees fear you cant endure the pressure i put to your cranial cavity put your body for wholesale up in them sears actually i manufacture words so precise splice up ya gene structure so you share dna with ed gein you cant handle the capacity dismantle wack emcees with the upmo...

your raw with the drop and simplistic which is not bad.i thought i caught some multi's in there which is cool.

enjoyed this piece very much.
stay up.
-knowconscience

like clogged toilets in a mental asylum,shit is crazy
i thought the line was cool but simple.

you have a good flow and your use of imagery is pretty ill.
i do feel some lines did not connect togther well though.
but hey... we all have difrrent styles so just stay up and keep droppin.

great vocab and word usage in your peace.ill instrumental chosen too..i was just peepin that beat a few days ago.ayo stay up kid i enjoy what you have to offer.great imagery.peace

this thread hasent had much buzz.but f it...im knowconscience and been in the hip hop forum game since 2002.very rusty and lookin to sharpen the blade a bit.