Synapse - Drug Trip

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Synapse - Drug Trip

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EDIT: Reuploaded with redone vocals. Hopefully it sounds a bit better now.


My 3rd song. Feed would be appreciated

The beat is "Ready For Action" by The Unbeatables.



The foundations crack as I enter the room
Your jaw drops more with every pulse from the gloom
A nocturnal emergence out of my coccoon
Feed off my aura as I watch you consume
Ho, ho, ho, its all for the merrier
Please won't you give me a piece of that dierre-ere
Ravishing lavishing all types of happenings
Wonder where this trip will take you when the mad hatter swings
Swings, swings, batta batta swings,
Missed a couple times now I'm back inside your dreams
With deadly gruesome scenes that'll split apart your seams
And out comes the stuffing man I told ya I ain't bluffin'
When you leave here again with some serious concussions
Come bustin', stop touchin', but my fists are your teachers
Your face, your features, take the shape of school bleachers
That I bashed you into 'til you looked worse than gored creatures





Catch that saliva, its fallin' off your lip
I know this shit is mesmerizing but you promised no trip
Like you popped a couple acid, took a few xanex
I'm hesistant to tell you what I even planned next
A diabolic session with drugs and lethal weapons
I'm sellin' you concessions filled with drug dissections
All types of chemicals prohibit your peripherals
Wonder if your mind can make it past the saner sentinels
Mystical, whimsical, chewing on some psylocibin
Won't you take a whiff of this twisted vibe that i'm prescribin'
Trapped in my mind's asylum, wandering the courtyards
Talking to the inmates 'bout our problems through more bars
Like a prison cell block full of soldiers shell shocked
Ring it while the bells hot if you dive they'll see what hell caught
And please, please, don't take away my knees
I think I'm just trippin' after poppin all that E







Plus a couple other drugs 'cause I made a small decree
To lose any sense of self no longer being me
Mixed with the stimulants twisting up my fate
Fucking with some sedatives I'm in an altered state
I can't, even, feel my limbs
I want, to move, but my mind went dim
Now, I'm stuck, with a silly ass grin
Plastered on my face like I downed bottles of gin
Or perhaps paint thinner'll make my nervous system quiver
I don't know why but I'm on the search for some shiver
Just a sliver, of pleasure, to shed light on my endeavor
I've never, been better, blacking out from too much pressure
What a wicked vendetta i've started with my body
The problem is all these drugs affect me rather oddly
They make me feel a sense of strength like I'm so godly
When all I'm really doin' is actin' so gaudy
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Re: Synapse - Drug Trip

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Alright ... diggin the beat ... good choice.

I like all the inflection you've put into this delivery ... I can hear the effort to inject some personality in this one ... Almost Slick Rickish ...
That I bashed you into 'til you looked worse than gored creatures
--> Doesn't work

ha ha ... second verse ... funny lyrics ...

Same thing though with the last line of the second verse ... It's not a strong exit ...

Ha ha ... (third verse) I do like the swagger though ... it sounds like your having fun with it ...

Yeah man ... definitely progression ... Keep it up ;)
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