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DAMN!!!!

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u ever wanted somethin or someone that u couldnt have?

u ever wanted to do somethin or someone u shouldnt have?

ive been down both these roads, jus another hard decision,

i need a angel to watch over my shoulder n guard my vision,

i wish i didnt miss it, but i do n it brings me down, pessimistic!

ur always on my mind i close my eyes i see u whatever is this?

happening to me? to us? but its like a knife stabbing into me,

rather it should be, easy 2 get over but i want u grabbing onto me,

but it feels like the opposite is goin on, ur jus lettin me go!

lettin me fall into this abyss alone in the dark never to know,

what it could be, should be, would be if we went on a journey,

but its jus like life, gave me u? no its like u were sent here to hurt me,

im on my knees, prayin beggin pleedin for my heart to stop bleedin,

ill put my wall up to protect it but still its hard to not need it...

so i jus keep pushin thru n stay strong so i can live my life on,

n i did say ill wait forever... so 4 to find me ill leave a light on....
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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This was cool man, bit of introspective
a bit of dopeness, a nice lil' vibe you given off
I wish it was a bit longer tho', didn't really touch on any emotions
or for me it didn't, but it still had a dope use of flow
the rhymes came together nicely, slick lil' drop tho'
keep it up man!
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Re: DAMN!!!!

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This is also a definite distilled topic...very deep with emotion..some times that dictates the power of thepiece as opposed to multies and technical shit.. i def feel the pain in there..Imean i dunno if this a topical or real to u but it def feels like u had heart behind it... Dope piece bro....
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appreciate the feed fellas and to flip yeah this was personal
i'll smack yuh with rage i force multis outta my ass to the page
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