PyDiZzLE21 vs CBK (CBK WINS CLOSED)

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PyDiZzLE21 vs CBK (CBK WINS CLOSED)

Post by PyDizZLE21 »

House rules no feeding 8 bars, I'll drop shortly....

-- Wed Feb 22, 2012 5:32 pm --

I'm sick when Textin Him…..words in, I'm murderin cuz my shit is so Excellent...//
One Slit..,then this snitch will be exitin cuz ur a fukkin bitch with some estrogen!...//
Whts with the Perplexin Grin?, U confused.. In a state losin Oxygen...//
Lose a shoe cuz I'm bakkin up I pack a punch it'll Move the space u was walkin In...//
If u get Spooked its kewl, u start runnin off,...bitch Which way?...//
Pursuit with Kewl, Sparks bust exhaust when u C the Big K…//
Ur bitch made!...With the switch blade tie ya like the arms they do pigs...//
Scream hey don’t move Bitch….and slice ya side like sum Bar-B-Q Ribs!...//
Put ya Heart ina Zip, cuz u don't got the Adequate luck...//
Ur actin all Tough homer, but ur more like maggie cuz u Actually Sukk...//
The Hood’s in me bakk, masked hood with a Mac…//
Gat Burns thru ya Bakk then u’ll see this women in Black…//
I should judo chop you, better shield and Block dude…//
Cuz ur the fukkin reason why Springfield almost got Nuked!...//
Ur spit ain’t mean Shit to me, u ain’t planning for victor…//
I’ll slice pieces of ur body off till u have an Epiphany!...//
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Re: PyDiZzLE21 vs CBK

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yo i'll drop in ten mins..

-- Sat Feb 25, 2012 4:02 am --

i'll free all my battle starts an smack him hard
just so people realise what an actuall fag you are,
please disregard this kids six bars about his beef with my avatar....

just wrote this, i drop the dope shit, you hopeless with no wit,
get ripped off like a roach clip
this no dick so sick faux prick will fold quick
an want to shake hands faster than the slow kid in his pro pic.
listen p why you dissin me? im spittin free,
and admittedly shittin on your writtens with syllable synchronicity
is drizzle ill?....
or does his pic actually depict his disability and inability
to write the shit he spits as a diss at me with a lil bit of dignity
take your dumb rhymes individually, each one is missing punchlines, wit, lyrical skill an rythm ability.
but i'll bet mine rhyme and i'll get high fives kid,
coz ive got py figured out like that guy albert einstein did
so get out my eye line bitch quit tryin my patience
coz your style equates to nothing like scienctific equations.
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Re: PyDiZzLE21 vs CBK (VOTE!!!)

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coo ill get to this after work gentleman.
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Vote for this u lazy fukkin bums, see this is why this site sukks cuz no one fukkin votes , not even sum of the gay ass mods fukk everybody haha

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Re: PyDiZzLE21 vs CBK (VOTE!!!)

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Well ... This was a decent battle, but there are things that u 2 can improve on. There wasn't that many punches, couple of mediocre bars and alot of fillers. P, your verse was all round average at best, there wasn't any hard hitting lines apart from that maggie line, no multis, and a choppy flow. CBK's multi game was pretty good with sum aight lines but there were so many fillers and pointless bars, the flow was all over and it lacked punches, But overall I'd say he was more direct than PDizzle so MVGT CBK

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Re: PyDiZzLE21 vs CBK (VOTE!!!)

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cyanidesyn wrote:both versus was lack luster both of u went over 8bars i promise mvgt cbk his verse packed more of a punch
usually we don't let people vote who haven't battled before... so this vote isn't going to be counted... read the rules before voting...

general-battle-ground-rules-look-here-vt24913.html

-- Tue Feb 28, 2012 6:53 pm --

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Re: PyDiZzLE21 vs CBK (VOTE!!!)

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shudup py dont make me beat you up again lol



I'm sick when Textin Him…..words in, I'm murderin cuz my shit is so Excellent...//
One Slit..,then this snitch will be exitin cuz ur a fukkin bitch with some estrogen!...//
i dont consider this a punch line its just kinda generic but
the multis were there.


Whts with the Perplexin Grin?, U confused.. In a state losin Oxygen...//
Lose a shoe cuz I'm bakkin up I pack a punch it'll Move the space u was walkin In...//
you havent mentioned CBK or his name yet, why not? you know better.
this was generic again.


If u get Spooked its kewl, u start runnin off,...bitch Which way?...//
Pursuit with Kewl, Sparks bust exhaust when u C the Big K…//
was ok but its still not connecting well like your 56 k

Ur bitch made!...With the switch blade tie ya like the arms they do pigs...//
Scream hey don’t move Bitch….and slice ya side like sum Bar-B-Q Ribs!...//
good imagery but thats about it...i assume you had elevated on punch lines but so far i havent seen something that caught my eye

Put ya Heart ina Zip, cuz u don't got the Adequate luck...//
Ur actin all Tough homer, but ur more like maggie cuz u Actually Sukk...//
like skylink said this lines prolly your best so far due to the fact its a pun. the punch was eh but the wordplay stood out more

The Hood’s in me bakk, masked hood with a Mac…//
Gat Burns thru ya Bakk then u’ll see this women in Black…//
I should judo chop you, better shield and Block dude…//
Cuz ur the fukkin reason why Springfield almost got Nuked!...//
Ur spit ain’t mean Shit to me, u ain’t planning for victor…//
I’ll slice pieces of ur body off till u have an Epiphany!...//
what? victor/epiphany? wtf is that lol... cmon man
i was expecting better than this mister dizzle

-- Tue Feb 28, 2012 8:18 pm --

i'll free all my battle starts an smack him hard
just so people realise what an actuall fag you are,
please disregard this kids six bars about his beef with my avatar....
im pretty sure this is considered "feeding/flipping" your opponents verse...

just wrote this, i drop the dope shit, you hopeless with no wit,
get ripped off like a roach clip
this no dick so sick faux prick will fold quick
an want to shake hands faster than the slow kid in his pro pic
its ok... thats it

listen p why you dissin me? im spittin free,
and admittedly shittin on your writtens with syllable synchronicity
is drizzle ill?....
or does his pic actually depict his disability and inability
more direct at the dude finally, focus more on shit like this but construct it better

to write the shit he spits as a diss at me with a lil bit of dignity
take your dumb rhymes individually, each one is missing punchlines, wit, lyrical skill an rythm ability.
but i'll bet mine rhyme and i'll get high fives kid,
coz ive got py figured out like that guy albert einstein did
finally a fucking name flip...

so get out my eye line bitch quit tryin my patience
coz your style equates to nothing like scienctific equations.
this dosnt make sense to me


multis-idk prolly a tie
punchs-CBK, he actually used Pys name more than once
metas-Py
Puns-CBK

VOTE-CBK but you both should be doing better than this by now. keep practicing.
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Re: PyDiZzLE21 vs CBK (VOTE!!!)

Post by PyDizZLE21 »

Haha hey u anti u never responded to my last verse so shudda upp, u barely beat me haha, anywayz I didn't really try in this battle wasn't really feeling it and I didn't find out till yesterday that CBK stands for come back kid I could of totally used that had I knwn early but ur right I could of written better stuff this was a key verse really...and I'm not giving excuses or anything if CBK got it then good looks to him fo real I just want this battle to be over, and good looks on the vote anti atleast ur doing ur job unlike the other mods ya I'm talking to U hahaha

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lol at least you GET VOTES here sooner or later...unlike fucking soundclick..ugh
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I think soundclick thou has more competition hard people or atleast it did haha not anymore

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Re: PyDiZzLE21 vs CBK (VOTE!!!)

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I'm sick when Textin Him…..words in, I'm murderin cuz my shit is so Excellent...
One Slit..,then this snitch will be exitin cuz ur a fukkin bitch with some estrogen!...

Eh, nice wordplay and flow, but where’s the diss?

Whts with the Perplexin Grin?, U confused.. In a state losin Oxygen...//
Lose a shoe cuz I'm bakkin up I pack a punch it'll Move the space u was walkin In...//

Same thing, nice wordplay and flow but this isn’t a real diss aimed at CBK..

If u get Spooked its kewl, u start runnin off,...bitch Which way?...//
Pursuit with Kewl, Sparks bust exhaust when u C the Big K…//

Dope, nice name-play and flow, finally this guy has got something.

Ur bitch made!...With the switch blade tie ya like the arms they do pigs...//
Scream hey don’t move Bitch….and slice ya side like sum Bar-B-Q Ribs!...//

Recycling the word “Bitch” a bit too much, this punch was corny.

Put ya Heart ina Zip, cuz u don't got the Adequate luck...//
Ur actin all Tough homer, but ur more like maggie cuz u Actually Sukk...//

What is this filler nonsense?

The Hood’s in me bakk, masked hood with a Mac…//
Gat Burns thru ya Bakk then u’ll see this women in Black…//

Filler…

I should judo chop you, better shield and Block dude…//
Cuz ur the fukkin reason why Springfield almost got Nuked!...//

The flow is on point and so is the wordplay, but man… you really need to aim your advancement and attacks on CBK, the contender.

Ur spit ain’t mean Shit to me, u ain’t planning for victor…//
I’ll slice pieces of ur body off till u have an Epiphany!...//

Filler…

+ Strongest Bar:
If u get Spooked its kewl, u start runnin off,...bitch Which way?...//
Pursuit with Kewl, Sparks bust exhaust when u C the Big K…//

-Weakest Bar:
Ur spit ain’t mean Shit to me, u ain’t planning for victor…//
I’ll slice pieces of ur body off till u have an Epiphany!...//


Flow: 4.0/5
Word Play: 4.5/5
Content: 2.0/5


Vs.

i'll free all my battle starts an smack him hard
just so people realise what an actuall fag you are,
please disregard this kids six bars about his beef with my avatar....

Starting off with a strong opener, Hahaha… yeah I thought he was supposed to be battling you not Homer Simpson.

just wrote this, i drop the dope shit, you hopeless with no wit,
get ripped off like a roach clip
this no dick so sick faux prick will fold quick
an want to shake hands faster than the slow kid in his pro pic.

Dammmmnnnn…. This is definitely dope.

listen p why you dissin me? im spittin free,
and admittedly shittin on your writtens with syllable synchronicity
is drizzle ill?....
or does his pic actually depict his disability and inability
to write the shit he spits as a diss at me with a lil bit of dignity

GODDD DAMMMMNNNNNNN, the word-play is not to fuck with in this line, 5/5 !

take your dumb rhymes individually, each one is missing punchlines, wit, lyrical skill an rythm ability.
but i'll bet mine rhyme and i'll get high fives kid,
coz ive got py figured out like that guy albert einstein did

Daaammmn… that definitely = MC2


so get out my eye line bitch quit tryin my patience
coz your style equates to nothing like scienctific equations.

Ahahaha, a soft finisher, but you didn’t even need a closer to win this bruh’….

+Strongest Bar
listen p why you dissin me? im spittin free,
and admittedly shittin on your writtens with syllable synchronicity
is drizzle ill?....
or does his pic actually depict his disability and inability
to write the shit he spits as a diss at me with a lil bit of dignity


+Weakest Bar
so get out my eye line bitch quit tryin my patience
coz your style equates to nothing like scienctific equations.


Flow: 5/5
Word Play: 5/5
Content: 4.5/5


(FINAL THESIS)

PYDIZZLE, your flow was incredible, and although you were doing well with attacking Homer, you definitely were attacking the wrong person. You had filler lines in there, which you could have used directed towards CBK, but that’s where you fell short. CBK, might I add, that was very entertaining and a well written verse. The flow was impeaccable, and the word-play was off the meters, you started and proceeded to annihilate Py throughout the whole entire verse, but you finished really weak, but nonetheless you had so much content in there, there was no need to waste your wit and time to finish Py, way to go… my vote… CBK
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well god damn, thats some detailed voting right there... an just in case anybody thinks it... i do not know that guy lol.

MODS CLOSE THIS SHIT UPP! 3-0 CBK, SECOND KO OF THE NIGHT :)
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Nice battle CBK, we should have a rematch sum time later in the future so I can actually beat cuz I knw I can but u get it this time good looks =)

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3-0 CBK Wins

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