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I like ya verse, vibed really well with the beat...The energy and lyrics are what grab me the most...You also got a lil swag in ur flow too which is coo...I enjoyed ur verse a lot, the chorus is ok, but could use some wrk..Overall nice drop..

This was real clean, yall gr8 production and collab...You two are def. gettin better and feeling out each other styles...What I enjoyed from both verses are the multi's and energy which was apparent throughout the track...gr8 drop yall keep em coming

Thnx for the feed and listen man, def. glad u enjoyed it...I havent seen intrinsic in awhile, but I know he'd appreciate the feed too, def. will hit up ya drops as I see em...again thnx for the listen

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not bad b, gr8 breath control, that was nice, I just wish there was some switchup in flow, especially when the beat breaks down some, but otherwise nice track, I can see this being a a gr8 cypher piece...

I like the energy you bring in ur verse and chorus, it really brings the track to life, real clean, I thought some of your lines could've used some effects and the way u ended a couple lines feel flat with silence, but otherwise, it was pretty good, another nice track to add to the album, keep it up...

Glad your feeling it Lawgix, Def. hoping I can keep it up....

The beat is disgusting, I want it lol, the energy and passion in your verse is sooo raw, real hot b...the grimey style def. fits this, makes it street...Also ya lyrics are on point and creates the type of feeln one should get from the track, its solid the way it is, but as a fellow perfectionist twe...

Your too relax on the beat, the beat has more energy than u...The interesting thing is that ur lyrics are asking for more emphasis because they aren't bad, just needs a better delivery, so just work on adding a lil passion in ur verse, otherwise not bad man...

I actually like the song and beat, only issue really is that the beat isn't the final version so ur lyrics can't hit as hard, and the effect on the Higher refrain in the chorus is annoying, other than that it's a solid track...Best part is the lyrics and delivery very solid there, and the mix is cle...

Im glad u like it, M33K, Yea I can see wat ur sayin wit the adlibs, I could remove a few, might do it for the final release...Good Looks Tha q, Yea DOs I had to mess around wit the mix for a while but Im glad u feeln the quality hopefully I can continue wit this...Thnx for the listen Tre Tru, And Cr...

I take it u did the beat too, not bad....The mix on the vocals need work, meaning remove a lil of the mud, besides that the lyrics were str8...The chorus was different, but in a good way, kinda unique in the style...overall not a bad track, like to hear how u finish it...

Actually I really like the chorus, very good in my opinion, it could be sung a lil better, or more effects or panning would make it better, but its str8...The verse was cool, nice energy, the beat was hot too...The second verse came in strong, real nice energy, and fit the chill beat...keeep coming ...