Thought this was def a dope verse. The flow on this was ill, the meanings were... well, meaningful. The vocab usage was well used. Enjoyed the read a lot...

Alright then... Orf, Murk, Blok, PD, Ill, Flip.. voting is open for all you all now too, since Riggz opened up the vote to CI crew too.. Let's get the voting on this finished, it's draggin on way too long. I'm confident you all will be honest in your vote...

He sat back and yearned for her arrival. He detached from earthly weights and patiently waited in a position he could hold for eternity. He could see her silhouette in the distance, even with his eyes closed, the outline remained. He sat on the highest peak, from where he could see seven valleys str...

Haven't posted a poem in quite awhile, thought I'd drop a couple I wrote a while back... ______________________ My journey returns home, after time is halted and filled with experiences of travel to destinations of reality. The path of reflection awakens the steps taken in the days just behind. Memo...

Awesome piece here. The way you bring out the imagery and the emotion is pretty damn profound (sorry about all the 'p's there, hope you can at least read p's since u can't write em lol). I hope you write some new pieces, figure it's been two/three years since u first dropped some of these, imagine u...

Powerful words here, definitely. The line that stuck out the most to me as a single line was "I will not wipe away shards of your heart disguised as tears". But in reality, the whole drop was dope, could feel the self-reflection, the outward expression of the experience, the power of the e...

I'd send a PM 2xS's way with some specific questions. He's a cool cat with some definite mixing skill. I bet he'd be willing to give you some advice...

And just to let you know, it's really not too hard to become decent at mixing, to become really good at it takes knowledge and practice.

I'd say I liked this in general. As Double mentioned it is a bit simple though. The hook has some nice ideas in it, and they're presented in a creative way, but the vocab is so simple that to me it takes away from it's potential impact, too many two/three/four letter words. And honestly, I hope that...

Post away, haven't read anything of yours.

Appreciate the feed Phase, and yeah the number of bars is unorthodox like that cuz that's what fits wit the beat.
Uppin' for more feed...

Def nice to read some diversity in ur style Jack. I've been hoping to read another kinda verse from you besides just battles. This had a solid flow to it, slightly forced in how ur multis are used at times, but just a bit. Your topic in the first half is interesting, though as far as I know even Chr...

I was def diggin' this Riggz. You always gotta real creative way of expression. Ur vocab is elevated and unique. U got a consistent flow, with multis that feel natural. And of course, ur humor always manages to live on in every line, but in a way that adds to the meaning without distracting from it....

That's great man, good luck. Definitely post whatever u can bout ur battles there.

1 bar= 2 lines. U've only written 4 bars...

Alright, I can appreciate this. It's got a nice rhythm to it that'd hold a flow well, and it's unique too. I think some of the sounds sound a bit muffled though, maybe with a bit of fooling around with some various effects the instruments could pop out a little bit more. I like the change ups u have...