I will go first.


I drop you in quick sand,And leave yo face wit da back hand/So u gonna need da holy land,If you take the witness stand.

I plead guilty,Yea im a crook/For rippin mc's daily,But i didnt steel da rhymers instruction book.


Dat Mod -Adept-

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All is calm in the forest of Everwood, Arkansas. Until one day the shy flour-like creature that is Tomesticle ran into a female entity that was the exact likeness of what he'd always envisioned as the soulmate for himself. The "beauty" caught his eye from afar and had Tomesticle in a drool...

shit is gully as fuck i was going to make a thread about this when i had to use internet explorer for some bullshit site, i never realized how much firefox is better until yesterday when i had to use IE... its the best browser out now (i've only used it and internet explorer but it's eons ahead of i...

yeah tolerances can get costly, i've been pushing shit since i been like 15 so i've never really ran into money troubles just came short on the re-ups every now and then... never let myself become a fiend and spend all my money

same here, weed and sizzzurp is all i really fuck with anymore some xanax and hallucinagens every now and then... don't like to fuck with hard shit been to rehab twice for that shit

i know it wasn't the working out that killed him, i've done plenty of shit in my time too so my veins and arteries probably aren't a whole lot better then his therefore i'm not going to bulk up like him, i'll just stay being a skinny bastard

damn thats some fucked up shit, after going through all he did some shit like this kills him, makes sense though i guess

oh well, i'm never working out and getting that big

R.I.P. Eddie

oh this was you & tom that confused the hell out of me i thought it was just tom going off again the wording shit was mainly directed at tom, typeos verse was worded pretty well bars were structured better too, your rhyme scheme is probably what leads people to not drop alot of feedback though, ...

this wasn't bad your rhyme scheme was simplistic at the top got better towards the bottom once you get more comfortable with wording shit and multis you'll be able to drop some impressive shit gotta work on the uneven bars a lil bit too, if your shits organized it looks like you actually spent time ...

i'll review this later just a question though, why do you diss people that will never see your diss? lol

good looking out homie, upping for more votes

yeah, he doesn't... smitty, sauce money, skillz, jay-z and others have ghostwrote for him in the past

he even used eminems flow on it lol

diddy doesn't write his own shit if you didn't know

"don't worry if i write rhymes i write checks"