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Creative Vs. Loon E Lou
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Re: Creative Vs. Loon E Lou
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Re: Creative Vs. Loon E Lou
Loon E Lou
Nothin' real hard as far as punches. A lot of nice disses. Liked the shout box line at the beginning. You rode the beat well & ya always got a nice delivery. I like how you use emotion, even when most would just rap it, you emphasize shit, which is nice. Overall, pretty good track.
Creative
Beat is too low. Adlibs aint matchin' up or somethin' and it's almost fuckin' up wat you sayin'. Sounds like you readin' ya verse too which is really fuckin' up the emotion part. I didn't think you sounded as comfortable or somethin'. Some of ya lines was nice but the flow was choppy in parts. I noticed how you had to speed up real quick juss to finish a bar and that really threw it off IMO.
Punches - Creative
Disses - Loon E Lou
Delivery - Loon E Lou
Creativity - Loon E Lou
Flow - Loon E Lou
Vote - Loon E Lou
Overall, decent battle yall. Imma start audio battlin' juss cos text is borin' the shit outta me and I need somethin' else to do besides smokin' weed or playin' ball. 1/Out!
Nothin' real hard as far as punches. A lot of nice disses. Liked the shout box line at the beginning. You rode the beat well & ya always got a nice delivery. I like how you use emotion, even when most would just rap it, you emphasize shit, which is nice. Overall, pretty good track.
Creative
Beat is too low. Adlibs aint matchin' up or somethin' and it's almost fuckin' up wat you sayin'. Sounds like you readin' ya verse too which is really fuckin' up the emotion part. I didn't think you sounded as comfortable or somethin'. Some of ya lines was nice but the flow was choppy in parts. I noticed how you had to speed up real quick juss to finish a bar and that really threw it off IMO.
Punches - Creative
Disses - Loon E Lou
Delivery - Loon E Lou
Creativity - Loon E Lou
Flow - Loon E Lou
Vote - Loon E Lou
Overall, decent battle yall. Imma start audio battlin' juss cos text is borin' the shit outta me and I need somethin' else to do besides smokin' weed or playin' ball. 1/Out!
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Re: Creative Vs. Loon E Lou
flow- Loon E, Creative's was koo tho..
punches- Loon E
personals- Loon E
delivery- Loon E stole on this one. the quality, emotion, etc. was just off on creative's track this time around
punches- Loon E
personals- Loon E
delivery- Loon E stole on this one. the quality, emotion, etc. was just off on creative's track this time around
Re: Creative Vs. Loon E Lou
5-0 TKO Loon E Lou Sweeps Creative For Victory
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Good Battle Guys!!! I Like To Hear Audio Battles Are Still Present On Illest!!!!
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