Just got my laptop back and wanted to show you guys some off the shiz I've been writing, I would really appreciate feed on the mixing because that's the area that I need to improve on right now.

-K

http://www.reverbnation.com/#/artist/so ... ls/3854361

shits dope man... drop the beat down a bit n u'll be golden homie... lyrics are tight sounds like a kid cudi joint... good shit bro...

Aiight good looking Law.

shit is tight.... flow is on point... like some young jay shit.... The beat is a lil high or lyrics a lil low tho... shit is tight

Thanks for the feed.

I just put the full version up and I replaced the link.

Good looking on the feed man.

Your flow and choice of beats is starting to improve...you can tell right away when compared to some of your earlier drops! I liked the concept of the hook. I thought it could've been executed a bit smoother...but I did like where you were goin with it.

This mixing is better than the old stuff for sure. But keep doin your thang...you're improving in stride, and that's good progess.

Track get's a 7.5/10

aight dis is wats up ur def improvin' which is good like how u flowed on dat track and liked how u flipped it I actually wasn't expectin' dis which is a good thing hook does need improvement tho and ur quality is aight needs work but it's koo I could hear it so dats wats important keep droppin' tracks dawg 7/10

-- 03 May 2010 19:13 --

aight dis is wats up ur def improvin' which is good like how u flowed on dat track and liked how u flipped it I actually wasn't expectin' dis which is a good thing hook does need improvement tho and ur quality is aight needs work but it's koo I could hear it so dats wats important keep droppin' tracks dawg 7/10

Thanks for the feed, appreciate it.

aight man i was waitn for a chance to be around sum speakers to leave some feed. it was worth the wait dawg. this shit is hyped, wit some old skool, and deffy a hip hop hit. the beat was dope. the type of shit i would like to get down to. lyrics sounded alot cleaner than what youve worked on before. shiiiiiiit i was lookin thru ma projects and found the one we was supposed to wrk on. my fault on the lag. but afta hearin this, if u still interested, this quality soundin waaaay better. but back to ur joint, the effects was ku dawg. nutn too over powerin. just right imo. um.....what else.........fuck. i dunno dawg this shit was straight. the mixin was pretty good. jus about a couple low spots here and there, but thats jus a producer's ear. im supposed to catch shit like that. dope dope. hit me


Loon E Out............