What is it worth if it loves as much as it hurts
It learns from the worst and transmitted with words
Never lessens the urge with intentions it flirts
Exposes the flaws and produces the quirks
I hunger n thirst for its works ta give me plenty
but instead it gave me envy and left me empty
Right where u left me im planting Gently
Advancing and loving myself before any
So when it happens im undoubtely ready
For a commitment like the day of a wedding
the way i was heading was toward an ending
A path full of thorns and with out a machete
Now that im apart im sewing together my heart
Know that its hard living wit a unhealable scar
But im human and im made to move on
Though the weight of drama feels like 2 tons
But im ready to give what i have for my kids
To the one that wins the lack of my rib
Just so we can share n make experiences
Revere my swift ways of play wit a kiss
This a day of cutting the strings to a puppet
Manifest my destiny With nobody above it
U can walk next to me we can explore it
N find where it leads and all of its motives
Show what i had secluded like my love for music
And together find ways to nuture n produce hits
find the key to life,walk thru the door that it opens
n expand our horizons over the surface of oceans
Whos Love
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Re: Whos Love
Dope!!But im ready to give what i have for my kids
To the one that wins the lack of my rib
Just so we can share n make experiences
Revere my swift ways of play wit a kiss
I Like The Metaphors n Multi's Along With Tha Wordplay Here
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Re: Whos Love
What is it worth if it loves as much as it hurts It learns from the worst and transmitted with words Never lessens the urge with intentions it flirts Exposes the flaws and produces the quirks I hunger n thirst for its works ta give me plenty but instead it gave me envy and left me empty Right where u left me im planting Gently Advancing and loving myself before any
Wow... you have no idea how hard this hit me man... fucking WOW. Word for word this is exactly how I feel, see things and exactly what I'm going thru... its like a sign or something man
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Wow... you have no idea how hard this hit me man... fucking WOW. Word for word this is exactly how I feel, see things and exactly what I'm going thru... its like a sign or something man
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I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
I'm often soft like cotton but my message is clear, my words hold weight like "dumbos" ears.
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damn! that what i feel today tho.. so i actually feel this !!
keep it up flipflip floppy!!
keep it up flipflip floppy!!
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Thanks for the peep rip...and deaf....done name play my name....fukah....thanks for peepin tho
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lul sorry keep it up flip!!
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mmm... i really enjoyed this. while i was reading i could imagine a quiet beat in the background maybe some piano. damn son blew my mind.
awesssssome.
awesssssome.
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