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Post subject: I Used II (Tell me everything I did wrong... please)
PostPosted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 6:34 am 
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1st audio and it's shitty.. but I'm proud of myself going out on a limb the first time. hehe.


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Post subject: Re: I Used II (Tell me everything I did wrong... please)
PostPosted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 6:52 am 
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Post subject: Re: I Used II (Tell me everything I did wrong... please)
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i have no idea what u said during the whole track... need to back off the mic... adlibs and under vocals need to be quieter than ur lead vocals... but otherwise u stayed on point with it... u flowed okay even tho i didn't understand wtf u said durin the 1:42 u spit... lol but it was cool... dig deep in the Creation Chamber... u'll find some good shit in here... mine are in here too... even tho i haven't posted one in a while... which i'll get that done soon enuff!!!

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Post subject: Re: I Used II (Tell me everything I did wrong... please)
PostPosted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 8:23 am 
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i have no idea what u said during the whole track... need to back off the mic... adlibs and under vocals need to be quieter than ur lead vocals... but otherwise u stayed on point with it... u flowed okay even tho i didn't understand wtf u said durin the 1:42 u spit... lol but it was cool... dig deep in the Creation Chamber... u'll find some good shit in here... mine are in here too... even tho i haven't posted one in a while... which i'll get that done soon enuff!!!

Thanks man... I'll back up off the mic with the adlibs.. turn it up on the vocals.
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