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I go the distance

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Its amazing that you lame men still think you can go the distance
fuck these JV's the PRO'se consistent, I loathe ur flippin

know the words that make you choke when spittin, maybe its the dope ur hittin
too much TIVO? got you thinkin that you sold crack with coke convictions

a close depiction to Pachino, we are suppose to vision you selling Kilos? please, no
I'm on a covert mission, to expose the fiction, my flow is sicker than Ann Coulter pissin

more ridiculous than a one legged solider kicking a bi polar victim
my thoughts are mixed in with 151, and I'm suppose to be sober, drippin

moonshine all over the kitchen, only a fool drives on his own volition
I'm in no condition to ride, this is outrageous, putting the keys inside this old ignition

but I'm courageous, I gave myself sole permission, wasted, I'm still the greatest
follow the Hova religion, your an atheist, I won't even flow with a Christian

the basis because I don't even know a musician who doesn't hold a conviction
I've blacked out on the track, I'm all over it, listen, this scheme is so overwritten

smelling the aroma of vixens, I'm in a coma and twitching from a soma addition
cuz their is so much friction in my arms, my bones arent lifting, even my shoulders splittin

go throw my disk in, this is a piece of cake, without a moment sittin
my opponents dissin, not the same foes as before, oh no it isnt, bring your whole coalition

I wreck crews with cold precision, I know your next moves, you text dudes
log onto windows home edition, searching for your oldest writtens

I have the best news, your folders missin, you coming off the dome like a solar eclipse
in- a second the clips in, the cobras bitten, the supernovas twistin

explodes and hits him, that mediocre dissin don't fly, I'm so persistent like an old guy
so why, do you diss me, when I have no existence, oh my, my foes capricious

my intent is simple, though malicious I know the vicious flows ambitious
at times I control my itches, but fuck the whole religious scene, that we knows fictitious

stoning witches, I'd rather get stoned with bitches, I can show the difference
pastors only goal is digets, gold, and asshole visits, I'll close the business

soon they'll be getting towed on the road to riches when I expose the sickness
they have sunk below the fishes, shit I'm no jehovah witness getting drunk with loaded bitches

my omens wicked, the only thing I put below forgiveness is hoes to blow my thickness
I meant thickness, I could have said dick kids, thats for those soulless midgets

I'm out on parole, 6 months, I stroll to visit every patrol that did it, stole their civic
hold em in it, the windows were rolled and tinted, told them to just hold a minute

I had to behold the physics as I set off the bomb and the car imploded with it
broke the hinges off a bridge and the car landed in the ocean with it

I can't go the distance? I can go as far as the sound on the microphones I spit in
even my tones proficient, my liquor habits alone show I ain't known for quittin

I have to come off the dome and pad, that is why the globe is shiftin
cuz the only jones i have, is to listen to myself rap as long as my earlobes permittin

here goes contrition, I'm covering up my sins and -- I ain't prone to knittin
I go the distance with a heros ambission -- sewn and stitchin

those holes I'm fixin, think deniro meets nixon, my whole soul is rippin, zero restriction
i go the distance, i go the distance, i go the distance
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Re: I go the distance

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Damn, shit is hot. Would make an even hotter audio. Great flow, rhyme schemes were dope as fuck, similies and metas were banging. Definitely a sick drop.
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woo damm the rhyme scheme was dope an nice multies in there really flowed well nice comeback piece deffo still one of the best on here even when ya still about rusty dope shyt mayne
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this was fuckin fire and i don't really read texts too often but u left feed on my audio so its only fair i leave u feed on this... the whole scheme was crazy the way u took one multie n went the rest of the way with it... wow man... good shit homie... u still got it plex
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..this was tha Sickest Drop, I've Seen in Months ..
Nice ass Flow, Multies Were On Point tha Whole Time ..
Man that Shit Makes me wanna Drop Sumptin ..
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then do it up, better yet drop something with me
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know the words that make you choke when spittin, maybe its the dope ur hittin
too much TIVO? got you thinkin that you sold crack with coke convictions
loved dis bar made me lol

I wreck crews with cold precision, I know your next moves, you text dudes
log onto windows home edition, searching for your oldest writtens
was dis a shot a teflon lmao

great drop man i enjoyed readin it man keep dis up bro
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ddddddammmnn homie, one of the illest drops
I've seen on the site thus far, and I've been
here a decent minute, multies, rhyme switch-ups
keeping it ill all the way through with the same
rhyme scheme, shit was rediculous...

"a close depiction to Pachino, we are suppose to vision you selling Kilos? please, no
I'm on a covert mission, to expose the fiction, my flow is sicker than Ann Coulter pissin

more ridiculous than a one legged solider kicking a bi polar victim
my thoughts are mixed in with 151, and I'm suppose to be sober, drippin

moonshine all over the kitchen, only a fool drives on his own volition
I'm in no condition to ride, this is outrageous, putting the keys inside this old ignition

but I'm courageous, I gave myself sole permission, wasted, I'm still the greatest
follow the Hova religion, your an atheist, I won't even flow with a Christian"

^^my favorite shit in the drop, but the whole thing was
nice as fluck, stay droppin' that heat.
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Re: I go the distance

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Sick. Still ur Usual Style But it's Like You've Taken it To The Next Level. Props For Carrying The Same Rhyme Throughout And Keeping The Flow.

Loads Of Trademark Plex in There Like The Random Quips And Punches. a Few Lines Had Double Meanings To Me Like The ignition One, Donno if That Was What u Were Thinking When u Wrote it But it Works. The Solar Eclipse Line Was a Creative Twist To a Punch idea That's Played, And While a Lot Of Bars Skimmed Over Different Subjects Everything Tied in. Was Really Feeling This Keep it Up.
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Yes. That was a double meaning via rapping.
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