I act impatient tired of waiting and pacing like fuck it i don't got the time/ i lost my mind been doing fine but half the time i feel crippled like a shot in spine/ ^^nice structure with wordplay and metaphors here^^ -- Fri Dec 09, 2011 10:03 am -- thoughts i mod-i-fied like god i tried but this b...

Enjoyed the read!!

Thank you -- Sun Dec 04, 2011 10:12 pm -- Advice for improvement? -- Sun Dec 04, 2011 10:52 pm -- been told i an't shit cuz i'mma nigger/ ma classmates 'freaked' thinkin i'd pull a trigger/ witnessing 'snarles and sneers/ from ignorant drunks downin beers/ hurt feelin's of segra-gation/ i'm now sear...

I'm living in Maine...where shi* can make anyone go insane/ I receive 'dirty looks'... which makes me wanna throw hooks/ I'm like a 'alien' to some whites...leavin em 'spooked' like dark nights/ I've tried being 'nice'...sometimes feelin within a 'vice/ I'm here in a ghost town...where there's limi...

This is very deep.I almost can feel the pain in your words.