Punches
Nameplay/Personals
Flow,
Wordplay
multi's

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-- Tue Feb 09, 2010 12:19 pm --

im done just waitin on u to say ur done and ill post it

-- Tue Feb 09, 2010 7:21 pm --

ok bro once you drop ill post mine

Have ya dripping like tags, illest mind's know one has ever feeled-you-fags,
Cause only time i saw " xtaci on the street " they were both sealed-in-bags,

Snap you twigs-into-two, this dude a battler, i get more wins-then-you-do
He must not be very popular cause who rock's with three shitty sigs-of-there-crew..

I'm more then a text emcee no doubt, the battle grounds know what i'm about,
And it's safe to say out in the hood, " xtaci used to selling out "

See i put an end to emcee's who they think they know-the-most, it's nothing close..
Cause the only time i seen " xtaci killing it " some one died from over-dose.. !

It’ll cost ya maggot, when ya behind my bars lika stuck inmate…
He’s justa “lost lil faggot”, cuz hes always looking for his fuckin mate//*

Theres no duckin late, cuz these punches still leaven a scolding scar…
They’ll tear ur torso apart, and leave ya body strung out like ya multis are//**

Times all this is costn me, so why do you seem tense…
Its common knowledge that the “L’s” follow in sequence//****

So see bitch, no vocab you couldn’t flip words if ya on da floor from roofies…
And ya “killshot” wouldn’t be “dead on” if I made ya Se-Quencetin(see Quentin) Tarantino movies//*****

*in austrialia they call there friends mates plus your make babys with ur mate
**body strung together with strings of his guts like his multis are pointed and strung together by him using hyphens (strings)
****puff puff pass in the same order and like before 1-7
*****dead on and killshot are Quentin tarantino movies

Punches – tie
Nameplay/Personals - X
Flow, - Seq
Wordplay- Seq
multi's – tie

Seq
Have ya dripping like tags, illest mind's know one has ever feeled-you-fags,
Cause only time i saw " xtaci on the street " they were both sealed-in-bags,
3/5 I liked the punch but you forced “Feeled-you-fags” don’t think “Feeled” is a word.

Snap you twigs-into-two, this dude a battler, i get more wins-then-you-do
He must not be very popular cause who rock's with three shitty sigs-of-there-crew..
3.5/5 Nice could’ve ended the multi better (you-do/there-crew)

I'm more then a text emcee no doubt, the battle grounds know what i'm about,
And it's safe to say out in the hood, " xtaci used to selling out "
3.5/5 nice word play and set up, nice Name play

See i put an end to emcee's who they think they know-the-most, it's nothing close..
Cause the only time i seen " xtaci killing it " some one died from over-dose.. !
3/5 nice word play again, however another drug reference is getting monotonous, but it wasn’t it a bad punch
Nice verse Seq 13/20

Xtaci
It’ll cost ya maggot, when ya behind my bars lika stuck inmate…
He’s justa “lost lil faggot”, cuz hes always looking for his fuckin mate//*
2.5/5 bars/inmate is kinda played and punch seems forced

Theres no duckin late, cuz these punches still leaven a scolding scar…
They’ll tear ur torso apart, and leave ya body strung out like ya multis are//**
3.5/ nice multi/personal

Times all this is costn me, so why do you seem tense…
Its common knowledge that the “L’s” follow in sequence//****
3.5/ Haha nice punch, flow was off from the preceding 4 bars tho

So see bitch, no vocab you couldn’t flip words if ya on da floor from roofies…
And ya “killshot” wouldn’t be “dead on” if I made ya Se-Quencetin(see Quentin) Tarantino movies//*****
3/5 this was iffy to me, I kind of liked it after reading it a few times, but in some ways it seems forced and the set up didn’t prepare the delivery very well. (I do that too sometimes).
12.5/20
Close battle guys, I liked it. Seq pulls away with my vote by the hairs of his chinny chin chin.

Punches; Sequal
Nameplay/Personals; X
Flow; Tie - i cought both flows
Wordplay;Sequal
multi's; close but Sequal



Vote Sequal .. Just had the better all round verse. More direct and punches edged it!! Keep at it tho X you gettin pretty nice!!

@ Xtaci... Killshot's not a Quentin Tarantino movie... it was directed by John Madden.

Punches: Seq
Nameplay/Personals: Seq
Flow: Xtaci
Wordplay: Seq
multi's: Seq

Vote: Sequence

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