Hip Hop Forum

Hello!

I'm an MC from Sweden trying to share my music. I recorded a track called "Hip Hop". I would really appreciate you taking a moment and listening to it. Thank you.

Youtube-link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CwLl3WFajzg

What's up U Swedish fish..

Get active and Enjoy your stay.. peace

wudup. Well we certainly love to give feedback but we love to receive feedback too. And welcome to the site, get up and active and make something happen.

Yeah ... I see a new name .. and then look over to see who you left feed for ... 0 + 0 = 0

-- Fri May 18, 2012 2:08 am --

All that uhh uhh uhh yeah ... uhh ... sounds a bit porno at the beginning ... but then your voice kicks in ... it's really catchy and the recording brings out all the little nuances and scratches in it ... really catchy ... Good hook .. nice doubles on it ... This is has got a Nas New York flavor to it and it's workin' man ... honestly ... this sounds just fine to me ... The timing is solid ... The rhymescheme switches up ... Yeah ... Good shit!!!

Lookin' forward to your next one.

@Cyan

Alright, I understand. People often tell me that the hook is too simple, glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate it, man. Thank you.

Dope beat, good mixing, the solid delivery helps to drown out the very simple lyrics, good hook, on a constructive tip I'd say step up the rhyming content a bit, but overall a solid track.

@Phasewon Thank you. I agree, the lyrics and the rhymescheme are simple. But I have a couple of other unfinished tracks with more complex schemes. Thank you for listening, man.

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I like the quality, def. helps me focus on the lyrics more...The lyrics in the second verse was very real, I liked that you brought the topic to your personal circumstance, the emotion is clear in the music and helps carry the song along...Def. can see me vibing to this....The chorus isn't bad either, real nice structure, quality stuff man

This is smooth I like it. Love the hook. Simple but catchy.

@Livenlearn Thank you so much.Thank you for paying attention to the lyrics and the emotion. Appreciate every word.

@PeyotePearl Thank you! I'm often told that the hook is boring, glad you liked it. Thanks.

You sound like you're from Boston, not Sweden. But anyway, good track. You have excellent mic presence and delivery. If you elevated your rhyme schemes, all you would need is promotion to climb up.

@NeverOddOrEven

Thank you. Boston is cool =) I wanted to keep the rhymes simple in order to lift the story. It wouldn't be as good if I played with syllables throughout the song. But I understand you. Thank you, appreciate it.