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The Last Ressurection

Post by Ambiguous Realm »

Ok.. been a while since i've done anything lyrical so i figured i'd get back in it and drop some jaws

See-Earth's-a-joke so here's the rebirth-of-Smoke, ain't from a joint but we-heard-ya-choke, now open up ur mind for three-words-to-soak, Death, Ressurect, and Survive.. now citizens fear-today, January 15th..and i'm here-to-stay, Survival of The Fittest and i'm The-Strongest-of-All, even in a criminal society just to belong-is-to-maul, poetic structure given with a-beat-from-thought, on a streak and only defeat-comes-fought, so if ur in the field u fight-to-survive, but against me.. my lyrics pierce right-thru-ur-lives,without regret i let death-appeal,gamble with the breath-of-deal..leave ur wallet clean with nothin left-to-steal, and after dieing i'd ressurect-or have a less-effect-for the rest-of-spectors, no apparitions can leave me tainted i'm strikin-the-fiends, pure gore and destruction...hahah now im likin-the-scenes, plain common sense.. u'd never give a psycho-a-knife, u die to be reborn n face death cuz it's the cycle-of-life.
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Post by Viral »

long time no see cuz...looks like u put some effort..ya still got it...my post was more of a quick freestyle..haha...we gotta get a collab goin...hit me up..peeeace
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Ill shit dawg....u gonna have to let me be yo padawon and get some lessons.

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lmfao

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lol yea i didn't think it was actually n e good at all i just tried to stay on topic for once but ne ways thanks for the feedback(i guess lol) and yea man we can probably just record seperately till next time i go back or if u come here and while we do that we'll just combine it with progs.. i'll get this dj to help me out with that and maybe some beats too

adept.. i charge for lessons now lol.. complex was my last and only free underling(and the only one who actually elevated)..n e ways.. let me know wat u need on AIM- im pretty sure u know it
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Post by 16 Micz »

eh same shit as usual pretty decent but same style n i liked the ending n vocab yes ill give it an 8/10
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Post by drunken jesus »

Not too bad, stayed on topic well, & you're finally straying away from forced multis

7/10
Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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lol lets not talk about force multis but thanks for the umm.. comments and ratings
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Post by complexity »

yah fo real,
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