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if i was fat id do a belly roll, eat jelly whole cuz im already slow
but im not so i guess all thats left is sex wit extraterrestrials
im freakin starvin kids, so i harvest limbs in apartments with
the walls clothed with loose cartalidge, looks so marvolous
in a basement in-cased with two asians about to get facelifts
run rabbit, as you sprint to hide ur only runnin out my patients
these two patients of mine got lases to tie, im erasen their minds
mase in their eyes, duck taped combined wit rough rape from behind
either im dead or in a coma, im rasiein heck with a persona
regardless, your carcus still tastes delicious with granola
listened to lynard skynard now my middle fingars a “Free Bird”
i punch pregant women and Knock out seniors


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Re: qucikie, feed, dueces

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ugly wrote:if i was fat id do a belly roll, eat jelly whole cuz im already slow
but im not so i guess all thats left is sex wit extraterrestrials
im freakin starvin kids, so i harvest limbs in apartments with
the walls clothed with loose cartalidge, looks so marvolous
in a basement in-cased with two asians about to get facelifts
run rabbit, as you sprint to hide ur only runnin out my patients
these two patients of mine got lases to tie, im erasen their minds
mase in their eyes, duck taped combined wit rough rape from behind
either im dead or in a coma, im rasiein heck with a persona
regardless, your carcus still tastes delicious with granola
listened to lynard skynard now my middle fingars a “Free Bird”
i punch pregant women and Knock out seniors


LINK: http://www.illestlyrics.com/board/topic-vt14172.html
Pretty good for a short horror core verse. Don't take this as offensive, because this guy is one of the best writers on the sight, but this reminded me of Drunken Jesus - a few years back.
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Re: qucikie, feed, dueces

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I'm not a big fan of the Horror core or whatever but that was some pretty ill word play... some of it made me laugh tho
"either im dead or in a coma, im rasiein heck with a persona
regardless, your carcus still tastes delicious with granola"
^^bahaha wtf granola? really?

but it was a good drop to show off some multi's and word play
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