Cyan - Eighteen

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Cyan - Eighteen

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I went off my meds for this one.

Lyrics

Mine Mine Mine Mine Mine
Senior class – Feelin’ bad – Buckeye now so I’m down to slack –
For my last year here till I shake n’ grab – my degree – no beef but I’ll be so glad –
To Asta la Vi these girls n’ guys at Pick Your Cliché High - don’t fraternize –
They don’t feel my style - I diversified – but inside felt – “Like Like”
:34
You want mine –
Look at this bitch I got she a dime –
Yeah she’s a bitch – but if she you asked you to commit – that player shit’s out the window when you take knee like the ceilings on fire –
Young as fuck I fuck - n’ don’t tire –
She never gets enough and neither do I –
:44
This must be love –
She’s the wonderful – The One –
… I’m under her thumb … Yeah … Yeah …. Yeah ….
But She’s Dangerous N’ I’m Blind –
I run to her side
It’s My Life -
1:10
You want mine –
Look this job I got – it provides –
Look and threads I rock man I’m fly –
In caps like Arcroynm – Checks – I’m cashin’ em –
My girl owns her home – n’ ohhh it’s nice –
SLK Drop-Top in the Drive –
Gold Land Cruiser – right beside –
Why? Why? WHY? - I got it … Cause I tried.
1:36
A little bit late – always on time –
Never a date – Stay inside –
Hiiiighhhh n’ fell great …
Gimmie a – Gimmie A –
Big Buford - Fries n’ Shake
I’m – Out the gate – No complaints – Future looks good – All arranged –
Rear-view collects dust - Only Pass Go – No - They don’t catch up –Broke n’ dressed up – Pops told me time n’ again – Time to step up – Flex your agenda – Be the One to attempt it – You can do it boy boy boy … If I can’t can’t can’t can’t be the Failure avenger – Westside fringer – with my minions … we get it n’ rub in – Fuck - if we offend ya – Do the best with – what we got – what we brought – Not, not, – obsessed with – What were not – what ya bought – No – What we got goin’ – (works) cause – we process our part - of the circuit - all together for one purpose – gain inertia - search for golden girls n’ go for perfect – Playaaaaa!!!!
(2:15)
I’m a beast, I’m a terror, I’ma run for the mayor –
N’ beat – all beef – asleep to be fair –
I’m a dick n’ don’t share – You biffed the whole era
My bitch is Bo Derrick – My fist – They don’t scare –
I sip n’ smoke (yeah) – I spit n’ flow (yeah) –
I’m getting dough (yeah) – I guess – I guess –
If they’re up – the scoreboard has errors
Care o’ contraire – Swear – I woudn’t dare –
YEAAHHHHHH! YEAH!

(sing) This must be love – x3
It makes me Dangerous N’ Blind –
I’m on the rise …
2:53
Zits are clearin’ up – feel superior – got the better bud – and an Acura –
Deck spectacular – trunk in action the - bass shilacks it like Shake Shakira –
Detail interior – Nice material – A dozen buttons on my steering wheel n’ I –
Bought it outright – a fuckin’ steal when I finally got the deal I’d been dreamin’ of –
Since fifteen – I’d read the classifieds – highlight rides n’ the Trade n’ Times n’ I –
Call the owners – on the kitchen phone with – my kindest tone – “Hello” - win em over –
N’ hold that tone like Motorala – “This car is yours man?” – Yeah, I told ya –
N’ hope – Poe Poe don’t pull us over – for the price I got man – it might be stolen –
Thanks Bo! N’ Thanks Red!

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Last edited by Cyan on Sat May 19, 2012 3:15 am, edited 1 time in total.
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oh shit i enjoyed this like tha way tha beat switched on me i at 1st i was like i dig tha mac miller/asher roth feel then it goes hip rock uur whole flow style is dope tha story is rite..... was that u playin guitar??? this shit is dope already told u im a fan keep feeding me ur shit
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I left feed on this joint but it got deleted, the overall sound isn't really my steez but I'm feeling this track from a musician stand point, good quality as usual and your recording and mixing skills are fine tuned.
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I think the flow on this sick as shit
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@cyanidesyn - Thanks man ... I appreciate the kind words ... just a heads up though ... if you've never got a chance to listen to a Rage Against the Machine album ... it's like mandatory listening IMHO ... I mean ... Zach de la Rocha can rap ... and Tom Morello is a guitar legend. This is one of their instrumentals.

http://www.allmusic.com/album/rage-agai ... ine-r56555

http://www.allmusic.com/album/evil-empire-r233573

Thanks Phasewon and Rek :)
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oh word i dig it
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This is amazing probably some of the best rap I've ever heard. Love it!
Check out my raps. I'm just startin' out but listening to this is just inspiring.
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You should start making videos, because i really like to see who's behind that rap. Goddamn.
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You have a good flow and you make the song interesting by playing with the voice. Nice!
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