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I'll Post Up Later If I Can Cuz im Jus Gettin Back In Town.. Im Busy Rite Now

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I Like It Cuz Im Ah' Basketball Fan.. But I Think U Shouldve Mention'd Tha Celtics too But Aye.. Tha Openin Was Fire.. You Had Some Good Lines In There Overall This Was Ah' Good key.. Couldve Add'd Some More Metaphors And Nameplay.. But It Was Quick And Effective... Keep Doin Ya Thing Bri Feed Or Vo...

This Was Solid


Flow Was On Point.. You Had Multies Here And There Made It Good.. I Think If You Shorten'd Some Bars Ah' Lil It'll Sound Beast On Ah' Track



Keep Doin Ya Thang Bro


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Yea.. I Wanna Be Mention'd In Tha Next One lol

I Think You Had Ok Punches And Personals.. It Was Ah' Good Read..
Maybe Some More Multies Would Help.. Tha Flow Was Decent Tho


Keep Doin Ya Thing Dude And Drop Some NeW Shit


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Good Looks Meek And Loon'E

Imma Start Droppin More Topicals So I Can Practice On Specific Subjects
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If You Read This Please Feed So I Could Elevate.. You Dig Flow On Tonkers..I Kid Shit Goin Bonkers.. Its Thrillin Str8 Eye Candy Like Clothin Sponsors For Illest Ah' Spit Give Addictive Qualities So Properly Equality Not Probably Naked Skier Demo Body Frees Who Stoppin Me Ought To Be I Mean Got To B...

Alot Of Metas.. Couple Of Multies And Some Good Vocab Made This Piece Pretty Interestin To Read.. I Think You could've Add'd Some Harder Hittin Punches To Make It Even More Appealing But It Wasnt Bad At All As Is..


Good Job

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This Was Nice. Its Like Simple Rhymes Made Effective I Think.. Good Shit All In All
Aiight Punches.. It Went Well Wit Tha Verse.. Jus Get As Creative As Possible And Add Some Wordplay..

Decent Keystyle


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And Sorry For Tha CamRon Flow In Tha Beginnin.. Ive Been Listenin To Dipset All Week.. I Be Chillin Wit This Harlem Chick So Yea.. Aye Yo MuMA


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Yo.. Tha Way You Put Tha Instrumental In Was Good For You.. Everytime I Seen Someone Attempt That Idea It Was Trash Or Off Key Due To Their Crazy Accent Or Something. So Where You From Anyways.. Cool Drop.. A Lil Deep But Tha Multies And Metaphors Made It A Lil Interesting.. I'd say Jus Work On Addi...

Yo This Was Pretty sweet.. You Put Together Tha Vocab Pretty Well In My Opinion. Flow Was Nice.. Real Audio Like You Dig..

I Think If You Form'd Multies Ah' Lil Better.. Throw Some Metaphors And Punches Around.. You'd Be Beast.. Real Talk..


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