I find some humor in a big ass dude like you posting "I have a kitty." Am I the only one?

Ok, so unless a mod tells me any different, that's what I'm going with. Thank you both.

So, the rules say... "To vote in a battles you must have one or more of the requirements. -You must have dropped a piece in the scriptures/battled once" But they also say that we can't battle if we haven't voted in battles. Is there a post that I missed that clarifies this? If not, nobody ...

Irresponsibility is the only way to gain life experience, life experience makes for some good writing!

Riggz, no question. Came hard with every bar, personalized, and harsh. Sm0k3, your bars were generic, good showing but couldn't quite match up. Much respect to both, you kept me entertained.

Poetry is difficult to critique, I feel that as a reader, I have no right to tell people how their writing should be. Raps, on the other hand, it matters more about how enjoyable it is to listen to, how it's set up, etc. I've read a lot more than I've commented on. In fact, the only reason I opened ...

Poetry is very black/white to me. I either love it or hate it. I love this. It was easy to get sucked in to, the emotion of the piece is alive. Thank you for sharing it.

Thank you both very much. I see what you're saying, and have some solid ideas on how to improve it. Intrinsic, I do plan on writing more bars, I can't let the bad guy win

Cocaine, because it's too expensive and the main effect it has on me is making me want more. Ecstasy, because I don't trust it anymore. The last 10 times or so, it was cut with so much dope that I can't bring myself to do it again. Maybe if someone I trust has taken the same pills and tells me it's ...

Writing a song about how you do the right things and shit still doesn't work out. This is what I have so far, please criticize. Be honest, be harsh. I can take it. Hook: You can’t eat ethics And it ain’t real damn funny When all you have are morals But you’re real damn hungry, No money for food, Jus...

This is dope, not the conventional ridiculous shit that the mainstream is eating up. Real shit, much respect.

The name says it all. This is dope. No criticisms. Favorite lines are the ones in between "[Phasewon]" and the next post.

My vote is for Kau.
Krayzie, I liked some punchlines, but having to explain references just took the bite out of it. Good drop, but in my opinion, he got you.
Respect to both of you though.

I was about to post the same question in a thread, cause I've seen some random names that I wanted a story behind. That's how I found this one. Skunkle Sam is a reference to Uncle Sam, and how the shitty excuse for a government skunks anyone and everyone out of anything and everything that they can....

I couldn't find flow in it, the content isn't bad. My biggest criticism is the title of your post. Why would you want to be someone else? I can't relate with Em, but I'd never say I'm the next Slug or Aes Rock. People want to hear somebody being them, not somebody trying to be someone else. I'd sugg...