Blitz vs. Symbolikull (***BLITZ***)

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Blitz vs. Symbolikull (***BLITZ***)

Post by drunken jesus »

since this is the final round i want intelligent votes, the main aspects are being on topic, and creativity(how you approach writing on the topic)

the contestants will have 'till friday to post an 8 bar verse (16 lines aka a normal length verse in hip hop)

no posting will be allowed by other members until both verses are dropped, all i wanna see is 2 verses and votes unless you're letting your opponent know you aren't going to show

the winner will receive a free custom beat from me 200 rep points, an award in there profile, an article about them on the front page, a 2 week sticky of any thread they made of their choosing, PLUS a first round bye in the next tourney they participate in, the runner-up will get the option to choose who they want to face in the first round of the next tourney they participate in

since its the final round their'll be no KO, the person thats first to get 5 votes is the winner, in addition to listing categorys you must also write a short breakdown of why you think the person you voted for won

the only way a deadline will be extended is if both contestants don't post on time, no showing shouldn't be an issue 5 days is plenty of time to write one verse, and if you know you aren't going to be able to be able to post it on friday have someone that will be around friday to post it for you


THE TOPIC IS:

the president suffers a severe injury and has amnesia, you must describe the world to him without bias (not just whats going on in the US, the entire world)
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Post by drunken jesus »

since the audio tourneys been pushed back i'm giving you two more time on this its only fair, since these tourneys have dragged out so much might as well have the best finals possible

and to further explain the topic, you're DESCRIBING TO THE PRESIDENT the world, whats GOING ON IN THE WORLD

no real heavy thinkings involved just watch CNN for an hour and do a few google searches and you'll be good

you want a vivid THOROUGH description of the world (try to focus on the important things and major issues that the common person would have knowledge of)

you will have TILL TUESDAY NIGHT @ 11:59 PM EST, thats it no more no less

good luck to both contestants

(don't CHECK IN or post random UPPING FOR VERSES freeposts) just post your verses BEFORE the deadline
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

The worlds Nukes could kill humans in the amount of a Billion times 8,
The Feelins Innate how we keep Drillin our Plates over Millions our Weight,

Global Warmin is meltin the Ice Caps inturn the Oceans are Risin above the Sea Level,
The Green House Effect will continue to Destroy the Ozone Layer until we Deplete Metals,

The CO2 release is takin Over the Trees, The USA is usin our Soldiers to Seize,
Other countries oils to burn, makin acid rain killin the habitats is this what we've Chosen to Be,

Prejudice and Racism is Still Alive, anymore any man or any woman could Kill a Guy,
And claim insanity, loss of reality, miss treated and abused to be released witta Pill Subscribed,

Bio-Chemical Warfare used to leave cultures Sodomized, children's eyes left Traumatized,
The Twin Towers, showed that strength could be out powered by this guy Osama's Spies,

On Friday the 13th of April 2029, an Asteroid bigger than Texas will Orbit the Earth for Seven Years,
On April 13th, 2036, theres a chance of a hit or miss, but in this time can all countries help to Engineer,

A Solution, to stop the Conclusion of Life, the end of Humanity, put a halt to Business over Family,
Set pride aside to gain back our truth in Reality, cuz if not will be the first to Witness the Loss of Gravity,

And is this what the World is Comin Too Mr. President…

The U.S. of A rushed into the Iranians, land Containin Em jus to over take their Uraniums,
While Millions suffered from the Loss of Everything, Hurricane Katrina forced them to live ina Stadium…..


This topic was actually hard as fuck IMO, but theres my verse
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I apologize for the trauma Mr. President, I hope you're alright
But allow me to fill you in on the worldly details and shed a lil' light/
The world is a complete disaster and the States are a mess
From one continent to another, Here's the issues that need to be addressed…

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The world spins on a broken axis, Which could be a lude to its inconsistency
Millions are dying at war while others are suffering from poverty and misery/
The united states is dominant, Yet we send all our jobs to Japan
And you're the leader of the free world, So the issues sit in the palm of your hand/
An entire continent suffers from aids and crooked politics
Extremist groups taking innocent hostages and restraining them with bondages/
The word is full of evil things, Chemical weapons made with lithium
But good things happen everyday and form a natural equilibrium/
Many countries around the world donate to other impoverished nations
At the same time you got tragedies like 9/11 and hurricanes causing complications/
I'm not knocking the way you run our country, I'm painting the picture that everyone sees
People abuse the constitution and the biggest rumor is that this is the land of the free/
Gas is to high yet you're siphoning oil out of other countries
And charging your citizens mad money for a liquid the price of honey/
Bombs are dropping and buildings are crumbling, You got men in Iraq dieing for nothing
You should pull out the country, Then at least you'll be looked at as something/
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

Nice Verse, UppIN for the Votin to Commence!!!
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Post by SlickMex »

OK..Both Verses were good..

Symbolikull your flow waschoppy to me..some bars jus didnt do it for me..you had some good ones..n then you had your not so good ones..It was a tough topic so i give u props on doing a good drop..

Blitz
Your whole thing was hot..i liked the intro n u stayed on topic well..u kept ur verse to what's happening today instead of venturing off into the future which Bush prolly wont sweat over it..I think yours flowed better then ghost n the meaning was just better..

Good Job To Both..But My Vote is prettymuch obvious..

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~Symbolikull~ wrote:The worlds Nukes could kill humans in the amount of a Billion times 8,
The Feelins Innate how we keep Drillin our Plates over Millions our Weight,

first lines decent for a set-up bar the billion times 8 don't really make sense though, but you change topic on the second bar so its inneffective, seems like you focused more on multis than the content, cause you wren't saying much with this bar 3/10


Global Warmin is meltin the Ice Caps inturn the Oceans are Risin above the Sea Level,
The Green House Effect will continue to Destroy the Ozone Layer until we Deplete Metals,

first line was going good but the sea levels are rising, the oceans are rising the sea level not rising above the sea level, "deplete metals" seems a lil forced cause deplete isn't a common word used to describe getting rid of something 6/10


The CO2 release is takin Over the Trees, The USA is usin our Soldiers to Seize,
Other countries oils to burn, makin acid rain killin the habitats is this what we've Chosen to Be,

you wen't back and forth with this from, enviroment to iraq to enviroment, but overall it wasn't bad 5/10

Prejudice and Racism is Still Alive, anymore any man or any woman could Kill a Guy,
And claim insanity, loss of reality, miss treated and abused to be released witta Pill Subscribed,

not a bad bar but its not describing the world, its describing the judicial system 4/10

Bio-Chemical Warfare used to leave cultures Sodomized, children's eyes left Traumatized,
The Twin Towers, showed that strength could be out powered by this guy Osama's Spies,

first bar is good, second was going good but the "spies" part was forced considering they didn't really spy on anything 7/10


On Friday the 13th of April 2029, an Asteroid bigger than Texas will Orbit the Earth for Seven Years,
On April 13th, 2036, theres a chance of a hit or miss, but in this time can all countries help to Engineer,

not relevant to anything, cause i said describe issues in the world today, not in the future 2/10

A Solution, to stop the Conclusion of Life, the end of Humanity, put a halt to Business over Family,
Set pride aside to gain back our truth in Reality, cuz if not will be the first to Witness the Loss of Gravity,

this bars good but not really descriptive, its more of a suggestion, and the gravity part doesn't make sense 4/10

And is this what the World is Comin Too Mr. President…

The U.S. of A rushed into the Iranians, land Containin Em jus to over take their Uraniums,
While Millions suffered from the Loss of Everything, Hurricane Katrina forced them to live ina Stadium…..

first bar doesn't make sense, since bush didn't invade iran yet, second bar is worded ass backwards, and describes the past not the current state 5/10
total = 36/80
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by drunken jesus »

~*Blitz*~ wrote: The world spins on a broken axis, Which could be a lude to its inconsistency
Millions are dying at war while others are suffering from poverty and misery/

a little generic and isn't as descriptive as it could be but its pretty good 5/10


The united states is dominant, Yet we send all our jobs to Japan
And you're the leader of the free world, So the issues sit in the palm of your hand/

first bar is good, second bar started off good but the part after the comma was corny 6/10

An entire continent suffers from aids and crooked politics
Extremist groups taking innocent hostages and restraining them with bondages/

first bar is good but the seconds a lil' choppy and the bondages parts a lil forced 5/10


The word is full of evil things, Chemical weapons made with lithium
But good things happen everyday and form a natural equilibrium/

first bars solid, second bars kinda corny 4/10


Many countries around the world donate to other impoverished nations
At the same time you got tragedies like 9/11 and hurricanes causing complications/

first bars good, second bars alright, nothing real special though 5/10


I'm not knocking the way you run our country, I'm painting the picture that everyone sees
People abuse the constitution and the biggest rumor is that this is the land of the free/

this bars decent a pretty good description of the public opinion of the US, 5/10

Gas is to high yet you're siphoning oil out of other countries
And charging your citizens mad money for a liquid the price of honey/

first bars alright, second bars a tad choppy and forced, 4/10


Bombs are dropping and buildings are crumbling, You got men in Iraq dieing for nothing
You should pull out the country, Then at least you'll be looked at as something/

this bar was good but its a tad repetative, you've already described iraq in the verse its pointless to do it again 4/10
36/80 to 38/80, my vote goes to blitz

this was closer than i expected, i thought ghost would take it

ghost - your verse wasn't bad but you changed the subject alot and didn't really get too descriptive and babbled some, you had a good amount of knowledge in bars but some could've been worded better

blitz - your verse was decent, you were also lacking in description and some of your bars were kinda corny but your content was pretty solid, what won it for you is your verse was more consistant and you seemed to focus more on content and getting the point across
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by RH1NO »

ok i read both verse n yes it was close

first off great job too both on a tough topic

sym- good multies agree wit dj about changing the subject wouldnt say babble though just need elaboration imo

blitz- i think you got the topic part like you were actually talking to the president might of been a little more simple .. but bush is the president lol..j/k

vote- blitz
again great job too both
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Post by ~Symbolikull~ »

no offence to blitz i knew this was gonna be hard for both of us, but wasnt the topic about tellin the President about the "World" and whats goin on in it, not the USA....Correct?
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Post by drunken jesus »

no offense to either but both of you talked about the us or the world in general for 3/4 of your verses and didn't really cover any other continents too well, hence why my ratings were so low

oh well, at least the bullshit in this tourney wasn't too bad everybody dropped with-in a reasonable amount of time, the next tourney'll be starting early next month, it'll be a tag tourney
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Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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Post by Onediversekid »

Okiie Both Verses Were Definetly Good.

but Like SlickMex Mentioned Ghost Your Flow Was Extremely Choppy And i really wasnt feeling it man, You Both Seemed To Have Gotten Confused About What THe Topic Was, Like DJ Mentioned, Yoiu DIdnt Cover The Other Continents Very Well, But hey Its All Good.

Blitz- YouR Flow Was Definetly On Point Throughout the Whole Thing, And You Seemed To Stay With The Topic A Bit MOre.
So mY vote Goes To

Blitz!!!

Good Job Both of you!
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Post by Street Pharmacist »

symbolikul u slacked in the flow,but the bars was tight

blitz u had a nice bar structure n nice multiz

both of them where really good but i gotta goo with blitz.

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On Friday the 13th of April 2029, an Asteroid bigger than Texas will Orbit the Earth for Seven Years,
On April 13th, 2036, theres a chance of a hit or miss, but in this time can all countries help to Engineer,

A Solution, to stop the Conclusion of Life, the end of Humanity, put a halt to Business over Family,
Set pride aside to gain back our truth in Reality, cuz if not will be the first to Witness the Loss of Gravity


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At the same time you got tragedies like 9/11 and hurricanes causing complications/
I'm not knocking the way you run our country, I'm painting the picture that everyone sees
People abuse the constitution and the biggest rumor is that this is the land of the free/
Gas is to high yet you're siphoning oil out of other countries
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blitz wins, records updated
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
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