^agreed.. you started out strong but it got choppy but the meanings still hit hard maybe we could collab you speak my language man hit me up
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- Thu May 17, 2012 12:50 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Work in Progress: Something I'm working on
- Replies: 2
- Views: 3480
- Fri May 11, 2012 1:59 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Title Stripped.
- Replies: 5
- Views: 11926
Re: Title Stripped.
First 2 bars don't like, next 2 bars clever, the rest.... Dope!!!!! Love it any real emcee can relate to this it should be called "the real emcees anthem"
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- Wed May 09, 2012 3:57 pm
- Forum: Crews
- Topic: Creative Collaborations
- Replies: 6
- Views: 7801
Re: Creative Collaborations
sounds cool [fuck all the technical shit dude(@leeroi green)] its an art no? i dont care who how what or why fuck it i write to write if someone wants to get us to network fuck it im down great idea man! :) if u wanna get my vibe.. i tend to wright about things that make you think every line is conn...
- Mon May 07, 2012 1:31 am
- Forum: Cyphers
- Topic: 4 Word Cypher
- Replies: 464
- Views: 360171
Re: 4 Word Cypher
Have you seein double
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- Fri May 04, 2012 2:10 pm
- Forum: Cyphers
- Topic: Punch line
- Replies: 99
- Views: 135484
Re: Punch line
so your pussy that rhymes like in doctor Seuss
well ill take this cat in a hat and hang him by a noose
well ill take this cat in a hat and hang him by a noose
- Fri May 04, 2012 1:59 pm
- Forum: Cyphers
- Topic: 3 word cypher
- Replies: 409
- Views: 102132
Re: 3 word cypher
sickle cell rhymer
- Fri May 04, 2012 8:53 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: new here appreciate feedback
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3796
Re: new here appreciate feedback
yo to any real hiphop head this IS THERAPY ! :) and your right dont doubt yourself whatever you write is from your head so usually only you can read it exactly how its suppose to be.. "my lyrics take care of me, they therapy, get shit off my chest" -Dilated Peoples (worst comes to worst) <...
- Fri May 04, 2012 8:28 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: new here appreciate feedback
- Replies: 5
- Views: 3796
Re: new here appreciate feedback
i can definitely tell your still in a what i call "poet stage" that's how i started too.. try writing to music get sum instrumentals and feel the beat.. with practice it will come naturally without even having a beat and you will be able to have a good flow... remember its a lot more than ...
- Fri May 04, 2012 7:48 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: You Cant Run From Your Past
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2321
Re: You Cant Run From Your Past
thanks man thats how i like to write make you think and every line has a meaning i dont battle i write... look forward to hearing what you got to say
~UNDERGROUND; WHERE REAL HIPHOP IS FOUND~
~UNDERGROUND; WHERE REAL HIPHOP IS FOUND~
- Thu May 03, 2012 12:02 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: You Cant Run From Your Past
- Replies: 2
- Views: 2321
You Cant Run From Your Past
Your livin in the present, and the future is irrelevant, your stuntin your development, lacking lifes essential elements, forever meant to settle like sediment, its evident, take a look at the evidence, and separate the real from the nonsense, its all there in your subconscious, makin you nauseous, ...
- Thu May 03, 2012 2:48 am
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Craziest Ride
- Replies: 7
- Views: 7827
Re: Craziest Ride
Born the year Nas started I'm cut from the Age of Dope The Substance Era.. Substituted My physical with my soul Dope man Dopeeee.... That line right there is what everyone would know this song for I can hear a whole fuckin audience repeating this bar [ Post made via Android ] http://www.illestlyrics...
- Wed May 02, 2012 2:30 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Demonic Devolution
- Replies: 3
- Views: 2755
Re: Demonic Devolution
ahhhh weed central haha damn man im in soCal L.A. the city of angels
- Wed May 02, 2012 2:27 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: Columbine
- Replies: 0
- Views: 4149
Columbine
hes staring at the fan on his ceiling, with a mad crooked feeling, and every second that hes killing, he can feel his soul chilling, with an ice box where his heart used to be, his temperature drops like negative 32 degrees, so inhale exhale breathe deep deep breaths, his chest compressed underneath...
- Wed May 02, 2012 1:21 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: deliver me
- Replies: 0
- Views: 4100
deliver me
when i lost my soul i had to look deep within myself, and when i lost my voice i had to listen to my inner self, when i lost my love i couldnt feel my heart beating, and when i lost sight of you i couldnt keep living.. am i stuck in a dream grasped by reality, clenched in the fist of time stunting m...
- Wed May 02, 2012 1:11 pm
- Forum: Written Rhymes
- Topic: im new and would like some pointers please
- Replies: 1
- Views: 1738
Re: im new and would like some pointers please
you doin alright i say keep it more live you need to pull people in with some more cleverness here and there but ey i feel some passion towards the end if u really feelin that then good let it all out man no holding back