Shuckss -VS- YungDosia

YungDosia · **Posts:** 485 **Wins:** 21 **Losses:** 10 **Cash:** 19162

6 Lines...

Due By Tonite

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shuckss. · **Cash:** 0

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-- Wed Feb 03, 2010 9:38 pm --

ahem..

Shucks is REAL-AS-FUCK, locked and loaded ready to PEEL-AND-BUCK.
Coulda been cool, but now the DEAL-IS-UP. R.I.P to Michael Jackson but fact is Yung can STILL-GET-TOUCHED.//

Dosia's the meal and what? Imma start my CHRONIC-FEEDIN, leave Yung CRYIN-AND-BLEEDIN.
For some IRONIC-REASON after the battle imma "blow-up" like ISLAMIC-TEACHIN'S.//

Im from a demonic region, rules are HIT-IT-AND-BAIL. Dosia? This BITCH-IS-TOO-FRAIL,
ya verse MISSES-AND-FAILS, niggas would'nt "feel ya text" is you SPIT-IT-IN-BRAIL.//

Feed me, Feed me, Feeeeeeeeeed me..

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YungDosia · **Posts:** 485 **Wins:** 21 **Losses:** 10 **Cash:** 19162

....BEAST MODE ON UM....

I Wouldnt Give Shucks Two Fucks...But We Can Get It Damn On...!!
I Own This Game Pussy...You Shouldnt "Playtex/PlayText" Unless You Buy Your Tampons...!!!
http://www.playtexproductsinc.com/femcare/index.asp

Punche's Knock This Nigga Down...Spread Him Out Like Rumors A Girl Tell...!
This Ya First Battle On This "Website"...Im Not Surprised Its Ending Up As UR L...!!!!

Now This What Ive Learned...Shucks Sux, Thinks He Runs Shit But His Thighs Burn...!
If We Racin Its My Turn...Cuz This Kids Tired, Last Time He Had A "Full Head Of Steam"...I Shoved His Face In A Iron...!!!

SequencE · **Posts:** 2027 **Wins:** 25 **Losses:** 32 **Cash:** 13508

Personals - Shucks
Punchlines - Dosia..
Flow - Even..
Multi's - Shucks
Wordplay - Dosia,
Creativity, Dosia.

this was a real hard battle to judge, because it was 3 bar's against 2 good emcee's

Shucks, it was a decent verse man.. there was alot of played concept's like the brail line, and blowing up like islamic's blah blah.

Dosia, had a couple of border line clever lines, like the website one and the head full of steam line brought a grin,

vote dosia,

Absolute · **Posts:** 105 **Wins:** 5 **Losses:** 1 **Cash:** 3631

I think the only bar worth mentioning in shucks verse was the get touched line. it was pretty good. But Yung had three good bars. Overall I'd say a cat. sweep in his favor. One good bar won't cut it on here. Constantly dig deeper. Dont ever put your first idea on paper. If its your first idea, at worst its someone else second or thirdt. to be original you have to strive. Keep digging. Other than that, good effort kid, but Yung took this.

Yung GMV

YungDosia · **Posts:** 485 **Wins:** 21 **Losses:** 10 **Cash:** 19162

Thanks for votes and feedback fams

2-0 upsy

Deciple · **Posts:** 262 **Wins:** 0 **Losses:** 0 **Cash:** 10238

Im not really a battler or anything so i dont know how good of opinion i have on a battle but here we go..

Personals - Shucks
Punchlines - Shucks
Flow - Dosia
Multi's - Shucks
Wordplay - Dosia,
Creativity - Shucks

i just took what SequencE used to vote on.. but thats what i came up with.
Dosia you got mad skill man, but it was only 6 bars and the way i look at text Shucks got my vote...

Riggz · **Posts:** 706 **Wins:** 11 **Losses:** 6 **Cash:** 19116

This is an easy explaination:
A - Shucks, the Michael Jackson line was your best, the other two have been severely played. When Ja-Rule can be quoted (ie Brail line in Mohicans) for saying damn near the same line, it's pretty fuked up. And Islam/blow up lines started shortly after 9/11.

B - Dosia, all of us have mom's who saw a pack of Playtex in bathroom before. No need to explain pussy/tampon lines.. just as played as the brail one.. but the URL line was clever as hell. And that last line, I can actually hear you saying that with that little annoyin' ass laugh of yours.. but I liked it. Full Head of steam.. HAHA!

So line for line Shucks = 1, Dosia = 2

Vote = Dosia

ThaOneYouHate · **Posts:** 6876 **Wins:** 22 **Losses:** 27 **Cash:** 92403

-Closed & Updated-

YungDosia · **Posts:** 485 **Wins:** 21 **Losses:** 10 **Cash:** 19162

3-1 upsy

Loon E Lou · **Posts:** 322 **Wins:** 2 **Losses:** 3 **Cash:** 17080

damn. got to this too late but fuck it. good shit dosia. keep that text slappin. im waitn for that audio for my chance at redemption. haha. either way keep doin u homie. rep that cali homeboy.

YungDosia · **Posts:** 485 **Wins:** 21 **Losses:** 10 **Cash:** 19162

nah my dude its not to late lol...its 3-1 we need more votes. drop 1 plz

and thanks homey!

Loon E Lou · **Posts:** 322 **Wins:** 2 **Losses:** 3 **Cash:** 17080

ok ok. well in that case.

1. both were fresh. shuckss surprised me wit his ability i thnk. so i gotta give props where theyre do.

2. dosia. jus same ol dosia to me. slappin dudes around like always.

in my opinion, i think id give it to dosia. but not by a blowout or n e thng. dosia this wasnt ur finest, but fine it was. id like to see another round maybe a lil longer to really see whats poppin. count em if u got em.

vote: dosia. that ur l shit was hot homie. haha

good one fellas. set up another one tho. id like to see yall go at it agin.

Loon E out.....

ThaOneYouHate · **Posts:** 6876 **Wins:** 22 **Losses:** 27 **Cash:** 92403

4-1 TKO

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