nice man very nice i liked this line it reminded me of early Eminem "i yearn for success learned from the best i deserve to be blessed insteada earning this stress but its like its nothing but curses and vex since my birth and my steps but i work for the checks" nice tho man thumbs up peace

hold on let me try this just for fun keepin measures to a "drastic"// these lyrics will turn ur lungs black and "asthmatic"// got u nervous, so u fire up a cancer stick// cause when these lyrics hit, its harder than "21 salutin automatics"// mash-kids with half-spits le...

thanx for all the feedback i'll get to workin on my shit, i'll take u up on that viral, my msn addy is lyrikallysadsticphill@msn.com if u wanna add me on there. but thanx for the feedback.

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thanx man appreciate it. i was gonna do more on it but my uncle died but thanx man appreciate it. i'll work on structure and shit. what else u think it needs? hit me back

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sorry guys my uncle passed away and i started on this the other night but was unable to finish it. so heres what i got anyways. hope u enjoy Leave u miffed, ripped, pissed and shitted on like Manure I maneuver like I was a skilled expert a majestic connoisseur My flows'll leave u dismantled, my nick...

okay heres how its goin i think precise won that cause heres how it is Punches: Precise Flow: Jusick thats 1 for u Personals: omg Precise hands down "listen as i rip through-this-kid, makin movements-slick, grippin razors ill unfuse-his-skin// i love the sound of kids yellin TRUCE-I-QUIT" ...

wow that was a waste of the space on my harddrive that the track did take, so this is the wake of this fake flake who'll nameless he'll remain cause i don't know his name but yes he did sound so lame dawg u ain't got no game, Law would put u to shame, that effect that u used made u sound like a gay ...

aight this song is goin in my car and being blared thru my system, tight shit man! hot as hell

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thanx man, he just sounded like he was to me, but its all cool thanx for the welcome I'm Lawgix sorry to freepost didn't know if there was an introduction page or somethin so i'll stop

haha wow man knowin precise like i do man he'll rip u... oh and btw man word of advise

don't let the game make u, make urself

so damn cocky haha