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- Thu Jun 16, 2011 6:04 am
- Forum: Cyphers
- Topic: THATS FUCKED UP!!!!
- Replies: 11
- Views: 4947
Re: THATS FUCKED UP!!!!
i'm the typa guy to bring a girl to a bar, forget the fuck i brought, and walk out with the wrong broad, i just dropped her off, at the wrong apartment and nodded off, and woke up on her momma's lawn, with a broken condom on, my word's worth shit, like i'm textin wile i'm on the john, i just ditched...
- Thu Jun 16, 2011 5:30 am
- Forum: Cyphers
- Topic: last word Cypher
- Replies: 208
- Views: 107868
Re: last word Cypher
i'm like whatever man,
my rhyme is sick as shit,
it's startin to feel a bit,
under the weather and,
i'll put your career in a coffin,
if you get to slackin,
i don't mean i'm coughin,
when i say i'm hackin,
i get awful mean when i get to stabbin,
my stomach's getting lean cuz of all this laughin
my rhyme is sick as shit,
it's startin to feel a bit,
under the weather and,
i'll put your career in a coffin,
if you get to slackin,
i don't mean i'm coughin,
when i say i'm hackin,
i get awful mean when i get to stabbin,
my stomach's getting lean cuz of all this laughin
- Thu Jun 16, 2011 5:04 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: X Man
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1812
Re: X Man
i think i fixed it. thanks man
- Thu Jun 16, 2011 4:50 am
- Forum: Cyphers
- Topic: 2 bars off last word
- Replies: 156
- Views: 71320
Re: 2 bars off last word
shut ya legs again?
slut, you don't like my mercedez benz,
what i gotta do,
use super glue just to keep you in?
slut, you don't like my mercedez benz,
what i gotta do,
use super glue just to keep you in?
- Thu Jun 16, 2011 3:44 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Short PART 1
- Replies: 11
- Views: 3719
Re: Short PART 1
i think controlled emotion is the best tool a writer has. i'm seeing raw emotion in the piece for sure bro, so i think if you use this as a rough draft and work on the rhymes you can turn it into a really tight verse
- Thu Jun 16, 2011 3:34 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: X Man
- Replies: 4
- Views: 1812
X Man
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- Thu Jun 16, 2011 3:22 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Words Of Encouragement
- Replies: 16
- Views: 3596
Re: Words Of Encouragement
this was sick man. it's good to see a piece that delivers an awesome message without forcing the flow.
- Wed Jun 15, 2011 6:13 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Addictions.
- Replies: 10
- Views: 9281
Re: Addictions.
I can always appreciate real talk. Keep it up man, I loved it.
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- Wed Jun 15, 2011 6:08 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: somethin i wrote just for fun
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1943
Re: somethin i wrote just for fun
Thanks guys. I appreciate the constructive criticism.
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- Tue Jun 14, 2011 2:29 am
- Forum: Cyphers
- Topic: Punch line
- Replies: 99
- Views: 135480
Re: Punch line
shadow bars pretty much dishin out shallow bars/
lackin cash and cars broker than a cracked mastercard/
lackin cash and cars broker than a cracked mastercard/
- Tue Jun 14, 2011 1:57 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: leeroi green Hip-Hop-apotomus
- Replies: 15
- Views: 5109
Re: leeroi green Hip-Hop-apotomus
I'm new to this site and i liked what i read. It was easy to read and really flowed. i'm not really at a level to critique man, but that was on fire.
- Tue Jun 14, 2011 1:40 am
- Forum: New Users
- Topic: Whats up Seansprague13
- Replies: 3
- Views: 1319
Re: Whats up Seansprague13
what's up? i don't even know if i'm supposed to reply to this thread, but here we go. i love writing lyrics, but i dont really have anybody to tell me whether or not i'm on point, so this site seems helpful. i just stumbled on this site while searching for a place to get feedback on my lyrics. i'm e...
- Tue Jun 14, 2011 1:35 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: somethin i wrote just for fun
- Replies: 5
- Views: 1943
somethin i wrote just for fun
I got 1 empty wallet, 2 holes in my pockets, I’m 4 pounds thinner cuz of 3 more problems, called breakfast lunch and dinner, I’ma get my shit together, I can make it through the summer, it’s the winter I can’t weather, with the holes in my jacket and no soles in my sneakers, I am not about to be bro...