Jaygunna Vs Duc3(JayGunna)

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Jaygunna Vs Duc3(JayGunna)

Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Ya Called Out Anyone And I Responded ...Here Are Tha House Rules I Copied And Pasted

5 bars

catz


flow
punches
multies
metas
personals


I'll Check In Later... I'm Assuming Bars Are Due Whenever..Just A.S.A.P
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Is This Defendent Blind....Jay Ya Have Infant Rhymes You're A Fool If You Think You Can Diminish Mine,
We Have Relentless Spines....See.. My Crew Will Blast And Leave "JAYS' Gone Like Thieves In Finish Line,
He Rocks Denim Finds.....Only Time "Gunna" Witnessed Someone "Sho Gun" Was At A Japanese Steak House
I Be Smackin Deez Fakes Out....Now Ya Loosin My Frend...I'l Jack Ya Car...Im Like Nigs Who Brick Purposely...Da Way I Shoot For His Rims... (Thanks For The Hub Caps Homie Haha)
Jay Be Smoochin Dem Men....His Fashion Is Gay...I'll Bagg'em Away...I Murk Dudes & Dey Leave Me In "Court" I Guess Dey Was Practicing Jay.... (SNITCH!!)
I'll Blast In His Face....Cuz This A Battle Unmatched....Im Quick To Put The Heat To Dis Beef.....Like Brandin Cattle Contact...
Duce Known Ta Smack Bombs Back....I'll Put On Da Ski Mask And Chase...See..Dis Ain No Alphabet But I'll Have K's After Jay
I Slay Bastards Sakes...I'll Fire Tha Iron To'Em....There'll Be No Site Of Gunna..Like Explorers Who Stumble Upon "Findins Of Mayan Ruins"
Stop Denyin Foolz....You Gaggin Dick....I'll Let Tha Magnum Whip And Spit Tragic Shit....Jay Might Be Good...But I'll Smash His Hits..
Nigs Runnin Train'On Dis Pussy Only Time Dis Cats Equipped...I'll Leave Jay Trampled Under My Feet....Like I Was Runnin For Classic Kicks

Bar Explanation:..That "Practicin Jay" Like..Trainin On Shots...And Bein Like Him 2 Get Me Thru Litigation...
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Post by JayGunna »

[align=center]Damn...Niggas Just Give Me Easy Wins...


Battlin Me? A Hard Level Reached..Your Garb, Mellow, Weak…Who Would Walk In Your Shoes?..There Cheap..Like Marbury Sneaks!!/lmao
Duc3 Tryna Act Like He Hot…Jay Quick To Leave Duc (duck) Packed In A Box Similar To Marshmallow Peeps!!!//
I Choose Right Punches And You Get Hit With The Left…Steal A Win? Nah My Skill Have Alarm System For Theft!!/
So If You Think Ya the Best And Im Scared? Duce (duc3) You Better Off Shooting Yaself In The Head Like Adolf Hitler Death!!!//*
Jay A Straight Soldier…Duc3...This Battle Is Really A Takeover/
He Never Stepped In The Hood…Duc (Duck) Just Tryna Make Hiself Look Good…Like Ugly Bitches With Makeovers!!!//
My Skills Have Quick Levitation… No Hesitation …But Im Ready To Strike With Devastation/
And Im Not Fooling Around…Cause Jay Quick To Drop Du (Dew) On The Ground Like Atmosphere Perspiration!!!//
My Lyrics Is All Sick…You'll Never Be Flawless..So Tell Me Why Talk Shit?/
When It Comes To Battles…Duc3 Never Tired Of Getting Fucked Up Similar To Insomniac Alcoholics!!!//damn

*duce=dictator/leader


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Post by Dead Silence »

flow-Jay
punches-Duc3
multies-Jay
metas-Duc3
personals-Duc3

damn this shit was real close. Grade A battle on both of your behalves. But Duc3 slipped out the winner in my books

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Post by Omega Bill »

How about I make it fair and delete both free-posts?

Done.

Don't free-post.
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Post by Cee4 »

flow - Jay (duc3`s structure fucks the flow up a bit)
punches - Jay (both had nice punches but Jays seemed less forced)
multies - Duc3
metas - Tie
personals - Tie (no real personals from either)


Vote Jay Gunna

decent battle
btw Jay i answered your callout if ur up for another battle
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Post by JayGunna »

aight my nigga...

1-1 uppin...
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Post by Scip »

alright

best bars:

Duc3:Is This Defendent Blind....Jay Ya Have Infant Rhymes You're A Fool If You Think You Can Diminish Mine,
We Have Relentless Spines....See.. My Crew Will Blast And Leave "JAYS' Gone Like Thieves In Finish Line,

Gunna:Battlin Me? A Hard Level Reached..Your Garb, Mellow, Weak…Who Would Walk In Your Shoes?..There Cheap..Like Marbury Sneaks!!/lmao
Duc3 Tryna Act Like He Hot…Jay Quick To Leave Duc (duck) Packed In A Box Similar To Marshmallow Peeps!!!//

punches-both came hard here
nameplay-Gunna
wordplay-Duc3
flow-Gunna
multies-both
overal-Gunna...but Duc3 came to fuck with him...Duc3 just some of your concepts were mushed together and didn't get that full force punch you wanted...Gunna used that Duc shit which is sorta understandable but a lot fo the nameplays are gettin played out...Both of your first lines were nice tho both made me laugh

good battle
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

1-2 In Gunna's Favor..Thanks For The Break Down. Upping.
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Post by Buck »

Tite Azz battle, better read then I thought it waz finna be. Both opener and closer barz were up to par for both verzez imo, which really strung together both verzez into well written, ready for battle spitz. Well herez tha breakdown imo...
flow Jay -Duc3'z seemed a lil forced at timez
punches Duc3 -both were their, I juz feel that Duc3'z were hittin' harder and more vital spots.
multies Tie -Both came correct wit' tha multiz
metas Jay -Both came hard wit' tha metaz, but Jayz were a lil' more creative
personals Duc3 -Once again both went hard wit perzonalz, but Duc3z "Jay" linez were quite funny, my fav. waz tha "K'z afta J" Lmao...

Although thiz worked out to be a tie, I feel like Duc3 had it in tha long run, seein' punchez and personalz weigh a lil more then tha otha' catagoriez in a battle, and he had a small edge on em...Dope battle, hope to see a rematch soon, it could easily go either way...1

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Post by MesaR »

flow - Jay hands down
punches - just liked jays better
multies - Duc3
metas - Duc3, liked his a little more
personals - Both...

vote - Jay.


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Post by Omega Bill »

[font=Comic Sans MS]2-1 in Gunna's favor.

Bucks vote DOES NOT count. I will say it does seem a little obvious that he just came to the site and all that, and how he's taggin with Duc3. Plus you can't vote until you drop a scrip or completely a battle anyways.

Tough shit.

Sequences vote DOES NOT count. He has a tie in cats. No explanantion. DISCARDED. Don't pull that shit on me, junior.

No more freeposts. Thanks.[/font]
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Post by Haz »

flow - Both ( Yall Both Had it Stretchd)
punches - Both
multies - Duce
metas - Both
personals - Noone..

Aight..
I Felt Like This Battle Went Both Ways
Duce Could Get One Cat But Jay Came TOOOOOUGH..
Duce Came Nice 2.. I Know im Votin For Nothin Righ Now

Cause i See Dis As A Tie..

Vote - Both Yall Niggahz LMAO!!!
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Post by Haz »

Yo To Break The Tie Should i Jus Rate Shit Bar By Bar???
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Post by ÐÛÇ£» »

Yeah....Sure That'd Be Fine...
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