Demonic Symphonic

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Demonic Symphonic

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crazy jawn with alotta flavor
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Respect this, specialist, black, testing this and get ya necklace jacked
Your after name scratched up off my guestlist, party freak
You the type of nigga that'll hardly speak unless you spoken to
You throw a cold screw but sober up when I'm approaching you
At the same time we postin two niggaz on that ass
Thats gonna do what they supposed to do the limelight
Snatched away from you because its my night
Killarm' blaze hotter than twilight, you better get ya lines right
Half of these crabs cant even rhyme right
[Killa Sin]

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I like this.
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Re: Demonic Symphonic

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crazy jawn with alotta flavor
though it seems the horns go off key a bit here and there, and i'd agree with rugg that a bit more realistic horns could improve it. A bit of a fade out or something at the end would also be nice.

Freekey written to it---
This demonic symphonic, like a sonic blast,
is upon us fast, and I'm all up on it like a cast.
I'll write my sonnets on it, and surpass past
the past that latched its wrath on the path.
I don't need to ask cats, cuz my raps answer that task,
cuz my verbal dance responds to the questions I be on,
and my words are like a lance, stabbin' straight into the answers.
Plans burst from my stance, and they can't hurt cuz I understand what I am,
I'm a man, and I've suffered, but I've buffered my soul clean, damn.
I hold these jams close, fam, and don't fold, no, cuz I can't.
And I never ran, and even when the dams crash, I still stand.
Bam, can you hear the fortitude that is bumpin' through me, dude,
I ain't gonna waver or sink into the blues, and I savor what I do.
My behavior isn't the same as you, cuz that's what I choose.
I hold tight to my blood as it oozes- out with every bump and bruise.
This music's hues hit you if the shoes fit...
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